Return of the Lyrical Assassins feat EYERAP and Master Rock

Mike Wrecka · 11-20-2024, 01:31 AM

First verse - Mike Wrecka
Second verse - EYERAP Third
Third verse - Master Rock Beat

Beat by Killah Prince

@Geno

symetrik · 11-20-2024, 05:20 PM

nice - cool to see the growth already on the audio

Geno · 11-23-2024, 10:39 PM

Ik mike is my boy, and this will seem bias, but i think he murked this shit the hardest. Just smoother than the other cats with better breath control. Second cat was dope to but i could hear the edits where he must have ran out of breath. Obv no one can flow an entire verse like that without breathing anywhwere, maybe try to work on the breath control a bit, beside that the shit was hard. 3rd guy was the weakest link on the verse. Not trash but needs to work on his approach i think

Lyrically sound, beat was fire. Dope shit.

Master Rock · 11-29-2024, 09:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Geno

3rd guy was the weakest link on the verse. Not trash but needs to work on his approach i think

Lyrically sound, beat was fire. Dope shit.

My verse was approached at a different angle. Mike and Eyerap laid down their verses together separately and I worked on this track solo at first. Mike and I, decided to join forces on this track and attempted to make it a package.

Mike Wrecka · 11-29-2024, 08:38 AM

Thanks for the feedback dudes

Uppin

Master Rock · 11-29-2024, 09:03 PM

But the whole track is fire regardless!

11-23-2024, 10:39 PM	#3
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Ik mike is my boy, and this will seem bias, but i think he murked this shit the hardest. Just smoother than the other cats with better breath control. Second cat was dope to but i could hear the edits where he must have ran out of breath. Obv no one can flow an entire verse like that without breathing anywhwere, maybe try to work on the breath control a bit, beside that the shit was hard. 3rd guy was the weakest link on the verse. Not trash but needs to work on his approach i think Lyrically sound, beat was fire. Dope shit. __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

11-29-2024, 08:38 AM	#5
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11-29-2024, 09:03 PM	#6
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11-20-2024, 05:20 PM	#2
symetrik Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 708 Battle Record: 5-7 Rep Power: 12429299	nice - cool to see the growth already on the audio