Burn out

Geno · 05-18-2024, 05:04 AM

Its never enough when i write
My blood, sweat, tears drench cover the mic
Lifes like a page in my book
And births like -ive created the hook
My worst days serving hatred in the booth
I escape within the matrix of the lines
And the rhymes, and the violin is crying
When its silent the violence is hiding
In the tiny pit of my abyss
Basically its taken me depravity to slay a beat
An automated way ive sworn
To take my hatred by the horns
And end this viscious silent war
Inside im torn to pieces
By my demons im releasing
My allegiance and obediance to behemouths
Is leading the ingrediants
Now im readin deaper into science
And the mayans..
And applying it to why i live with failue
Im sailing in the back of this cadalac
Reminiscent of the past
Preminitions coming fast
Red light, yellow light, green light
Speeding like a bat out of hell and skerrrrt
Mad at my hell on earth
This is why im quiet
Im efficient while my mind is at a distance
Its a kind of wisdom while my third eye glistens
I will judge not by the news
Only facts, only truths
Only what i know is not baloney
Not below me to be lonely
Ive been homeless
Ive been known as just a bad chromosome
And the road homes lonely as i go
As i go.... fuck it
Ive been on the brink of my destruction
Drinkin, drugs, runnin guns
And ive come to believe
What you thinks what you breed in the streets
And the reason its unique
As a people we concieve different evils in defeat
And react with a fabric
That happens to clash with a modernized fashion
Id rather wear a bag, with a sag and a tear
And despair is my personal apparel
Im careful to share with the world what i learned
Its a whirlwind of burns
And it turns out...
That im burned out yall
I think im burned out

Mr. J · 08-13-2024, 05:23 PM

You know I like vibing to your drops when I see them..
Reminds me of some old Jedi Mind Tricks type shit.
That freeflow hits different when you read through other stuff
Enjoyed this up until baloney. Shit is hard to make worth seeing in a rhyme..
Idk man this was dope either way.

Witty · 08-22-2024, 04:58 AM

Geno has BEEN top tier.

This was as enjoyable and as impressive as ever my friend. Your cadence is effortless and your talent as a wordsmith is something that doesn't get enough credit.

Thank you for the read.

ACTIVATE SELF · 08-23-2024, 12:29 AM

I was fully invested from the start. It kept getting better and better the more I read. Classic Geno— raw, honest, vivid and worded to perfection.

05-18-2024, 05:04 AM	#1
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Burn out Its never enough when i write My blood, sweat, tears drench cover the mic Lifes like a page in my book And births like -ive created the hook My worst days serving hatred in the booth I escape within the matrix of the lines And the rhymes, and the violin is crying When its silent the violence is hiding In the tiny pit of my abyss Basically its taken me depravity to slay a beat An automated way ive sworn To take my hatred by the horns And end this viscious silent war Inside im torn to pieces By my demons im releasing My allegiance and obediance to behemouths Is leading the ingrediants Now im readin deaper into science And the mayans.. And applying it to why i live with failue Im sailing in the back of this cadalac Reminiscent of the past Preminitions coming fast Red light, yellow light, green light Speeding like a bat out of hell and skerrrrt Mad at my hell on earth This is why im quiet Im efficient while my mind is at a distance Its a kind of wisdom while my third eye glistens I will judge not by the news Only facts, only truths Only what i know is not baloney Not below me to be lonely Ive been homeless Ive been known as just a bad chromosome And the road homes lonely as i go As i go.... fuck it Ive been on the brink of my destruction Drinkin, drugs, runnin guns And ive come to believe What you thinks what you breed in the streets And the reason its unique As a people we concieve different evils in defeat And react with a fabric That happens to clash with a modernized fashion Id rather wear a bag, with a sag and a tear And despair is my personal apparel Im careful to share with the world what i learned Its a whirlwind of burns And it turns out... That im burned out yall I think im burned out __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est* Last edited by Geno; 05-19-2024 at 04:15 AM.

08-13-2024, 05:23 PM	#2
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	You know I like vibing to your drops when I see them.. Reminds me of some old Jedi Mind Tricks type shit. That freeflow hits different when you read through other stuff Enjoyed this up until baloney. Shit is hard to make worth seeing in a rhyme.. Idk man this was dope either way. __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

08-22-2024, 04:58 AM	#3
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Geno has BEEN top tier. This was as enjoyable and as impressive as ever my friend. Your cadence is effortless and your talent as a wordsmith is something that doesn't get enough credit. Thank you for the read. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.