Noodle- Gimme Yo (super rough draft)

Badweather · 08-31-2013, 11:04 PM

https://soundcloud.com/newdle-1/gimme-yo

yeah, my next project...you hear me clear my throat and everything

Badweather · 08-31-2013, 11:20 PM

re-recording with the right intensity and wiggling in some adlibs tomorrow

Geno · 08-31-2013, 11:21 PM

you went in on that shit though, feel like you have the right tone, but i feel like you could flow it different for more impact, if that makes sense.

ill draft thus far

Pent uP · 08-31-2013, 11:26 PM

Seconded on genos comments

Badweather · 08-31-2013, 11:34 PM

still the rough draft, gentlemen. threw it together today...tomorrow's a day of editing and re-writing

thanks for peeping the first step though

Badweather · 09-01-2013, 10:23 AM

Up

Badweather · 09-01-2013, 04:30 PM

No?

08-31-2013, 11:04 PM	#1
Badweather Chillin' like FUCK!!! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,850 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	Noodle- Gimme Yo (super rough draft) https://soundcloud.com/newdle-1/gimme-yo yeah, my next project...you hear me clear my throat and everything __________________ Chill Phil My rep hand is NOT WAY strong anymore.

08-31-2013, 11:20 PM	#2
Badweather Chillin' like FUCK!!! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,850 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	re-recording with the right intensity and wiggling in some adlibs tomorrow __________________ Chill Phil My rep hand is NOT WAY strong anymore.

08-31-2013, 11:21 PM	#3
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	you went in on that shit though, feel like you have the right tone, but i feel like you could flow it different for more impact, if that makes sense. ill draft thus far __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

08-31-2013, 11:34 PM	#5
Badweather Chillin' like FUCK!!! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,850 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	still the rough draft, gentlemen. threw it together today...tomorrow's a day of editing and re-writing thanks for peeping the first step though __________________ Chill Phil My rep hand is NOT WAY strong anymore.

09-01-2013, 10:23 AM	#6
Badweather Chillin' like FUCK!!! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,850 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	Up __________________ Chill Phil My rep hand is NOT WAY strong anymore.

08-31-2013, 11:26 PM	#4
Pent uP Robin Williams of Fallen Victims Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,499 Battle Record: 25-11 Accomplishments - NC Hall of Fame Champed - Netcees Writers League (2x) - NWL Season 1 - Write Night I - Art of Writing League (2x) - Write Week IV Rep Power: 6862275	Seconded on genos comments

09-01-2013, 04:30 PM	#7
Badweather Chillin' like FUCK!!! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,850 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	No? __________________ Chill Phil My rep hand is NOT WAY strong anymore.