Rough draft of a track I’m working on..would appreciate critique

Adverse · 12-16-2020, 05:31 PM

https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/02...4-501ac5b31de6

Hey guys it’s been five years since I put something out so thought I’d take some notes before I even attempted to. I know stuff like the mix isn’t great and the recording but I’m looking for a que on more technical stuff like delivery and lyrics etc. I may find a better recording area but as for equipment this is the best I’m going to do. Rough mix just so I can get some ideas from y’all. Absolutely trash it if you have to

12-16-2020, 05:31 PM	#1
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Rough draft of a track I’m working on..would appreciate critique https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/02...4-501ac5b31de6 Hey guys it’s been five years since I put something out so thought I’d take some notes before I even attempted to. I know stuff like the mix isn’t great and the recording but I’m looking for a que on more technical stuff like delivery and lyrics etc. I may find a better recording area but as for equipment this is the best I’m going to do. Rough mix just so I can get some ideas from y’all. Absolutely trash it if you have to