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Old 08-18-2020, 04:49 PM   #1
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Oh. There is of course
Nothing to be said
About the poetry you translate to in my head.
I could compare it to the ocean rushing against lonely coral.
And that could be enough read.
But you'd never understand.
How the ocean reaches out its hand and offers the reef relief. Even if a small caress of current.
It's a lost conscious thought.
The love the water has for the beautiful rock.
Lifeless as it is. Unmovable as the rock is, the ocean rejoices in it's stillness. The constantly moving ocean.
Finds waves guide its still motion, whispers of peace in the stillness. In time finding the strength to move the rock an inch. Then two. And throughout time the water and coral have gone miles. Have gone nowhere and are forever together moving in a motionless dance.
So there is of course. Nothing to be said.
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Old 08-18-2020, 11:33 PM   #2
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Cool.
Pretty beautiful scenic shit
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Old 08-19-2020, 09:08 AM   #3
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Yeah word, this was straight bro...like Geno said it visually hit.Only thing I wasn't feelin' was this line - 'About the poetry you translate to in my head' thought the word usage could be upped or sumthin', maybe I just read it wrong my bad...

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Old 08-19-2020, 05:46 PM   #4
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Pretty cool shit. Ocean and rock stuff is usually played af but you flipped it in a fresh and moving way imo. Bittersweet poem in my eyes, defo a good read.
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I guess I said translate to in my head to express more of a deeper understanding. Speaking as a soul or an energy speaks in the language of frequency and without actual thought only the understanding. I used poetry to be the equal of a language of it's own. I couldn't express that in a few words or a line so I filled it with a summary. Thank you so kindly for your feedback and thoughts. :) Certainly appreciate them.
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Old 08-24-2020, 09:16 AM   #6
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Sounds like one of those haikus you write in Ghost of Tsushima
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