07-16-2019, 11:42 PM | #1 |
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Innovator vs Wanderer - WANDERER WINS
BA Summer League @Innovator @Wanderer
Due Thursday, July 18th Minimum - 6 lines Max - 10 lines Line limit can increase if both agree 24hr ext to be granted by opponent NO biting NO swaying NO feeding Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit or match the first to drop |
07-17-2019, 12:21 AM | #2 |
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07-17-2019, 02:28 AM | #3 |
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07-18-2019, 03:55 AM | #4 |
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catch a beating & have a tantrum. truly, u amaze
Leave u with more rings on ur face than a teenager going thru a phaze I’m a thrill seeker so the barrel roll before I smoke this guy Arms up. hear a click ‘fore ur heads jolting back.. Rollercoaster ride & ur girl only need make up when I slap her face during menstration My Palm destroying so much natural beauty, I call it a sugar plantation U a beast facing me?! Real animals die by my hand, please don’t 2 barrels to the back of ur neck.. Feel the heat over ur shoulders like a mink coat |
07-19-2019, 10:46 PM | #5 |
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LAST WEEK BLUE STOMPED YOU, WONT TAKE MUCH TO BLOW BY YOU NIGGA IM NICE
LET THE K AIR EM OUT, IT AINT HOCKEY WHEN THE STICK LEAVES YOU ON ICE! 30 AUT’ll DROWN U IN BLOOD...HOLD MY CALLS LET ME SPRAY THAT GUN A WIZZARD WITH THE TRIGGER, NO HARRY POTTER WHEN I WAVE TO WAND PUSSY! ILL SLIDE IN YO PITCH LIKE FIRST BASE, MAKE YOU RAISE THE BABY ILL TELL HER TO LIE AND HAVE YOU CONVINCED ITS YOURS LIKE AN EPISODE OF MAURY NIGGA I AINT NOTHING SWEET, PUNCH YAH TEETH, KNEE TO YAH GUT LEAVE YAH MIDSECTION WEEK SEND BULLETS TO YAH TEAM, SCOPE WITH THE BEAM...PROPOSE DEATH WHEN I PUT A RED DOT TO YAH DOME PIECE!!! |
07-20-2019, 07:45 PM | #6 |
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Wanderer that roller coasters line? Yes indeed. Thought the wave to wand line from
Inno was cool. Blue had a line similar last week I think so it wasn’t as impactful but still my fav line from ur verse. Thought the roller coaster line was original & ether though, I’m giving this to Wand V/Wanderer |
07-21-2019, 09:32 PM | #7 |
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catch a beating & have a tantrum. truly, u amaze
Leave u with more rings on ur face than a teenager going thru a phaze light but okay I’m a thrill seeker so the barrel roll before I smoke this guy Arms up. hear a click ‘fore ur heads jolting back.. Rollercoaster ride interesting & ur girl only need make up when I slap her face during menstration My Palm destroying so much natural beauty, I call it a sugar plantation lost me here... slap her face during menstruation? I barely had focus for the basic palm flip lmaoo U a beast facing me?! Real animals die by my hand, please don’t 2 barrels to the back of ur neck.. Feel the heat over ur shoulders like a mink coat like this concept a lot LAST WEEK BLUE STOMPED YOU, WONT TAKE MUCH TO BLOW BY YOU NIGGA IM NICE LET THE K AIR EM OUT, IT AINT HOCKEY WHEN THE STICK LEAVES YOU ON ICE! okay 30 AUT’ll DROWN U IN BLOOD...HOLD MY CALLS LET ME SPRAY THAT GUN A WIZZARD WITH THE TRIGGER, NO HARRY POTTER WHEN I WAVE TO WAND Gun/Wand doesn't rhyme. Blue literally had the harry potter flip against him last week and it was better so it's hard to call this effective... and 'wave to wand' doesn't work both ways, I think PUSSY! ILL SLIDE IN YO PITCH LIKE FIRST BASE, MAKE YOU RAISE THE BABY ILL TELL HER TO LIE AND HAVE YOU CONVINCED ITS YOURS LIKE AN EPISODE OF MAURY not really wordplay so much as a reference NIGGA I AINT NOTHING SWEET, PUNCH YAH TEETH, KNEE TO YAH GUT LEAVE YAH MIDSECTION WEEK SEND BULLETS TO YAH TEAM, SCOPE WITH THE BEAM...PROPOSE DEATH WHEN I PUT A RED DOT TO YAH DOME PIECE!!! RHYMING BARS, FLYING CARS, BUY CIGARS WITH IRON JARS v/wanderer |
07-22-2019, 03:17 AM | #8 |
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I wasn’t so keen on “rings” felt that was kinda a reach tbh
didn’t like the execution of rollercoaster natural beauty/sugar plant was nice mink coat was nice and slightly obscure too Inno needed more with the hockey line, similar with the Wand line to me, Maury and the closer lost any kinda momentum you had really Vote - Wand |
07-22-2019, 02:15 PM | #9 |
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Rings was cool... rollercoaster was a dope concept just didn’t execute it right
Palm sugar plantation was dope imo wasn’t a fan of your closer Inno that hockey bar been done a million ways wave to wand could have been dope with a different angle.. Maury could have been dope but baby and Maury don’t even rhyme.. Not a fan of your closer Vote wand had more hits |
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