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Nothing to think about
I want to read something that causes psychedelic effects
Mind bending, altering my perspective of the u-and-eye-verse Pluck the divine strings of change, release the frequency from which we came A person: a vehicle in which sound moves through Is it true Am eye hue-man? Depends on the view Cause my blue and your blue can never be disproved Mood: how I feel when I’m in tuned with the universal melody Heavenly Devilish Counterintuitive concepts That consume logic Defy reason Yet give meaning to life I’ve been meaning to write New commandments 1. Be free 2. Reject fear 3. All things are possible 4. Lend an ear 5. Your subconscious is Gospel 6. Believe in magic 7. Nothing is real 8. Time is > than money 9. Stop paying bills 10. Rebel, at all cost After the fall comes death, but rebirth is certain I know you, like I, have been hurting Desperately in search of God Where is he/she? Got a mirror? Things couldn’t be clearer Vampiric reflections are not a thing Just a social construct...like racism The hate you give You may receive ten fold So be bold in the face of.... Never mind you’ll burn that bridge when you cross it I am not clever No, I’m just a single flaming feather lighting fires in Egypt The Phoenix rises Please be advised if You really wish to fly You must first learn to glide, Ic The Sun is not your son Respected it Mother Earth is not your trash bin Protect it Her... Oh, you know what I mean Fuck it....
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07-13-2019, 08:19 PM
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Well...
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07-14-2019, 07:19 AM
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Sorry can't quote as I'm on my pathetic phone...Thoght your probably first 8 lines were dope, You have this awesome ability to use words with imagery that really resonates fam...Your intellect is second to none...
Really apologize for not bein' able to highlight parts I wanted ;/ God bless... Last edited by Exis; 07-14-2019 at 07:21 AM. |
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07-18-2019, 06:00 PM
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damn I liked your word selection and loved the imagery and the whole omniscient feeling of this piece. I'll definitely be looking for more of your word. dope stuff man.
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07-20-2019, 02:37 PM
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wtf, this is hella dope.. liked it alot man
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07-20-2019, 03:53 PM
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Isn’t this old?
I think I fed this already.
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Thank you for the read/feed ppls. It’s much appreciated.
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Just a thought
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