Allen Knight vs BodySnatcher - BODY WINS

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SOL Season 1
Wk 2

Due Thursday, Jan 31st

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[BodySnatcher]

Air MAX 95's

[Allen Knight]

In goin 12.

[Allen Knight]

Need ext wont be able to drop tilll morning.

[BodySnatcher]

Word. I'll be dropping then too.

[Allen Knight]

u ever being ranked #1's a JOKE..

get off'd w/ the uzi faggot cuz shells abusin u is vital
i ain't throwin Caltrops but this metal is stoppin u from cruisin to the title
ur the cornest poster & these hands homi victims
fuck Bodyboarding a hook'll send'em slidin across the floor like a tsunami hit'em
u ain't squat pussy...run & i'll pop the mac at ya head
u'll neva see 'Snatch Lift' the iron he jus catches metal to the back of the neck
stick lines? ur butt buddys JB & Dyn'll vote, they help this disgrace
S'like ur bars sent from a Selfie Stick cuz yah'll should shot urselfs in the face
tone it down faggot or the uzi sparyin, it's merkin doubts
wen u wash up on a Beachbody ur ripped up chest won't be from workin out
ur slut was fuckin everyone raw quick , she was up in the halls sick
had that bitch on a train gettin stamped in the face like we headin to Auschwitz

[BodySnatcher]

Nobody's laughing.


DMS neva heard ‘gun’s bark’ but that won’t be fiction soon,
Cuz Allen’s gonna see these ‘dogs at his temple’ like an Egyptian tomb
Fuck Knight riders...my G’s will blast till this bastards gone,
There’ll be lights flashing on both sides of his whip like the hazards on
N if we takin shots...I could let this nigga hold a free throw,
But he’d still leave w/a ‘Pacer in his heart’ like fans prayin 4 Victor Oladipo
The tool will leave ur brain damage...that’s how I cop clout,
I’ma leave u w/more ‘Oregon’s failing’ than Portland students that drop-out
For the record I aint w/ the ‘Drama’...I’ma let the K spray,
Then I’ma do a drive-by w/a ‘Streetsweeper’ AFTER I let the Kay Slay
I sense Hispanic...Ur over the hill & wall...but it’s fine dork,
Ur life’s a ‘running joke’...cuz to u ’cross-country’ is a ‘borderline sport’

[Flow]

Aight. Body...

Dogs at his temple is solid.
Hazards on ok
Sorry don't get reference on that one
This was light but creative
Kay slay ok
Closer is dope

Phones dying. I'll do aks break down when home.

But on off chance I don't get back in time.

I'm voting ak

[Sinacog]

Allen Knight -

get off'd w/ the uzi faggot cuz shells abusin u is vital
i ain't throwin Caltrops but this metal is stoppin u from cruisin to the title

This was cool..needed a wordplay to put it over the top..but as it is? It was okay..niice..

ur the cornest poster & these hands homi victims
fuck Bodyboarding a hook'll send'em slidin across the floor like a tsunami hit'em

This was pretty cool..nice incorporated wordplay..was fine and nice..coool bar..

u ain't squat pussy...run & i'll pop the mac at ya head
u'll neva see 'Snatch Lift' the iron he jus catches metal to the back of the neck

This was nice and smooth..this is what you aim for..pun intended..niice one..

stick lines? ur butt buddys JB & Dyn'll vote, they help this disgrace
S'like ur bars sent from a Selfie Stick cuz yah'll should shot urselfs in the face

This is your best bar so far imo..good smooth wordplay..with good wording..nice

tone it down faggot or the uzi sparyin, it's merkin doubts
wen u wash up on a Beachbody ur ripped up chest won't be from workin out

This could've been smoother..but this was cool and decent..assured

ur slut was fuckin everyone raw quick , she was up in the halls sick
had that bitch on a train gettin stamped in the face like we headin to Auschwitz

Cool..clean bar..very good here..niice one..good for a closer..


Bodysnatcher -


DMS neva heard ‘gun’s bark’ but that won’t be fiction soon,
Cuz Allen’s gonna see these ‘dogs at his temple’ like an Egyptian tomb

Pretty dope bar..enjoyed it..was good..good rhymes here..

Fuck Knight riders...my G’s will blast till this bastards gone,
There’ll be lights flashing on both sides of his whip like the hazards on

Nice one here..I could dig this..cool bar..

N if we takin shots...I could let this nigga hold a free throw,
But he’d still leave w/a ‘Pacer in his heart’ like fans prayin 4 Victor Oladipo

Cool rhymes..punch was decent..I've seen pacer wordplays before..but this was okay..

The tool will leave ur brain damage...that’s how I cop clout,
I’ma leave u w/more ‘Oregon’s failing’ than Portland students that drop-out

This was probably your weakest bar..could be better in ways..but it was decent

For the record I aint w/ the ‘Drama’...I’ma let the K spray,
Then I’ma do a drive-by w/a ‘Streetsweeper’ AFTER I let the Kay Slay

This was cool and okay..I could dig this..

I sense Hispanic...Ur over the hill & wall...but it’s fine dork,
Ur life’s a ‘running joke’...cuz to u ’cross-country’ is a ‘borderline sport’

Really nice one here..I dug this a lot..good bar here..

Overall - to me this was a good battle..both had good punches..Allen Knight's Selfie stick line and closer were cool..Bodysnatcher's Egyptian line and cross country line were also good..nice battle here..but I have to go with Bodysnatcher..he had the better lines here and there..niice..

V/ Bodysnatcher

[Zaddy]

get off'd w/ the uzi faggot cuz shells abusin u is vital
i ain't throwin Caltrops but this metal is stoppin u from cruisin to the title
decent here
ur the cornest poster & these hands homi victims
fuck Bodyboarding a hook'll send'em slidin across the floor like a tsunami hit'em
decent again here, this one more of a played concept
u ain't squat pussy...run & i'll pop the mac at ya head
u'll neva see 'Snatch Lift' the iron he jus catches metal to the back of the neck
nah
stick lines? ur butt buddys JB & Dyn'll vote, they help this disgrace
S'like ur bars sent from a Selfie Stick cuz yah'll should shot urselfs in the face
cmon you know selfie stick is played man, decent at best
tone it down faggot or the uzi sparyin, it's merkin doubts
wen u wash up on a Beachbody ur ripped up chest won't be from workin out
alright not bad
ur slut was fuckin everyone raw quick , she was up in the halls sick
had that bitch on a train gettin stamped in the face like we headin to Auschwitz
lol dope


Vs


DMS neva heard ‘gun’s bark’ but that won’t be fiction soon,
Cuz Allen’s gonna see these ‘dogs at his temple’ like an Egyptian tomb
shhhh fire
Fuck Knight riders...my G’s will blast till this bastards gone,
There’ll be lights flashing on both sides of his whip like the hazards on
damn, good again
N if we takin shots...I could let this nigga hold a free throw,
But he’d still leave w/a ‘Pacer in his heart’ like fans prayin 4 Victor Oladipo
nice
The tool will leave ur brain damage...that’s how I cop clout,
I’ma leave u w/more ‘Oregon’s failing’ than Portland students that drop-out
bit played but still a decent flip
For the record I aint w/ the ‘Drama’...I’ma let the K spray,
Then I’ma do a drive-by w/a ‘Streetsweeper’ AFTER I let the Kay Slay
ok ok
I sense Hispanic...Ur over the hill & wall...but it’s fine dork,
Ur life’s a ‘running joke’...cuz to u ’cross-country’ is a ‘borderline sport’
i like the idea but it fell flat for me


Bit surprised here, felt like Allen was gonna bring the business like last week but idk I felt like most of his verse was rushed. On the other hand, Body care with some dope shit, had 3 haymakers back to back. I’ve got BodySnatcher taking this pretty smoothly.


Vote BodySnatcher

[DynamiCz]

get off'd w/ the uzi faggot cuz shells abusin u is vital
i ain't throwin Caltrops but this metal is stoppin u from cruisin to the title

Nice opener here!

ur the cornest poster & these hands homi victims
fuck Bodyboarding a hook'll send'em slidin across the floor like a tsunami hit'em

This was fiya here!

u ain't squat pussy...run & i'll pop the mac at ya head
u'll neva see 'Snatch Lift' the iron he jus catches metal to the back of the neck

Ehh, this was coo, the execution alittle light, but its still coo

stick lines? ur butt buddys JB & Dyn'll vote, they help this disgrace
S'like ur bars sent from a Selfie Stick cuz yah'll should shot urselfs in the face

Lol funny jab here imo! Think the self stick part could have been worded a little better but me personally I don't have no problem with this!

tone it down faggot or the uzi sparyin, it's merkin doubts
wen u wash up on a Beachbody ur ripped up chest won't be from workin out

Nahhh, wasn't feeling this one

ur slut was fuckin everyone raw quick , she was up in the halls sick
had that bitch on a train gettin stamped in the face like we headin to Auschwitz

Fiya closer!

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DMS neva heard ‘gun’s bark’ but that won’t be fiction soon,
Cuz Allen’s gonna see these ‘dogs at his temple’ like an Egyptian tomb

Fiya opener here!

Fuck Knight riders...my G’s will blast till this bastards gone,
There’ll be lights flashing on both sides of his whip like the hazards on

Another nice hit again! Simple, but effective!

if we takin shots...I could let this nigga hold a free throw,
But he’d still leave w/a ‘Pacer in his heart’ like fans prayin 4 Victor Oladipo

This was nice

The tool will leave ur brain damage...that’s how I cop clout,
I’ma leave u w/more ‘Oregon’s failing’ than Portland students that drop-out

Ehhh, not really feeling this one

For the record I aint w/ the ‘Drama’...I’ma let the K spray,
Then I’ma do a drive-by w/a ‘Streetsweeper’ AFTER I let the Kay Slay

This was nice!

I sense Hispanic...Ur over the hill & wall...but it’s fine dork,
Ur life’s a ‘running joke’...cuz to u ’cross-country’ is a ‘borderline sport’

Ehhh, this was ok for a closer


Nice matchup here from both ends, no complaints on either verse its just about who came out swinging the hardest this match. I got Body overall with the more crucial hits. Good shit to both tho!

V-Body

[Saint]

[QUOTE=BodySnatcher;724782]Nobody's laughing.


DMS neva heard ‘gun’s bark’ but that won’t be fiction soon,
Cuz Allen’s gonna see these ‘dogs at his temple’ like an Egyptian tomb

-cool opener....seen temple lines but never seen this iirc
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Fuck Knight riders...my G’s will blast till this bastards gone,
There’ll be lights flashing on both sides of his whip like the hazards on

-i'd love to see this reworded....not bad

N if we takin shots...I could let this nigga hold a free throw,
But he’d still leave w/a ‘Pacer in his heart’ like fans prayin 4 Victor Oladipo

cool, no misses so far

The tool will leave ur brain damage...that’s how I cop clout,
I’ma leave u w/more ‘Oregon’s failing’ than Portland students that drop-out

i didnt care for the oregon play

For the record I aint w/ the ‘Drama’...I’ma let the K spray,
Then I’ma do a drive-by w/a ‘Streetsweeper’ AFTER I let the Kay Slay

same

I sense Hispanic...Ur over the hill & wall...but it’s fine dork,
Ur life’s a ‘running joke’...cuz to u ’cross-country’ is a ‘borderline sport’

hispanic is old, not feeling tie une

[Quote]
get off'd w/ the uzi faggot cuz shells abusin u is vital
i ain't throwin Caltrops but this metal is stoppin u from cruisin to the title

- hmm felt it needed more here

ur the cornest poster & these hands homi victims
fuck Bodyboarding a hook'll send'em slidin across the floor like a tsunami hit'em

-ok....not the freshest bodyboarding. wording is good enough

u ain't squat pussy...run & i'll pop the mac at ya head
u'll neva see 'Snatch Lift' the iron he jus catches metal to the back of the neck

- two metal lines, i like the snatch lift but not so much the meta tie-in

stick lines? ur butt buddys JB & Dyn'll vote, they help this disgrace
S'like ur bars sent from a Selfie Stick cuz yah'll should shot urselfs in the face

- selfie stick nahh

tone it down faggot or the uzi sparyin, it's merkin doubts
wen u wash up on a Beachbody ur ripped up chest won't be from workin out

- think its a bit played. wording is good tho

ur slut was fuckin everyone raw quick , she was up in the halls sick
had that bitch on a train gettin stamped in the face like we headin to Auschwitz

- lol i fk within

pretty close, ak wording vs bs consistent solid jabs.

V body

[Blue Bayou]

Will edit once I get to my laptop

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4-1 up closing tonight