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The Landlord
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text is mine now, murder everything in the ring before i climb down
the audience, the lobbyists, all you see is bodies when u sign out ima remind clowns, when respect is done, necks get strung im wreckless, my breakfast, is a fucking peasants lung let aero brag about banks, till his bodies found floating next ta one dont know what you expected son, tired of the laugh shit this aint for show faggot, n i dont fuck wit that sho faggot just cuz he fucked 2 dudes, it dont make this hoe savage my flows lavish, the thrones had it, ima expose whackness a bunch of pussies pretending to be dicks, we got our own catfish no theatrics, we culd go bags less,i bet jail'd trip ya out when the only bars u ever been behind, is the ones in nika's mouth you know what this about, no insane twists, or lame spits just a straight diss, that'll get you scalped where ur brain sits metts is the new mario brothers, stuck in the past where there game is joes gotta be luigi, since his green ass is envious of eryone whose made it im tha greatest, cats get flatlined, u dudes is past prime n tyson aint raping no one, its to fucking late for juice n nap time never drop a whack rhyme, when i turn the net on its over i aint trying to win,im trying to rip the fucking head off your shoulders haahhaha its bars over bullshit, im trying to rip the heart out you cool kids acting like a SNITCH, makes it easy to disregard what u fools did time for school bitch, to rip out ur spine is my mission i just finished watching bleach, n striks got that shit on ice in his kitchen fuck the nicest intentions, i want to see all you whores dead if u are top ten, we are not friends, all i see is a fucking bullseye on ur forhead u aint seen the mind of war yet, ima correct how these faggots act you claim loyalty, then turn out more crooked the patricks back lace this whole track with facts, this is not hype allen knights just mad, cuz the leafblower came from his jobs site i let bombs fly, lines clean, u cant follow my scheme rawn'll stalk n rape a bitch, then run forensics on his own crime scene dont fuck wit my team, pancake'll get ur throat dawg this shit went from competition, to handshakes and blowjobs beef? no mas, these cats is always scared n quittin champions dont stop, at the top, they maintain n hold there positions but u dudes is to arrogant to listen,all thats lost is respect so fuck it, while u clown in discussions, i got the pen takin shots at ur neck |
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Been On One
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time for school bitch, to rip out ur spine is my mission
i just finished watching bleach, n striks got that shit on ice in his kitchen wooooooooo shit was fia @God Of War |
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The Landlord
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ty sir
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nok Su kow
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Nice to see a drop from you bro.
Don't know if this was srs or on that lamar tip but it had its moments and flow was cool too can't front was expecting some misplaced letters but you seem to have kicked that habit since you been changing the up-the-back-blow-outs.. Maybe a little humbling ? Good jobs !
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this was dope GOW.
ima remind clowns, when respect is done, necks get strung im wreckless, my breakfast, is a fucking peasants lung nice i let bombs fly, lines clean, u cant follow my scheme rawn'll stalk n rape a bitch, then run forensics on his own crime scene this was lulz nice piece , good flow throughout. good multis. shameless plug time. join the WCL .
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this was fucking grimey. ill ass diss piece gow. fucking inspirational to say the least. CONTROL text like shit
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Rawn line went hard as fuck lmao
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well done g.o.dub. flow was smooth throughout "flows lavish" -nice word. good punches. some pretty good wordplays. this was solid no doubt, coulda used a tad more vocab/intri***y in scheming if we're getting picky but i have no complaints here, good drop
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The Landlord
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Precise it eryone ima get to peeping some shit in the on today and leaving feed
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Damn bruh good ta see ya droppin haymakers still lol too many bars ta quote tbh but the flow was clean. This pretty much exactly wat a real diss verse is supposed ta be. Good shit my dude
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This was nice I enjoyed the flow the multis werr strung along nicelu
Good work all around I would quote but I'm on my phone a lot of great lines though keep writing
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This was dope, lmaoo at the rawn line
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fuck the nicest intentions, i want to see all you whores dead
if u are top ten, we are not friends, all i see is a fucking bullseye on ur forhead yup |
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