06-18-2018, 10:41 AM | #1 |
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WK7: Lenox 2-2 vs. Bongo Bear 2-0 - Lenox WINS!!
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE @Lenox @Bongo Bear |
06-18-2018, 12:25 PM | #2 |
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06-18-2018, 10:37 PM | #3 |
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06-20-2018, 07:36 AM | #5 |
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Jon hit me up on kik, “You have a track I could keep?” “...”
I’m not sure what I expected, when he ‘asked to get beat’. “Can I have it for free? I wrote up a flame chorus!” Homie had me vengeful, like “YOU’RE GONNA PAY FOR THIS!!!” Told em, “Push some snow on the street!”, “Like winter lawn work?” “Nah, it means if ‘L.E.N aint breaking out ‘Kane’, I’m gettin ‘John Hurt!’” The mag said I would lose? I’m taking 3 with this fight. Cred knew Len’s crew is dead; a ‘Killing Spree on his side. Grizz n’ Triple made mistakes by thinking i’m real stupid like Wild Bill in Green Mile; John's executed in these bars right after I killed two kids. It ain't a John the Baptist bible - this a boxing match for titles; ‘bear’ll be quick to shoot those rounds’ like i'm a automatic rifle. Black said, “I gotta stick by your side like a loyal friend” I thought, “Ofcourse that shit was flame- but if I was Black; I'd never be friends with this wannabe gangbanger who appropriates the slang.” You left kik for netcees, you think DMS or Teddy care? You’re too fat to fit in jeans, what made your ugly ass think that you'd fit in, anywhere? Last edited by Bongo Bear; 06-21-2018 at 12:39 AM. |
06-22-2018, 11:23 PM | #6 |
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ya fkin dead. NCG’s pull the heat & ur gettin fried.
bring em to the real green, only thing he’ll recognize is two K’s next to his i. ya bitch a sloth, where y’all from girls got menacing looks. cuz the only achievable quality she got is having the best neck of the woods. body this fagt rook. U ain’t a target or top threat. bear weak with da hands.. explains why his punches still ain’t sharp yet. I’ll leave your wounds deep, I’m a maniac with sharp blades. pain e’ll be gruesome, act like u can Barrett n’ ill blow ur legs off from long range. Street disciple. Kill u either way bro u can choose the style. Tactical gat, leave survival tips in Bear Grylls or he’s Running Wild then I’m dumpin evidence, no leads or traction. smokin bong, then proceed to load bowls with his fkin ashes. I’m snuffing fakes, roll to ur crib with brass knux sanitized. Acting like ur incredible 2.. fagt, I’ll put black around ur entire families eyes. ur homies all gay lovers, eyebrows raise when u call them brothers. this ain’t a game of tag, but ur entire life is spent with men touching each other. Last edited by Lenox; 06-23-2018 at 03:13 PM. |
06-23-2018, 03:33 PM | #7 |
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06-24-2018, 12:29 PM | #8 |
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(Jon hit me up on kik, “You have a track I could keep?” “...”
I’m not sure what I expected, when he ‘asked to get beat’.) Good, but the double meaning isn’t grammatically correct both ways. ya fkin dead. NCG’s pull the heat & ur gettin fried. bring em to the real green, only thing he’ll recognize is two K’s next to his i. I’d say this is better than Bongo’s opener (“Can I have it for free? I wrote up a flame chorus!” Homie had me vengeful, like “YOU’RE GONNA PAY FOR THIS!!!”) Good ya bitch a sloth, where y’all from girls got menacing looks. cuz the only achievable quality she got is having the best neck of the woods. But once again I’d rank this better, (Told em, “Push some snow on the street!”, “Like winter lawn work?” “Nah, it means if ‘L.E.N aint breaking out ‘Kane’, I’m gettin ‘John Hurt!’”) This ones a career highlight, body this fagt rook. U ain’t a target or top threat. bear weak with da hands.. explains why his punches still ain’t sharp yet. And I think this is definitely worse than Bongo’s 3rd couplet, tho it’s not too bad. (The mag said I would lose? I’m taking 3 with this fight. Cred knew Len’s crew is dead; a ‘Killing Spree on his side.) Good I’ll leave your wounds deep, I’m a maniac with sharp blades. pain e’ll be gruesome, act like u can Barrett n’ ill blow ur legs off from long range. Good, but not as good as Bongo’s countering couplet. (Grizz n’ Triple made mistakes by thinking i’m real stupid like Wild Bill in Green Mile; John's executed in these bars right after I killed two kids.) Haven’t seen Green Mile, so idg the reference, I assume it’s on point tho. Street disciple. Kill u either way bro u can choose the style. Tactical gat, leave survival tips in Bear Grylls or he’s Running Wild But with that being said gotta give the 6th couplet to Jon (It ain't a John the Baptist bible - this a boxing match for titles; ‘bear’ll be quick to shoot those rounds’ like i'm a automatic rifle.) Now I’ve seen you do similar plays on your name, so minus points for that, but still good. then I’m dumpin evidence, no leads or traction. smokin bong, then proceed to load bowls with his fkin ashes. And I feel Jon lost his chain of momentum here if you know what I mean. It’s good but thatplays been done like three times by Bongo in one night, so it’s starting to lose all value. (Black said, “I gotta stick by your side like a loyal friend” I thought, “Ofcourse that shit was flame- but if I was Black; I'd never be friends with this wannabe gangbanger who appropriates the Slang.”) Pretty good I’m snuffing fakes, roll to ur crib with brass knux sanitized. Acting like ur incredible 2.. fagt, I’ll put black around ur entire families eyes. But I like this one better (You left kik for netcees, you think DMS or Teddy care? You’re too fat to fit in jeans, what made your ugly ass think that you'd fit in, anywhere?) I heard some stuff about Bongo sharing a screen cap here, I’d already seen that message screen cap on Kik. Jon didn’t seem to not like it there. But just basing this judgment on The verses, I’d have to say it’s a damn good line. Ur homies all gay lovers, eyebrows raise when you call them brothers. This ain’t a game of tag, but your entire life is spent with men touching each other. Funny but not as good as Bongos ender. Now in this case I feel just tallying up the ‘couplets’ isn’t good enough. Quality over quantity. Looking at both verses highlights, and memorability. I’d say Bongo gets it. Now I’m also I multi boi. And Bongo has way better multis. V/Bongo |
06-24-2018, 12:33 PM | #9 |
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06-24-2018, 12:50 PM | #10 |
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Jon hit me up on kik, “You have a track I could keep?” “...”
I’m not sure what I expected, when he ‘asked to get beat’. Lol light, but funny opener “Can I have it for free? I wrote up a flame chorus!” Homie had me vengeful, like “YOU’RE GONNA PAY FOR THIS!!!” Nahhhh b Told em, “Push some snow on the street!”, “Like winter lawn work?” “Nah, it means if ‘L.E.N aint breaking out ‘Kane’, I’m gettin ‘John Hurt!’” Yooo, this was nice The mag said I would lose? I’m taking 3 with this fight. Cred knew Len’s crew is dead; a ‘Killing Spree on his side. Coo line, no big jab or sting with it tho Grizz n’ Triple made mistakes by thinking i’m real stupid like Wild Bill in Green Mile; John's executed in these bars right after I killed two kids. Decent It ain't a John the Baptist bible - this a boxing match for titles; ‘bear’ll be quick to shoot those rounds’ like i'm a automatic rifle. Wording nice, but punch wayyyy to simple Black said, “I gotta stick by your side like a loyal friend” I thought, “Ofcourse that shit was flame- but if I was Black; I'd never be friends with this wannabe gangbanger who appropriates the slang.” Lmao idk what to think here honestly You left kik for netcees, you think DMS or Teddy care? You’re too fat to fit in jeans, what made your ugly ass think that you'd fit in, anywhere? Nahhh b --------- ya fkin dead. NCG’s pull the heat & ur gettin fried. bring em to the real green, only thing he’ll recognize is two K’s next to his I. Lightwork on the opener, hit better then bongos tho ya bitch a sloth, where y’all from girls got menacing looks. cuz the only achievable quality she got is having the best neck of the woods. Lmao funny body this fagt rook. U ain’t a target or top threat. bear weak with da hands.. explains why his punches still ain’t sharp yet. ehhh, light here I’ll leave your wounds deep, I’m a maniac with sharp blades. pain e’ll be gruesome, act like u can Barrett n’ ill blow ur legs off from long range. Nice Street disciple. Kill u either way bro u can choose the style. Tactical gat, leave survival tips in Bear Grylls or he’s Running Wild Your wording actually made this ok then I’m dumpin evidence, no leads or traction. smokin bong, then proceed to load bowls with his fkin ashes. Def a sting here on the name flip I’m snuffing fakes, roll to ur crib with brass knux sanitized. Acting like ur incredible 2.. fagt, I’ll put black around ur entire families eyes. ok ur homies all gay lovers, eyebrows raise when u call them brothers. this ain’t a game of tag, but ur entire life is spent with men touching each other. Might have rushed to closed the battle out, but nahhh b This was a ok read here, honestly I got Lenox here. That name flip and barrett line won him the battle in my opinion. Props to both tho this battle actually turned out better then I thought it would be. V-Lenox
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06-24-2018, 01:48 PM | #11 |
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Jon hit me up on kik, “You have a track I could keep?” “...”
I’m not sure what I expected, when he ‘asked to get beat’. doesn't quite work for me “Can I have it for free? I wrote up a flame chorus!” Homie had me vengeful, like “YOU’RE GONNA PAY FOR THIS!!!” kind of funny, hard to judge these bars because they sort of go together Told em, “Push some snow on the street!”, “Like winter lawn work?” “Nah, it means if ‘L.E.N aint breaking out ‘Kane’, I’m gettin ‘John Hurt!’” didnt get the reference here The mag said I would lose? I’m taking 3 with this fight. Cred knew Len’s crew is dead; a ‘Killing Spree on his side. must be a personal I'm not getting Grizz n’ Triple made mistakes by thinking i’m real stupid like Wild Bill in Green Mile; John's executed in these bars right after I killed two kids. I fks w/ this It ain't a John the Baptist bible - this a boxing match for titles; ‘bear’ll be quick to shoot those rounds’ like i'm a automatic rifle. wanted to like this more, decent for me Black said, “I gotta stick by your side like a loyal friend” I thought, “Ofcourse that shit was flame- but if I was Black; I'd never be friends with this wannabe gangbanger who appropriates the slang.” ha, ok You left kik for netcees, you think DMS or Teddy care? You’re too fat to fit in jeans, what made your ugly ass think that you'd fit in, anywhere? that last part should be a statement not a question, but just nitpicking, this could of hit if worded a little different vs. ya fkin dead. NCG’s pull the heat & ur gettin fried. bring em to the real green, only thing he’ll recognize is two K’s next to his i. ohhhh a KIK punch, wasn't feeling it tho ya bitch a sloth, where y’all from girls got menacing looks. cuz the only achievable quality she got is having the best neck of the woods. lol, ok body this fagt rook. U ain’t a target or top threat. bear weak with da hands.. explains why his punches still ain’t sharp yet. eh I’ll leave your wounds deep, I’m a maniac with sharp blades. pain e’ll be gruesome, act like u can Barrett n’ ill blow ur legs off from long range. ha, this was nice Street disciple. Kill u either way bro u can choose the style. Tactical gat, leave survival tips in Bear Grylls or he’s Running Wild lol prob been done, but this was dope to me then I’m dumpin evidence, no leads or traction. smokin bong, then proceed to load bowls with his fkin ashes. nice I’m snuffing fakes, roll to ur crib with brass knux sanitized. Acting like ur incredible 2.. fagt, I’ll put black around ur entire families eyes. wording made it awkward for me, had potential to be better ur homies all gay lovers, eyebrows raise when u call them brothers. this ain’t a game of tag, but ur entire life is spent with men touching each other. naaa.. I got Lenox. Pretty cool battle, I would like to see the rematch when Bongo adapts his style a little more to what people like here. I'm sure he has ammo for days on Lenox, lol. Cool battle! Props to both for showing v/ Lenox |
06-24-2018, 09:00 PM | #12 |
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Jon hit me up on kik, “You have a track I could keep?” “...”
I’m not sure what I expected, when he ‘asked to get beat’. nigga are you about to tell a story? lol “Can I have it for free? I wrote up a flame chorus!” Homie had me vengeful, like “YOU’RE GONNA PAY FOR THIS!!!” lol Told em, “Push some snow on the street!”, “Like winter lawn work?” “Nah, it means if ‘L.E.N aint breaking out ‘Kane’, I’m gettin ‘John Hurt!’” cool but too much going on lol The mag said I would lose? I’m taking 3 with this fight. Cred knew Len’s crew is dead; a ‘Killing Spree on his side. ok Grizz n’ Triple made mistakes by thinking i’m real stupid like Wild Bill in Green Mile; John's executed in these bars right after I killed two kids. not bad It ain't a John the Baptist bible - this a boxing match for titles; ‘bear’ll be quick to shoot those rounds’ like i'm a automatic rifle. nah gotta be more clever Black said, “I gotta stick by your side like a loyal friend” I thought, “Ofcourse that shit was flame- but if I was Black; I'd never be friends with this wannabe gangbanger who appropriates the slang.” lol hilarious whats going on? You left kik for netcees, you think DMS or Teddy care? You’re too fat to fit in jeans, what made your ugly ass think that you'd fit in, anywhere? good lol ya fkin dead. NCG’s pull the heat & ur gettin fried. bring em to the real green, only thing he’ll recognize is two K’s next to his i. st8 ya bitch a sloth, where y’all from girls got menacing looks. cuz the only achievable quality she got is having the best neck of the woods. funny but light body this fagt rook. U ain’t a target or top threat. bear weak with da hands.. explains why his punches still ain’t sharp yet. basic but true I’ll leave your wounds deep, I’m a maniac with sharp blades. pain e’ll be gruesome, act like u can Barrett n’ ill blow ur legs off from long range. cool Street disciple. Kill u either way bro u can choose the style. Tactical gat, leave survival tips in Bear Grylls or he’s Running Wild i like this then I’m dumpin evidence, no leads or traction. smokin bong, then proceed to load bowls with his fkin ashes. couldve been better... u just smoked his ashes, weirdo I’m snuffing fakes, roll to ur crib with brass knux sanitized. Acting like ur incredible 2.. fagt, I’ll put black around ur entire families eyes. not bad ur homies all gay lovers, eyebrows raise when u call them brothers. this ain’t a game of tag, but ur entire life is spent with men touching each other. nah Bongo that verse sounds more appropriate for audio than text, just a thought. Not bad, you need a better structure and updated content. Lenny did just enough to take this battle. |
06-25-2018, 07:43 AM | #13 |
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Green mile was cool... didn’t really get the references before that and towards the end I felt bongos concepts were getting better just worded weird
Lenny Opener was cool Neck in the woods was cool Thought Barret was dope Bear grylls could have been nicer Then you lost steam Still took this easy tho. Cool read V/Lenox |
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