Violence Review ft. Sammy

[ACTIVATE SELF]

Thesis
inquiring minds and theory, have tried to define it
merely a state of design? a series of hatred devised?
or clearly a fate; a divine inquiry instated by higher spirits
lets take what we find. share it then shape it.
in time maybe we’ll gain a concise bearing
my take on this vice....ready???

The Mechanic of Violence
It starts with a spark..dark matter, potential energy
gathering friction. speed increases volt intensity
forcing density to burst to a fine incandescent;
A design so effective, refining efforts coursed in history
fuels from fossils form an industry born of synergy
depleting resources Pyrrhic war lost in victory
heat source converted. bursting. do we call it disaster?
as the engine roars, movement starts.. exhausting the matter

A History of Violence
It starts with a spark...dark matter, potential energy
“let there be light!” VIOLENT discharge; celestial symphony
matters collide, space and time came to existence
quantum mechanic governs Yahweh's insane exposition
time passed....
and there came a condition
survival of fittest - became a race a consistent display of division
a game a decision of change so for instance
we’ll take what is given, let’s say...the election...
as ideas are...
grade and dissected, displayed for rejection
on stage and on network engaging in conflicting ways and perspective
abate or accept it’s the way we elect AND...
this is the ways that was set...now do we call it disaster?
perhaps a proper analytic before exhausting the matter...

Necessary Violence?
There’s a method for progress,
call it necessary contest
history dictates that for every movement there’s conflict
just as fuel mixed with spark allow for movements of cars
opposing passionate views clash are rudiment, yall
whether political landscape or silence working of time...
It all starts with a spark as violence works her design




Is violence necessary
or just a lack of enlightenment?
Does it come from within
or from a tragic environment?
Maybe it's passion
that incites and inspires it
an appetite of entitlement
that can spread like a virus when
the desires of men
ignite and catch fire
in a climate of sin?
"But why does violence exist?"
Well, the science is this,
It's a glitch in our system
no one is trying to fix!
"I won't deny that it is."
Then close your eyes and pretend
That it's an ironclad fist
that slowly tightens its grip
Around the throat of the weak
and those that meekly resist!
See our species is tempted
by primordial lust.
Instinctively seeking
to destroy and corrupt.
Just think of extinction
and all the creatures we've crushed
under the weight of our sooolesss
without an inkling of what ...
we've have done to the planet
-- such irreversible damage.
"Is all humanity cursed?"
Not if a person has chances.
If your circuits are jammed
we can rework the mechanics.
Don't be a merchant of death
or a murderous bandit.
Cos instead of more blood
let's spills some hurt on the canvas.
I see the Earth as our campus,
but we're not learning the answers.
So concerned with the cancer
we stopped researching the grander ...
truth that's involved,
tho we'll closely examine
the phantom roots of its cause.
Due to Newtonian Law
the fruit doesn't fall
too far from its tree ...
à la Adam & Eve
in the Garden of Eden.
Symbolically speaking,
we think that a piece
Of that apple was evil
and she swallowed its seed
and gave birth to a demon
-- the Serpent offspring
of murder and treason!
We've nurtured this thesis
for 1000s of seasons
and tho its unfounded
and cloudy in reason
The Crown & our leaders
still count on us sheeple
to deeply believe it!
Cos freedom ain't free
unless people are bleeding!
The secret of kingdoms
-- deceitful yet genius!
If Jesus came back
we'd beat em and feed em
To weasels and rats!
A feasible act
if you read of our past
Like Medieval France
or Feudal Japan
or the Spanish Armada
That crossed the Atlantic
to rule the "new land"
through armies infected.
That's hardly a lesson
on the carnage we've caused,
We've sharpered our weapons
and nawled off our claws,
barbaric in essence,
we're less than a dog
Yet, think that we're better ...
"Til dolphins evole
and make us their pets
for all of our flaws!"
No mazel tov ya’ll!
We did not accomplished
a semblance of peace
in the Age of Pisces,
we swam the high seas
full of sodium chloride
and salty sardines,
which affected our vision
of who we could be,
thus ignorance & violence
became our I.D.
But the time of Aquarius
has finally arrived
and if violence continues
Homo-Sapien dies

Sincerely,
The Tribal
Dystopia
Of
Tomorrow's
Post-Apocalyptic
Nightmare

[Rude]

I feel like I probably fed this on LA. (though not sure) but it was super dope to read it again.

also I need to know is what FONT did you guys use for your names??? I love that font with the knives/axes/weapons to fill in the letters.

[PancakeBrah]

You definitely outwrote Sammy, so kudos.

Newtonian law/root of its cause was cool. Your schemes in general were pretty creative if the slightest bit predictable. Right before 'Earth was our campus', should have stopped that scheme there. Some of the content was interesting, nothing mind blowing. Pretty solid overall.

[Lucipher Howlz]

Sammy and Self...of course you guys will give me something to read and make me think more than my mind really wants to at this moment...but I"m ready to appreciate you two collabin'...In my opinion 2 of my all time favorites...

Sammy: I know I haven't been active that much. I just got on this site. For real tho Sammy this might be some of my favorite work from you. I won't say your best because I'm not gonna lie, some of your shit goes over my head and that's my fault not yours. Your vocab and way of wording is way above me most of the time. You just have this crazy intelligent way of writing and I love it. Your first 2 segments were dope as fuck. Sometimes you lose me on the flow but that was not the case here. I had to google pyrrhic for its definition but damn bro....What a way to open up a topic. Doing something thats a supposed victory at the time but really the victor is the one that is gonna suffer the consequence. Now I see the word Yahweh's in your next segment. (had to google that too) and now I think I know what its all about. I love shit like this. You made me do research and I appreciate that. I just want to point out that your flow really did stand out on this tho. from matters collide to the end of that segment was top notch. it was your personal style..."insane expedition- time passed.....and there came a condition-" the way it was set up was fucking smooth. The rest of the verse was so fucking dope! that wording and flow was amazing. Your last segment was cool. It set the tone for the message. A nice ending. I did notice that you refered to violence as a woman. Not that it means anything but you got me thinking so hopefully I got you thinking...lol...I loved this verse from you Sammy...might be my favorite from you.

Self: One of my favorites of all time. To be honest when I first read your shit on LA I was like ehhh he's doing too much and overrated. But it was me being lazy as fuck and not really paying attention to your story, intelligence and you concepts. I was bored of the same shit LA was producing and was assuming you were just part of that. OH I was wrong big time.

"Is violence necessary
or just a lack of enlightenment?
Does it come from within
or from a tragic environment?
Maybe it's passion
that incites and inspires it
an appetite of entitlement
that can spread like a virus when
the desires of men
ignite and catch fire
in a climate of sin?
"But why does violence exist?"
Well, the science is this,
It's a glitch in our system
no one is trying to fix!
"I won't deny that it is.""-----yeah...point proven. I'm so jealous how you can switch the length of you bars and make a complete different format. Just like Sammy I can't see how you two can do that shit. This segment was raw to say the least.

"Then close your eyes and pretend
That it's an ironclad fist
that slowly tightens its grip
Around the throat of the weak
and those that meekly resist!
See our species is tempted
by primordial lust.
Instinctively seeking
to destroy and corrupt.
Just think of extinction
and all the creatures we've crushed
under the weight of our sooolesss
without an inkling of what ...
we've have done to the planet
-- such irreversible damage.
"Is all humanity cursed?"
Not if a person has chances.----C'mon dude. You make me mad inside that I gave up writing for a bit. It's funny...the way I look at shit you and sammy post since day one always made me so competitive even tho we were all fam. I always feel I have to out do you and sammy. In a respectful way.

"If your circuits are jammed
we can rework the mechanics.
Don't be a merchant of death
or a murderous bandit.
Cos instead of more blood
let's spills some hurt on the canvas.
I see the Earth as our campus,
but we're not learning the answers.
So concerned with the cancer
we stopped researching the grander ...
truth that's involved,
tho we'll closely examine
the phantom roots of its cause.
Due to Newtonian Law
the fruit doesn't fall
too far from its tree ...
à la Adam & Eve
in the Garden of Eden.
Symbolically speaking,
we think that a piece
Of that apple was evil
and she swallowed its seed
and gave birth to a demon
-- the Serpent offspring
of murder and treason!
We've nurtured this thesis
for 1000s of seasons
and tho its unfounded
and cloudy in reason
The Crown & our leaders
still count on us sheeple
to deeply believe it!
Cos freedom ain't free
unless people are bleeding!
The secret of kingdoms
-- deceitful yet genius!
If Jesus came back
we'd beat em and feed em
To weasels and rats!
A feasible act
if you read of our past
Like Medieval France
or Feudal Japan
or the Spanish Armada
That crossed the Atlantic
to rule the "new land"
through armies infected.
That's hardly a lesson
on the carnage we've caused,
We've sharpered our weapons
and nawled off our claws,
barbaric in essence,
we're less than a dog
Yet, think that we're better ...
"Til dolphins evole
and make us their pets
for all of our flaws!"
No mazel tov ya’ll!
We did not accomplished
a semblance of peace
in the Age of Pisces,
we swam the high seas
full of sodium chloride
and salty sardines,
which affected our vision
of who we could be,
thus ignorance & violence
became our I.D.
But the time of Aquarius
has finally arrived
and if violence continues
Homo-Sapien dies"

If this was LA this verse would have to be in the HOF. Bottom line. I don't toot anyone elses horn ever cus I'm stubborn and want to beat it...but damn dude. this was everything...flow message concept and everything was perfect.

What a collab....Please let me be on the next one so I can get challenged and really go off...dope shit from both of you.

[Lucipher Howlz]

Sorry SELF i didn't give you a breakdown like sammy...but you didn't need it...this shit was hof type shit

[Geno]

This was brilliant. Really enjoyed both styles in this. Sammy with a more intricate play osyllables with longer lines. Self with that defining flow that weve all come to know recognize and love here at ncs. I think the topic as all topics u chose was pretty dope and brought to light in a way that i havnt seen done before. Very descriptive and vivid. Two of my fav writers. Sammy u should be more active here man. Self has even seemex to be less active lately. Where are the two of you as of late spending ur time?

Anyway. Glad i checked in here. Holla bros. Ps n Qs