.357 Magnum Opus

Chyeahhh!!! · 03-24-2018, 02:48 AM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IgwFeqsTztE

Don’t mean to HAARP on ya’ll, but I’m bout to get my reign on
While Halle Berry givin me head to help me brainstorm
Gee Oh AYE T...for those that spell my name wrong
Johnny Storm in a gay bar, bout to get my flame on
cans’ll have you assed out, it aint paint when yah body get sprayed on
makin ya’ll all say uncle while I’m conducting this seance
the flow so sharp it glistens
like my knife in the moonlight when I stalk a victim
guilty only for being the best here and not narc'n on my narcissim
I am truly the don of the clever bars
fly and wise, call me Louis Vuitton Farrakhan
I’m Schoolly D mixed with Huey P, knowledge forever born
plus I'm strait dope like moving keys through the canal in Panama
I drop bombs with Funkmaster Flex’s facial expressions
Lines so retarded..
They’ll have Cuba Goodin come and do the Radio edit
I got a fellatio fetish, we don't go out to eat usually
but she’ll let me put the tip in after she pays for dinner with no gratuity
ladies say I'm cute, a 9, but I'll still que a 9
bumpin Cube' and Nas while gettin the latest from Q Anon
pump action shotty yah thoughts, that's my mantra of course
as a short,I got my Contra cheat codes straight from Oliver North
I's born to damage shit, since I shot out my daddy's dick
swam to the egg inside my moms, then fuckin scrambled it
niggas stuck with text, not I, fuck a keyboard I jot rhymes
in the studio..
you niggas couldn't break the sound barrier doing mach 5
pipes smokin, it aint for a new cardinal, stop it
I'm predictin you'll say I went off on this page, but I aint writin for marginal prophets
let the four go, any prevoius attempts on my life, you will forego
ill enough to give you the Moors code in morse code
you tell niggas to chill, I give niggas the chills
that's our difference in skills, I'm out here killin for thrills
fly enough to have yah girl drop her gown on the strip
then invite everybody down from the control tower to hit
lines are far out, where the cosmos is, going thru cosmosis
you wanna know how I know you got snakes in yo staff? cuz I'm Moses
hands or bars fuckas? both are B2 bombers droppin payloads
so slick with the punches, for now on, call me Vaseline Lomanchenko
fuck a fade, I air 9's and 'matics
that spray baldheads like hairline enhancements
my current opponent is dead and don't even know yet
so sip yah tea or get froggy, I'm Alpo...on the moped
they say the one who takes the high road is the better man
but you gone get this smoke whether you want it or not, like it's second hand
wondering if your worth the wait, if worthy we can bang
my words worth is worth it's weight in currency exchange
the curvetuer of this gerber blade will cirumvent yah vein
and the tip'll get stuck in yah vertebre in a nervous fit of rage
you can't go tit for tat with a tactician
no days off, only muzzle brakes..that means it's no kickback when the mac spitten
I've raised the bar quota fo, the best bar quotables
I'll smoke yah fav rapper, then light a cigar over em
I'm Checmical Ali in the ring, ya'll niggas all rope a dope
novices not even notable, I'm the highest on the totem pole
when the world comes to an end, I'll be in my bunker sayin I told you so
line for line till I overdose N'get my fix when my foes get a broken nose
I trained 8 hoes and got em all in they place
when they talk relationship goals they get soccer balls to the face
fuck the last line, show's over, aint too into big finales
I'm fuckin Awesome, this whole rhyme was sponsored by Dick Vitale

ACTIVATE SELF · 03-24-2018, 11:57 AM

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Don’t mean to HAARP on ya’ll, but I’m bout to get my reign on

Not sure I've ever seen a play on HAARP before. I dig it. Cool entendre at the end. Clever bar overall.

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While Halle Berry givin me head to help me brainstorm

Nice transitional wordplay pouring over from the previous concept.

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Gee Oh AYE T...for those that spell my name wrong
Johnny Storm in a gay bar, bout to get my flame on

Suspect...lol.

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cans’ll have you assed out, it aint paint when yah body get sprayed on
makin ya’ll all say uncle while I’m conducting this seance
the flow so sharp it glistens
like my knife in the moonlight when I stalk a victim
guilty only for being the best here and not narc'n on my narcissim
I am truly the don of the clever bars
fly and wise, call me Louis Vuitton Farrakhan

Ehhh it kind of loss some steam, but ended on some fly shit. It kind of reminds me of Nas' 'Queens Get The Money' track where he says...

"Let us make man in our image
Spit it, I'm Huey P in Louis V at the eulogy throwing Molotovs for Emmett"

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I’m Schoolly D mixed with Huey P, knowledge forever born
plus I'm strait dope like moving keys through the canal in Panama
I drop bombs with Funkmaster Flex’s facial expressions
Lines so retarded..
They’ll have Cuba Goodin come and do the Radio edit
I got a fellatio fetish, we don't go out to eat usually
but she’ll let me put the tip in after she pays for dinner with no gratuity

Maybe, I'm reading it wrong, but the flow kinda took a step backwards and wasn't as tight as it was before. All the interwoven wordplay and allusions were cool, but I like the more simple "gratuity" pun at the end. That was slick.

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ladies say I'm cute, a 9, but I'll still que a 9
bumpin Cube' and Nas while gettin the latest from Q Anon

Dope use of homonyms. Also, I see you're on that conspiracy vibe (i.e., HAARP, Q Anon). Nice.

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pump action shotty yah thoughts, that's my mantra of course
as a short,I got my Contra cheat codes straight from Oliver North

BRUH....MURDER IN THE FIRST. That was nasty.

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I's born to damage shit, since I shot out my daddy's dick
swam to the egg inside my moms, then fuckin scrambled it

This nigga here, man. Talk that shit, my dude. Straight flames.

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niggas stuck with text, not I, fuck a keyboard I jot rhymes
in the studio..
you niggas couldn't break the sound barrier doing mach 5

Just stop, drop and roll. The keys are melted.

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pipes smokin, it aint for a new cardinal, stop it
I'm predictin you'll say I went off on this page, but I aint writin for marginal prophets

Clever.

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let the four go, any prevoius attempts on my life, you will forego
ill enough to give you the Moors code in morse code

7Hoteps. This shit is Gawd body. You bout to make me get in my spirital bag. But they ain't ready for that black matter crack.

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you tell niggas to chill, I give niggas the chills
that's our difference in skills, I'm out here killin for thrills
fly enough to have yah girl drop her gown on the strip
then invite everybody down from the control tower to hit
lines are far out, where the cosmos is, going thru cosmosis
you wanna know how I know you got snakes in yo staff? cuz I'm Moses

This some Thutmose-Ancient-Kemet-Tahuti-Double-Helix-On-The-Medical-Staff-Super-Grand-Heru shit right here, brother. Ifwi heavy.

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hands or bars fuckas? both are B2 bombers droppin payloads
so slick with the punches, for now on, call me Vaseline Lomanchenko
fuck a fade, I air 9's and 'matics
that spray baldheads like hairline enhancements

That was cool. I think it be harder delivered live in a battle or over wax.

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my current opponent is dead and don't even know yet
so sip yah tea or get froggy, I'm Alpo...on the moped

Kermit meme. Killa Cam playing Rico. Shit's official.

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they say the one who takes the high road is the better man
but you gone get this smoke whether you want it or not, like it's second hand

7.5 outta 10

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wondering if your worth the wait, if worthy we can bang
my words worth is worth it's weight in currency exchange

Wordsworth flip. Simple, but official.

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the curvetuer of this gerber blade will cirumvent yah vein
and the tip'll get stuck in yah vertebre in a nervous fit of rage
you can't go tit for tat with a tactician
no days off, only muzzle brakes..that means it's no kickback when the mac spitten

Shit tough.

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I've raised the bar quota fo, the best bar quotables
I'll smoke yah fav rapper, then light a cigar over em
I'm Checmical Ali in the ring, ya'll niggas all rope a dope
novices not even notable, I'm the highest on the totem pole
when the world comes to an end, I'll be in my bunker sayin I told you so

Bruh you murdered this shit. Sheesh my nigga. Cease and desist.

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line for line till I overdose N'get my fix when my foes get a broken nose
I trained 8 hoes and got em all in they place
when they talk relationship goals they get soccer balls to the face
fuck the last line, show's over, aint too into big finales
I'm fuckin Awesome, this whole rhyme was sponsored by Dick Vitale

Say less.

Illest flex joint I've read on this site. Go take your talents to URL, KOD, go get ya bag, bro. This shit was gold. Peace.

Chyeahhh!!! · 03-24-2018, 12:15 PM

AYEEEE. preciate that feed Act

ACTIVATE SELF · 03-24-2018, 12:18 PM

Bro, it was time well spent. I'll be on the look out for the next joint.

03-24-2018, 02:48 AM	#1
Chyeahhh!!! Saul Paul Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: remote location with a remote weapon station Posts: 6,397 Battle Record: 16-26 Rep Power: 1663348	.357 Magnum Opus https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IgwFeqsTztE Don’t mean to HAARP on ya’ll, but I’m bout to get my reign on While Halle Berry givin me head to help me brainstorm Gee Oh AYE T...for those that spell my name wrong Johnny Storm in a gay bar, bout to get my flame on cans’ll have you assed out, it aint paint when yah body get sprayed on makin ya’ll all say uncle while I’m conducting this seance the flow so sharp it glistens like my knife in the moonlight when I stalk a victim guilty only for being the best here and not narc'n on my narcissim I am truly the don of the clever bars fly and wise, call me Louis Vuitton Farrakhan I’m Schoolly D mixed with Huey P, knowledge forever born plus I'm strait dope like moving keys through the canal in Panama I drop bombs with Funkmaster Flex’s facial expressions Lines so retarded.. They’ll have Cuba Goodin come and do the Radio edit I got a fellatio fetish, we don't go out to eat usually but she’ll let me put the tip in after she pays for dinner with no gratuity ladies say I'm cute, a 9, but I'll still que a 9 bumpin Cube' and Nas while gettin the latest from Q Anon pump action shotty yah thoughts, that's my mantra of course as a short,I got my Contra cheat codes straight from Oliver North I's born to damage shit, since I shot out my daddy's dick swam to the egg inside my moms, then fuckin scrambled it niggas stuck with text, not I, fuck a keyboard I jot rhymes in the studio.. you niggas couldn't break the sound barrier doing mach 5 pipes smokin, it aint for a new cardinal, stop it I'm predictin you'll say I went off on this page, but I aint writin for marginal prophets let the four go, any prevoius attempts on my life, you will forego ill enough to give you the Moors code in morse code you tell niggas to chill, I give niggas the chills that's our difference in skills, I'm out here killin for thrills fly enough to have yah girl drop her gown on the strip then invite everybody down from the control tower to hit lines are far out, where the cosmos is, going thru cosmosis you wanna know how I know you got snakes in yo staff? cuz I'm Moses hands or bars fuckas? both are B2 bombers droppin payloads so slick with the punches, for now on, call me Vaseline Lomanchenko fuck a fade, I air 9's and 'matics that spray baldheads like hairline enhancements my current opponent is dead and don't even know yet so sip yah tea or get froggy, I'm Alpo...on the moped they say the one who takes the high road is the better man but you gone get this smoke whether you want it or not, like it's second hand wondering if your worth the wait, if worthy we can bang my words worth is worth it's weight in currency exchange the curvetuer of this gerber blade will cirumvent yah vein and the tip'll get stuck in yah vertebre in a nervous fit of rage you can't go tit for tat with a tactician no days off, only muzzle brakes..that means it's no kickback when the mac spitten I've raised the bar quota fo, the best bar quotables I'll smoke yah fav rapper, then light a cigar over em I'm Checmical Ali in the ring, ya'll niggas all rope a dope novices not even notable, I'm the highest on the totem pole when the world comes to an end, I'll be in my bunker sayin I told you so line for line till I overdose N'get my fix when my foes get a broken nose I trained 8 hoes and got em all in they place when they talk relationship goals they get soccer balls to the face fuck the last line, show's over, aint too into big finales I'm fuckin Awesome, this whole rhyme was sponsored by Dick Vitale __________________ KNOW YOUR MAKER BEFORE YOU'RE MADE TO I know the ledge, his sister's a jumpoff Last edited by Chyeahhh!!!; 03-24-2018 at 02:51 AM.

03-24-2018, 12:15 PM	#3
Chyeahhh!!! Saul Paul Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: remote location with a remote weapon station Posts: 6,397 Battle Record: 16-26 Rep Power: 1663348	AYEEEE. preciate that feed Act __________________ KNOW YOUR MAKER BEFORE YOU'RE MADE TO I know the ledge, his sister's a jumpoff

03-24-2018, 12:18 PM	#4
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 732 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584275	Bro, it was time well spent. I'll be on the look out for the next joint.