Champ Match: Schadenfreude (4-0) vs Cred (4-0) - Schadenfreude WINS

[Cred]

NBL Season 10
Week 6

Due FRIDAY 12/30/16

Minimum - 14 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


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2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

[Schadenfreude]

14.

[Cred]

Ca$$$$hhh.

[Cred]

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.ph...highlight=Cred

You seen what happened last time you tried fuckin with me with these gun bars @Schadenfreude..


This is forsure death. Shoot everything breathin wen I squirt tecs
Run in the crib n even surround ur babies wit the sticks like a birds nest
U talk it, I'm living it. Disrespect s'why I'm the man around these parts
Think false imprisonment.. I got Schad's bitch ass mad behind these bars
At ur door step wit the barrel lit. Gun in ur peep hole, thats a narrow fit
Peek n I'm letting it Sing wit the Heat right in front on sum Christmas carol shit
I was raised in the jungle so if I pull this strap u'll be fulla holes
Once u hear that Bengal thru u, the shit 'll look like u got attacked by 1 of those
Kill em wit a single punch, I dont play. Schad u dug ur own grave
I got this barbarian a nigga quicker than one that lived in the stone age
Ur styles a act like u're on stage. I'm really wit it while u stay soft
John Travolta or Nicholas Cage? Either way 1 of these 40's is takin ur Face Off
Home invasion with a .357 so watch how this man gets wrecked
A bulldog 'll b the 1st thing u see as soon as u get thru the door like a family pet
Last time in the ring this dude got stretched, s'no doubt I murked his life
I'll hit em wit a Kurt Angle suplex.. that jus means I'm bodying a German twice




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[Schadenfreude]

Lol, of course u're..

Bringing heaters when we spar, the gun speech’s got u far
no personals cuz bullets don’t have names on ‘em, yet neither does ya bars.
Gunplay ain’t cool when that’s all u sign in yo rhyme book,
any time took, reading thru I think how’s he Mexican but not a single line cook?
Unimpressed by the text I’ve read, u’re leaving extra dead
bitch my quotes out here teaching, keep underachieving, u’ll need extra Cred.
Secretly yo lil wife’s a femi-dike whose fellatio gimme life,
pimp shit, so at any price the bitch’ll peddle thru yo city, she a Divvy bike.
I just bought a nice glock, s’always bussin’ it’s a trife thot
luv to ice opps, so I’ll fuck around let another couple bang - that’s a wife swap.
There’s bout 30 rounds of hollow points if I spray this tool
& when they mushroom, the denigration’s like graduation, they’ll stay in School.
Bitch check, I address it direct, yo gun talking’s all great..
but i’m completely cut from a different cloth..especially when knocking off fakes.
Dismembered this guy, u shouldn't even have given a try,
s'why Ion't gaf u rose to the challenge, cuz look how it went for him in the Chi.

..BODY.

[Otty]

Cred - opener, barbarian (even though the wording was bad), faceoff, bulldog

Schad- linecook, extra cred (if I'm gonna give cred the barbarian bar I gotta give schad this joint), divvy bike, wife swap

Schad, you've gotten pretty far with your concepts cause your wording is screwed bro. You need to figure out a way to get the punch across with less words. Cred I'm pretty sure every line was a Gunbar. I think you had 3 that weren't. I like gunbars but that's a lot.

I got Cred taking this cause Schads wording hurt him.

[Unfukwitable]

This is forsure death. Shoot everything breathin wen I squirt tecs
Run in the crib n even surround ur babies wit the sticks like a birds nest
I was raised in the jungle so if I pull this strap u'll be fulla holes
Once u hear that Bengal thru u, the shit 'll look like u got attacked by 1 of those
Kill em wit a single punch, I dont play. Schad u dug ur own grave
I got this barbarian a nigga quicker than one that lived in the stone age

vs

Bringing heaters when we spar, the gun speech’s got u far
no personals cuz bullets don’t have names on ‘em, yet neither does ya bars.
Gunplay ain’t cool when that’s all u sign in yo rhyme book,
any time took, reading thru I think how’s he Mexican but not a single line cook?
Secretly yo lil wife’s a femi-dike whose fellatio gimme life,
pimp shit, so at any price the bitch’ll peddle thru yo city, she a Divvy bike.
Dismembered this guy, u shouldn't even have given a try,
s'why Ion't gaf u rose to the challenge, cuz look how it went for him in the Chi.

both came with heat but I felt ones verse had more flavor in it, birdsnest shit was mean but I felt Schad's opener was soo meann it was a fire ass personal and was worded dope, I think Cred couldve attacked his opponent in more areas and maybe made the concept stick alil heavier to son for the kill but this was a dope read either way. v/Schad

[Suthaveli]

Cred

Opener was nice.
Mad you use a prison/bar line, but this actually was decent.
Xmas gun bar was sok
The bang go gun bar was ok
Barbarian is played, the line itself was meh
I didn't like the face off line.
Bulldog gun line was worded nicely, but did nothing for me
I thought he did 3 suplex. Wording was little off also.

Vs

Personal on this bars was lit
Line cook was gd, lol.
I'm sure cred lines are played against him, but as for the line, ok
Divvy bike was lol.
Wife swap was fucking vicious
Meh
Knock off fakes waa coo
Didn't care for your closer.

@Schadenfreude gmv.

Honestly, i think it got repetitive for me to continuously read the generic gun lines from cred. He def words them nice, thats something you cant take away from your verse, but i think for me, i got bored. Schad had pretty much a gd verse all the way thru. Couple of bars read a bit choppy, but for the most, a strong showing. He also showed more of a range on different angles to insult.
All & all, depending on style prefernce, i can see this going either way. Props to both, i definitely enjoyed reading this match.

[Aero]

Cred:

lol at the opener, you trying to bait him into doing more of your style like he did in your last battle

This is forsure death. Shoot everything breathin wen I squirt tecs
Run in the crib n even surround ur babies wit the sticks like a birds nest
coooool
U talk it, I'm living it. Disrespect s'why I'm the man around these parts
Think false imprisonment.. I got Schad's bitch ass mad behind these bars
nah this like 2003 type concept. You know better.
At ur door step wit the barrel lit. Gun in ur peep hole, thats a narrow fit
Peek n I'm letting it Sing wit the Heat right in front on sum Christmas carol shit
dope
I was raised in the jungle so if I pull this strap u'll be fulla holes
Once u hear that Bengal thru u, the shit 'll look like u got attacked by 1 of those
good WP but delivery poor
Kill em wit a single punch, I dont play. Schad u dug ur own grave
I got this barbarian a nigga quicker than one that lived in the stone age
nah man, 2003 wp
Ur styles a act like u're on stage. I'm really wit it while u stay soft
John Travolta or Nicholas Cage? Either way 1 of these 40's is takin ur Face Off
lol olllld reference here brutha
Home invasion with a .357 so watch how this man gets wrecked
A bulldog 'll b the 1st thing u see as soon as u get thru the door like a family pet
ok ok ok
Last time in the ring this dude got stretched, s'no doubt I murked his life
I'll hit em wit a Kurt Angle suplex.. that jus means I'm bodying a German twice
I dug it

Overall this was ok. Shoulda stuck more to your formula.



Schad:


Bringing heaters when we spar, the gun speech’s got u far
no personals cuz bullets don’t have names on ‘em, yet neither does ya bars.
take off the YET and it's a banger,, but good usage
Gunplay ain’t cool when that’s all u sign in yo rhyme book,
any time took, reading thru I think how’s he Mexican but not a single line cook?
ha aiiiight
Unimpressed by the text I’ve read, u’re leaving extra dead
bitch my quotes out here teaching, keep underachieving, u’ll need extra Cred.
no way.. this nameplay gotta be old
Secretly yo lil wife’s a femi-dike whose fellatio gimme life,
pimp shit, so at any price the bitch’ll peddle thru yo city, she a Divvy bike.
not technically sound. a bike doesn't peddle itself, cute though
I just bought a nice glock, s’always bussin’ it’s a trife thot
luv to ice opps, so I’ll fuck around let another couple bang - that’s a wife swap.
cool cool... love the delivery
There’s bout 30 rounds of hollow points if I spray this tool
& when they mushroom, the denigration’s like graduation, they’ll stay in School.
aiiiight
Bitch check, I address it direct, yo gun talking’s all great..
but i’m completely cut from a different cloth..especially when knocking off fakes.
meh
Dismembered this guy, u shouldn't even have given a try,
s'why Ion't gaf u rose to the challenge, cuz look how it went for him in the Chi.
no sir been done


Overall after the first bar kinda got weaker





Ok champ match. Yall need to come with it though. Cred was kinda basic and dated, Schad had a dope opener and a couple of cool line and I think he was a lil better.


Schad

[Schadenfreude]

♤♤♤♤♤

[breach]

schad was smartr, feel like he changd his style to take out cred. the wife swap line was hot. alot of personl type lines to cancel out cred's constant gun lines. altho i liked the openr and the xmas line was cool. sum oldr vibes to a cpl of the othr bars i.e face off n' the barbarian. schad was freshr for sure. openr, single line cook, aaand wife swap were enough to get the W.

vote schad

[Barcotic]

birds nest
xmas carol

german suplex was a dope idea but wording prevented it from being a quote

vs

no personals
line cook
wife swap

closer than some of the votes say IMO
especially when I prefered cred's standouts
problem is he had one less
v/schadnf