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09-19-2016, 06:25 PM
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Foreva us, neva them.
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Adonis 1-0 Vs TeckNeek 1-0 - TECK WINS
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09-19-2016, 06:45 PM
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Tsk Tsk
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I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR |
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09-20-2016, 09:47 PM
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09-21-2016, 08:30 PM
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Tsk Tsk
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Let's get technical son, Adonis the demi God of texting with puns.
Meanwhile... This dunce is technically bitch, I'll give you the Bill, call my testicles Trump
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I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR Last edited by Adonis; 09-22-2016 at 01:21 PM. |
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09-22-2016, 01:39 PM
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You see me holdin your spine, its a fatality when my text win,
Ill check-in, then piss on the same deathbed that you get tucked in. Last edited by TeckNeek; 09-22-2016 at 01:41 PM. |
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09-22-2016, 04:21 PM
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NJ Devil
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Damn both was a struggle here
Umm Wow No one really punched But teck dissed where Adonis kind of said nothing lol and it was super confusing This is close V teck |
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09-22-2016, 05:21 PM
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Ad mini tator
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Tek with a more direct punch
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09-22-2016, 10:16 PM
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Try this shit
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Adonis fell flat
Teck had a direct soft jab here. Light battle here Vote / Teck
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09-23-2016, 12:15 AM
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Adonis - my fellow topicalist brother. Too wordy. Gotta get to the point more. Punchline gets lost in the shuffle.
Teck - more direct. more impact. Vote -- Teckneek
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09-23-2016, 08:00 AM
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LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS
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got Teck here, just cleaner and more direct
sorry donny
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09-23-2016, 11:49 PM
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As far as schemes u both got it.
Just focus on more direct wordplay. Tek wins for being more direct. V tek |
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09-24-2016, 12:59 PM
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neither had much going on.
Vote teck for a basic diss. |
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09-24-2016, 01:19 PM
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Pay Homage
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Light battle imo... Thought Adonis could have done better....Trump line wasn't a harsh punch tb honest...teck was all right, not the best but not the worst either...eh could go either way, perhaps voting on just personal preference here...my vote goes to:
tekneeks
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09-24-2016, 06:56 PM
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I got Adonis...both were weak, but his was written better imo.
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09-25-2016, 04:06 AM
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both bars were hog wash tbh.
vote Neek Mills though for an actual attempt |
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09-25-2016, 07:10 AM
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Bullying Yall Bitches.
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Yeah I Gave this one to tek
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