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Quarter O · 08-10-2016, 05:40 PM

I'm the bad seed put me in the ground grow poison Ive
.. I could bite my tongue and let the fans voice my mind
..ride or die the grim reeper gon enjoy the ride
I'm one with my car, like Paul walker conjoined inside
.. We make joint ventures team up and make a pact
Then make joint ventures call the weed man for that pack
relax among kings..these cats on front street,
book of rhymes? special edition rap for dummies
find em in the streets when I'm just pumpin petro
I'd steal on em.... even with steel on them metros
I keep it pushin, destinations to cement footprints
from bangers, get that bounce off me - even bullets,
would ricochate these raps
... My circle is tight sum of these boyz in the hood will 'Rick' a shady cat
but off that... Seems that's all y'all wanna hear
Hit my man who pirates music till he a bucKaneer
something to bump for the night add the armoral
pick up this catfish but I dipped quick in that tarter sauce
Mitsubishi. that hoe got that before n after
she reached new heights of ugly I ain't going for the ladder
had to laugh it off. That's what I get internet dating
and to think I spent a buck on sum winter fresh
'magine what my cock a do in the morn to a chicken head lady
have her take me to waffle house breaking benjamins frankly,
missing the baby boy... in-the-bed daydreams,
I stuck in-the-head, she's been fucked in-the-head lately
.. I lay on top like bunk beds
take a number 2 drop bombs once that funks flexed
I use that fuckin broad for some sex of course
.. And a pad to crash like I need tech support
I smash n dash relationships don't rush in em yet
I'll settle when I knock one from a game of Russian roulette
.. One shot kill, leave it up to chance
, no family man. Don't worry bout no bundle plans.

Mr. J · 08-24-2016, 06:23 PM

Feels like you have been listening to a lot of Wayne.
I thought that opening line was lacking in impact.
(poison ive?) seriously? its ivy & shouldnt be sacrificed for rhyme
sure its a minor misstep but if you are the same guy who records then how does poison ive sound?
doesnt sound good you dont want your listeners to think you are ignorant do you?
anyway I guess it makes sense with the whole title of this topic...
you know what never mind the previous sentence & just continue doing you.
but seriously you said Benjamin Frankly? wtf? lol...no...no...no more

08-10-2016, 05:40 PM	#1
Quarter O Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 109 Rep Power: 0	SDE Sex, Drugz, & Entertainment I'm the bad seed put me in the ground grow poison Ive .. I could bite my tongue and let the fans voice my mind ..ride or die the grim reeper gon enjoy the ride I'm one with my car, like Paul walker conjoined inside .. We make joint ventures team up and make a pact Then make joint ventures call the weed man for that pack relax among kings..these cats on front street, book of rhymes? special edition rap for dummies find em in the streets when I'm just pumpin petro I'd steal on em.... even with steel on them metros I keep it pushin, destinations to cement footprints from bangers, get that bounce off me - even bullets, would ricochate these raps ... My circle is tight sum of these boyz in the hood will 'Rick' a shady cat but off that... Seems that's all y'all wanna hear Hit my man who pirates music till he a bucKaneer something to bump for the night add the armoral pick up this catfish but I dipped quick in that tarter sauce Mitsubishi. that hoe got that before n after she reached new heights of ugly I ain't going for the ladder had to laugh it off. That's what I get internet dating and to think I spent a buck on sum winter fresh 'magine what my cock a do in the morn to a chicken head lady have her take me to waffle house breaking benjamins frankly, missing the baby boy... in-the-bed daydreams, I stuck in-the-head, she's been fucked in-the-head lately .. I lay on top like bunk beds take a number 2 drop bombs once that funks flexed I use that fuckin broad for some sex of course .. And a pad to crash like I need tech support I smash n dash relationships don't rush in em yet I'll settle when I knock one from a game of Russian roulette .. One shot kill, leave it up to chance , no family man. Don't worry bout no bundle plans. Last edited by Quarter O; 08-10-2016 at 05:51 PM.

08-24-2016, 06:23 PM	#2
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Feels like you have been listening to a lot of Wayne. I thought that opening line was lacking in impact. (poison ive?) seriously? its ivy & shouldnt be sacrificed for rhyme sure its a minor misstep but if you are the same guy who records then how does poison ive sound? doesnt sound good you dont want your listeners to think you are ignorant do you? anyway I guess it makes sense with the whole title of this topic... you know what never mind the previous sentence & just continue doing you. but seriously you said Benjamin Frankly? wtf? lol...no...no...no more __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you