Week 1: Alice White vs. Og Smokestein (ALICE WHITE WINS BY NO-SHOW)

asylum · 03-01-2016, 01:24 AM

Season 6

Verses are due SATURDAY 3/5 at 12:59 PST. THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS.

Voting ends MONDAY 3/7 at 12:59 PST.

Verses may not exceed 16 lines

Voting on four battles is required. If you win and don't vote the requirement you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote the requirement, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your four votes in the voting thread.

Topic: Black Country Woman

Good luck to both participants. @Alice White @Og Smokestein

Alice White · 03-01-2016, 10:56 AM

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Og smokinstein · 03-04-2016, 12:05 AM

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asylum · 03-05-2016, 09:26 PM

Verses due in five hours and forty five minutes! @Alice White @Og smokinstein

Alice White · 03-06-2016, 12:27 AM

Sandwell, 1st of June 1948

dying embers lightened up the sky today; as
reprisal renders her charred path in a timeless state; where
silence's presence is accompanied by a nightingale; and
frightening fragments transubstantiate into tidal waves,
- as Emma's wishful thinking dissipates.. on a crimson ray.

"Is it because of the loved one I betrayed?
Or is it because I never obliged to stay?
Mama, why didn't you tell me right away!"
The home once harbouring her childlike soul,
it bore her nascent pride out of mine and coal,
she would rise from the ashes with a revival of her own..
But right now..
There are tears in my eyes as I am trying to grasp the line to say,
"the..mining chamber, where my dear father p..slept away.."
- rising embers brightened up the sky today, in the Black Country.

* Black Country was one of the most industrialised parts of Britain during the Industrialised Revolution, with coal mines, steel mills, etc.

03-01-2016, 01:24 AM	#1
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 993 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214208	Week 1: Alice White vs. Og Smokestein (ALICE WHITE WINS BY NO-SHOW) Season 6 Verses are due SATURDAY 3/5 at 12:59 PST. THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS. Voting ends MONDAY 3/7 at 12:59 PST. Verses may not exceed 16 lines Voting on four battles is required. If you win and don't vote the requirement you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote the requirement, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your four votes in the voting thread. Topic: Black Country Woman Good luck to both participants. @Alice White @Og Smokestein Last edited by asylum; 03-06-2016 at 01:14 PM.

03-01-2016, 10:56 AM	#2
Alice White Member Join Date: Dec 2015 Posts: 72 Rep Power: 0	Check __________________ https://theprincesstroll.wordpress.com

03-06-2016, 12:27 AM	#5
Alice White Member Join Date: Dec 2015 Posts: 72 Rep Power: 0	*Sandwell, 1st of June 1948* dying embers lightened up the sky today; as reprisal renders her charred path in a timeless state; where silence's presence is accompanied by a nightingale; and frightening fragments transubstantiate into tidal waves, - as Emma's wishful thinking dissipates.. on a crimson ray. "Is it because of the loved one I betrayed? Or is it because I never obliged to stay? Mama, why didn't you tell me right away!" The home once harbouring her childlike soul, it bore her nascent pride out of mine and coal, she would rise from the ashes with a revival of her own.. But right now.. There are tears in my eyes as I am trying to grasp the line to say, "the..mining chamber, where my dear father p..slept away.." - rising embers brightened up the sky today, in the Black Country. * Black Country was one of the most industrialised parts of Britain during the Industrialised Revolution, with coal mines, steel mills, etc. __________________ https://theprincesstroll.wordpress.com Last edited by Alice White; 03-06-2016 at 12:31 AM. Reason: Definition

03-04-2016, 12:05 AM	#3
Og smokinstein The Marathon Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 114 Battle Record: 3-4 Rep Power: 352396	Check

03-05-2016, 09:26 PM	#4
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 993 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214208	Verses due in five hours and forty five minutes! @Alice White @Og smokinstein