Life Behind Bars

MadVerbs · 01-26-2016, 04:23 PM

Picture ah scene, seen befo'..
many teens who were seeds deceived by fiends & hoes.
Watched their leads leave without ah dream to know,
known to mislead their own wit ah scheme or hoax.
So at 15 wit some weed to cope
ah mind lost, only got believes & hopes..
they watch time stop in ah confined box wit 6 weeks to go !
Try to align plots, their peeks & lows
tha times they thought tha weak would show.
No signs they'll stop to ease tha flow..
so, in lines near cops these teens'll grow.
Livin through ah life where you earn or ya lack,
you learn to adapt or tha one givin you advice'll
b hittin you w knifes as ya turnin ya back!
& like that, it's closed curtains.. ah wrap.
Tha foes workin ah trap as they post, lurkin in back
after they chose curtain attacks !
They're from ah place where you get smoked,
now yo folk hurtin in black over smokes, purp n tha stash.
& ya upstate, cuffed.. gates.. pushin smokes n purp for ya cash !
Shit that'd put most in dirt in ah flash,
rip hope n worth from ya grasp.
So, ya fightin back in ah state of struggle,
to escape tha trouble n get ya life in act..
prayin you hit tha right of paths !
Cause you've grown in tha system,
from ah teen to an addict.
Tryna find home where tha kid's come,
every scene is imagined but you cant seem to attach it.
It's not lean or ah wrap w green that is passed,
it's.. life behind bars, so many fiend for tha habit.

dead man · 01-26-2016, 05:57 PM

Why do you write "ah" instead of "a"?

Do you really pronounce it that way?

Geno · 02-12-2016, 04:55 PM

Was dope

01-26-2016, 04:23 PM	#1
MadVerbs Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2015 Posts: 7 Rep Power: 0	Life Behind Bars Picture ah scene, seen befo'.. many teens who were seeds deceived by fiends & hoes. Watched their leads leave without ah dream to know, known to mislead their own wit ah scheme or hoax. So at 15 wit some weed to cope ah mind lost, only got believes & hopes.. they watch time stop in ah confined box wit 6 weeks to go ! Try to align plots, their peeks & lows tha times they thought tha weak would show. No signs they'll stop to ease tha flow.. so, in lines near cops these teens'll grow. Livin through ah life where you earn or ya lack, you learn to adapt or tha one givin you advice'll b hittin you w knifes as ya turnin ya back! & like that, it's closed curtains.. ah wrap. Tha foes workin ah trap as they post, lurkin in back after they chose curtain attacks ! They're from ah place where you get smoked, now yo folk hurtin in black over smokes, purp n tha stash. & ya upstate, cuffed.. gates.. pushin smokes n purp for ya cash ! Shit that'd put most in dirt in ah flash, rip hope n worth from ya grasp. So, ya fightin back in ah state of struggle, to escape tha trouble n get ya life in act.. prayin you hit tha right of paths ! Cause you've grown in tha system, from ah teen to an addict. Tryna find home where tha kid's come, every scene is imagined but you cant seem to attach it. It's not lean or ah wrap w green that is passed, it's.. life behind bars, so many fiend for tha habit.

01-26-2016, 05:57 PM	#2
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	Why do you write "ah" instead of "a"? Do you really pronounce it that way? __________________ Zack Wicks for president

02-12-2016, 04:55 PM	#3
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Was dope __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*