Silver Vs Witty - Witty wins ( record needs updating )

Dope girl · 01-05-2016, 07:42 PM

10-16 lines

Witty · 01-06-2016, 03:51 AM

Check :)

dead @ tag

Dope girl · 01-07-2016, 07:04 PM

I will drop by tonight or tomorrow

Dope girl · 01-09-2016, 05:54 PM

You are chubby & bald
Looking at ya cuz my face 2 scald
Cuz ya so ugly, when I look it hurts
I recommend ya get a custom made shirt,
Cuz ya 2 chubby for any store material.
Ya enjoyed eating friut loops
Now ya see close 2 death
Might as well stop& enjoy what's left!
I'm off da chain
I make ya feel da pain
Ya stuff drown
I'm always the Queen on top ya I'm wearing the Crown
I don't give a fuck!
You drop a million still didn't get no buck
start a whore, I distroy ya

I tried ya turn

veritas · 01-11-2016, 02:07 PM

flames.

Witty · 01-11-2016, 03:53 PM

Girl ur so pretty, bounce in slow mo on a vid
Take them titties out, take a photo for the kid
Nah bitch, you looked like a baked potato
You look like you're made from play-doh
I'll still put my dick all up in ur butt crack
Even tho you look like bigfoot's nut sack
I just playing, you're a dame, a princess
And a perfect reason to refrain from incest
You EVER come near me, I'm attacking with mace
How your lips bigger than your actual face?
Are you ill tho? You need to get up on that health tip
Looking like the human embodiment of Zelph's lip
In closing, you be stanky like a pet's mange
And you look like mr hanky had a sex change

veritas · 01-11-2016, 04:06 PM

I think fox might have won this.....Idk.

Artifice · 03-26-2016, 06:06 AM

Witty took this easily, imo. Silver didn't really have any punches. He threw insults, but there was nothing that made them effective. Witty started out the same, but from the princess/incest couplet onward his threw punches that at least landed and had some umph behind them.

v/ Witty

Adverse · 04-03-2016, 04:37 PM

Honestly, I just did not feel much in this battle, but Witty did come with fresher concepts and more well put together ideas.

Silver, You need to be a bit more clever with your concepts, throw in some personals and nameplays, and if you're going to insult something predictable like baldness or chubbiness, try and bring a punchline or an original concept to it, at least jokes, if you want more advice strike me.

Anyways, Witty wins pretty easily.

Vote - Witty

01-05-2016, 07:42 PM	#1
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,788 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	Silver Vs Witty - Witty wins ( record needs updating ) 10-16 lines

01-06-2016, 03:51 AM	#2
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Check :) dead @ tag __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

01-11-2016, 03:53 PM	#6
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Girl ur so pretty, bounce in slow mo on a vid Take them titties out, take a photo for the kid Nah bitch, you looked like a baked potato You look like you're made from play-doh I'll still put my dick all up in ur butt crack Even tho you look like bigfoot's nut sack I just playing, you're a dame, a princess And a perfect reason to refrain from incest You EVER come near me, I'm attacking with mace How your lips bigger than your actual face? Are you ill tho? You need to get up on that health tip Looking like the human embodiment of Zelph's lip In closing, you be stanky like a pet's mange And you look like mr hanky had a sex change __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

01-07-2016, 07:04 PM	#3
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,788 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	I will drop by tonight or tomorrow

01-09-2016, 05:54 PM	#4
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,788 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	You are chubby & bald Looking at ya cuz my face 2 scald Cuz ya so ugly, when I look it hurts I recommend ya get a custom made shirt, Cuz ya 2 chubby for any store material. Ya enjoyed eating friut loops Now ya see close 2 death Might as well stop& enjoy what's left! I'm off da chain I make ya feel da pain Ya stuff drown I'm always the Queen on top ya I'm wearing the Crown I don't give a fuck! You drop a million still didn't get no buck start a whore, I distroy ya I tried ya turn

03-26-2016, 06:06 AM	#8
Artifice Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 269 Battle Record: 17-9 Champed - Art Of Writing League - GWL Picture Challenge Rep Power: 3944949	Witty took this easily, imo. Silver didn't really have any punches. He threw insults, but there was nothing that made them effective. Witty started out the same, but from the princess/incest couplet onward his threw punches that at least landed and had some umph behind them. v/ Witty

04-03-2016, 04:37 PM	#9
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Honestly, I just did not feel much in this battle, but Witty did come with fresher concepts and more well put together ideas. Silver, You need to be a bit more clever with your concepts, throw in some personals and nameplays, and if you're going to insult something predictable like baldness or chubbiness, try and bring a punchline or an original concept to it, at least jokes, if you want more advice strike me. Anyways, Witty wins pretty easily. Vote - Witty