RND1. Odd Ways vs Bust {Bust wins}

[Hush]

Battle Arena Tournament

@Odd Ways @Bust

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due SUNDAY,
  August 2nd 2015 11:59 PM PST.
• Check Ins are due WEDNESDAY, July 11th 2014
• Voting ends Friday July 16th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
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• Extensions are 24 hours
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  means you will be disqualified.
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  must match the 1st person's line amount.

[Bash]

Fuck it..

Listen..

ur a faggot to some, ain't really no fakin it bum
if a dude slides their fist in bust, oh they'll be turned on quicker than one
n that chick u hold dear, I hit her raw let's be clear
the way my shaft lifted that bitch, she'd revolutionize pole vaulting for yrs
to hush he's great, but to the league he's gay
it's ironic that after i spaz out, he'll get bodied for 2 weeks straight
those bars r fuckin dull, can't see how voters read his shit
u take so long to reel a punch, we'd rather watch Broke Lesnar go n fish
ya moms ain't a looker real rap, but trust Odd'll tear up the cat
only reason that brute'll come over, is cuz she knows my sex game is just that

[Bust]

Ur to Fragile to fuck wit me, get that scrawny build crushed
Shiit 1 punch'll have this Detroit pussy plagued wit injuries, that's Chauncy Billups
While he tryna be the next Allen, Im consistently makin sure his slut gets dick
So any1 sayin odd, knight...is just pointing out a rare 1 ain't fucked his bitch..
Ya whole Stee is broke, not sure if doe could fix but no1's as lame as U be, ways
So take this sign, can, n ur bummy style to a I-75 off ramp where changes to be made
U ain't talked about cos ur Wack, so wouldn't it be retarded if ya buzzin,
I mean this bitch has to butt his head in every fuckin thread to be part of the discussion
Spent ur whole life on boards n u FINALLY won ur first site award
see off the top I wanted to give u lots a props... But FN's not a tourny to be prewritin for,

[Witty]

ur a faggot to some, ain't really no fakin it bum
if a dude slides their fist in bust, oh they'll be turned on quicker than one
this was weird to me :/
n that chick u hold dear, I hit her raw let's be clear
the way my shaft lifted that bitch, she'd revolutionize pole vaulting for yrs
ehhh
to hush he's great, but to the league he's gay
it's ironic that after i spaz out, he'll get bodied for 2 weeks straight
decent
those bars r fuckin dull, can't see how voters read his shit
u take so long to reel a punch, we'd rather watch Broke Lesnar go n fish
ok-ish, wording needs work
ya moms ain't a looker real rap, but trust Odd'll tear up the cat
only reason that brute'll come over, is cuz she knows my sex game is just that
not bad

vs

Ur to Fragile to fuck wit me, get that scrawny build crushed
Shiit 1 punch'll have this Detroit pussy plagued wit injuries, that's Chauncy Billups
Don't get it, sorry my bad, I'm a foreign :/
While he tryna be the next Allen, Im consistently makin sure his slut gets dick
So any1 sayin odd, knight...is just pointing out a rare 1 ain't fucked his bitch..
ok
Ya whole Stee is broke, not sure if doe could fix but no1's as lame as U be, ways
So take this sign, can, n ur bummy style to a I-75 off ramp where changes to be made
wording threw me off but this was cool
U ain't talked about cos ur Wack, so wouldn't it be retarded if ya buzzin,
I mean this bitch has to butt his head in every fuckin thread to be part of the discussion
Cool
Spent ur whole life on boards n u FINALLY won ur first site award
see off the top I wanted to give u lots a props... But FN's not a tourny to be prewritin for
Basic, but not bad

Expected more from this battle, Odd can do a lot better, neither really had any big punches, just little jabs but Bust I think had the better concepts, and other than one line, his verse was smoother and worded a lot better. Pretty even on quotes so I'm giving it to Bust for a more creative and well written verse.

Vote - Bust

[Kill Spree]

shaft lifted, Ispaz was aight, real a punch was cool(Could have been way doper) felt your closer was dissing ur self.....


bust - like odd knight, and your closer

felt bust came up a bit short here, odd had some decent hits and was more consistent. felt he edged this one

v/odd

[Ghost1]

Fuck it..

Oh word?

Listen..
Ok I'm ready


ur a faggot to some, ain't really no fakin it bum
if a dude slides their fist in bust, oh they'll be turned on quicker than one

Wtf is this weird gay shit? No thank u sir.

n that chick u hold dear, I hit her raw let's be clear
the way my shaft lifted that bitch, she'd revolutionize pole vaulting for yrs

Eh played even w the orc wording lol

to hush he's great, but to the league he's gay
it's ironic that after i spaz out, he'll get bodied for 2 weeks straight

Fire

those bars r fuckin dull, can't see how voters read his shit
u take so long to reel a punch, we'd rather watch Broke Lesnar go n fish

Ok

ya moms ain't a looker real rap, but trust Odd'll tear up the cat
only reason that brute'll come over, is cuz she knows my sex game is just that

Lol this is cool


Ur to Fragile to fuck wit me, get that scrawny build crushed
Shiit 1 punch'll have this Detroit pussy plagued wit injuries, that's Chauncy Billups

Aighttt

While he tryna be the next Allen, Im consistently makin sure his slut gets dick
So any1 sayin odd, knight...is just pointing out a rare 1 ain't fucked his bitch..

Hit

Ya whole Stee is broke, not sure if doe could fix but no1's as lame as U be, ways
So take this sign, can, n ur bummy style to a I-75 off ramp where changes to be made

Dope

U ain't talked about cos ur Wack, so wouldn't it be retarded if ya buzzin,
I mean this bitch has to butt his head in every fuckin thread to be part of the discussion

Lol this isn't much

Spent ur whole life on boards n u FINALLY won ur first site award
see off the top I wanted to give u lots a props... But FN's not a tourny to be prewritin for

Got em. But light lol.



Bust came wayyyy hotter here then his battle in the nbl I just read. An also thought odd came alot weaker then wat I've seen of him previously.thought bust had the heavy hitters in this one.

V bust

[Unfukwitable]

n that chick u hold dear, I hit her raw let's be clear
the way my shaft lifted that bitch, she'd revolutionize pole vaulting for yrs
those bars r fuckin dull, can't see how voters read his shit
u take so long to reel a punch, we'd rather watch Broke Lesnar go n fish
ya moms ain't a looker real rap, but trust Odd'll tear up the cat
only reason that brute'll come over, is cuz she knows my sex game is just that

vs

While he tryna be the next Allen, Im consistently makin sure his slut gets dick
So any1 sayin odd, knight...is just pointing out a rare 1 ain't fucked his bitch..
Ya whole Stee is broke, not sure if doe could fix but no1's as lame as U be, ways
So take this sign, can, n ur bummy style to a I-75 off ramp where changes to be made
Spent ur whole life on boards n u FINALLY won ur first site award
see off the top I wanted to give u lots a props... But FN's not a tourny to be prewritin for


damn this is real close but I feel like I had to go one way he was a bit more personal on top of his hits to me and he just slightly edged it I can see why this could go either way but personally I got one... v/Bust

[8===D~~~~(}:]

ur a faggot to some, ain't really no fakin it bum
if a dude slides their fist in bust, oh they'll be turned on quicker than one
idk why this made me laugh so hard but it's srsly just gay lol
n that chick u hold dear, I hit her raw let's be clear
the way my shaft lifted that bitch, she'd revolutionize pole vaulting for yrs
alright pretty good
to hush he's great, but to the league he's gay
it's ironic that after i spaz out, he'll get bodied for 2 weeks straight
yeet, good one
those bars r fuckin dull, can't see how voters read his shit
u take so long to reel a punch, we'd rather watch Broke Lesnar go n fish
lol alright
ya moms ain't a looker real rap, but trust Odd'll tear up the cat
only reason that brute'll come over, is cuz she knows my sex game is just that
ok


Vs


Ur to Fragile to fuck wit me, get that scrawny build crushed
Shiit 1 punch'll have this Detroit pussy plagued wit injuries, that's Chauncy Billups
hmm ok
While he tryna be the next Allen, Im consistently makin sure his slut gets dick
So any1 sayin odd, knight...is just pointing out a rare 1 ain't fucked his bitch..
ha alright lol
Ya whole Stee is broke, not sure if doe could fix but no1's as lame as U be, ways
So take this sign, can, n ur bummy style to a I-75 off ramp where changes to be made
too much going on here
U ain't talked about cos ur Wack, so wouldn't it be retarded if ya buzzin,
I mean this bitch has to butt his head in every fuckin thread to be part of the discussion
ehh not feelin
Spent ur whole life on boards n u FINALLY won ur first site award
see off the top I wanted to give u lots a props... But FN's not a tourny to be prewritin for,
alright


This battle was pretty dope tbh, really close in quotables and hard to make a decision. I think odd ways came more consistent and I was feelin his verse a bit more. Good shit to both. Vote: Odd

[iSpaz]

ur a faggot to some, ain't really no fakin it bum
if a dude slides their fist in bust, oh they'll be turned on quicker than one
// idk bro idk
n that chick u hold dear, I hit her raw let's be clear
the way my shaft lifted that bitch, she'd revolutionize pole vaulting for yrs
// felt like it was too easy
to hush he's great, but to the league he's gay
it's ironic that after i spaz out, he'll get bodied for 2 weeks straight
// dope
those bars r fuckin dull, can't see how voters read his shit
u take so long to reel a punch, we'd rather watch Broke Lesnar go n fish
// thought this was cool
ya moms ain't a looker real rap, but trust Odd'll tear up the cat
only reason that brute'll come over, is cuz she knows my sex game is just that
// i liked this

vs

Ur to Fragile to fuck wit me, get that scrawny build crushed
Shiit 1 punch'll have this Detroit pussy plagued wit injuries, that's Chauncy Billups
// eh not feeling
While he tryna be the next Allen, Im consistently makin sure his slut gets dick
So any1 sayin odd, knight...is just pointing out a rare 1 ain't fucked his bitch..
// this was ok, uh basically just odd night?
Ya whole Stee is broke, not sure if doe could fix but no1's as lame as U be, ways
So take this sign, can, n ur bummy style to a I-75 off ramp where changes to be made
// this ended cool, took awhile to get there
U ain't talked about cos ur Wack, so wouldn't it be retarded if ya buzzin,
I mean this bitch has to butt his head in every fuckin thread to be part of the discussion
// just a statement
Spent ur whole life on boards n u FINALLY won ur first site award
see off the top I wanted to give u lots a props... But FN's not a tourny to be prewritin for
// he probably did do that


v/odd

[Mr. J]

n that chick u hold dear, I hit her raw let's be clear
the way my shaft lifted that bitch, she'd revolutionize pole vaulting for yrs
to hush he's great, but to the league he's gay
it's ironic that after i spaz out, he'll get bodied for 2 weeks straight
^^^^
This was the better part of your verse that hit
that opener made me chuckle a bit & made me think it was going to be dope
but then I got to the 'go fish' section and it just seemed worded funny
I didn't really like that closer either, something was off about that
but otherwise I enjoyed the section quoted above

Ya whole Stee is broke, not sure if doe could fix but no1's as lame as U be, ways
So take this sign, can, n ur bummy style to a I-75 off ramp where changes to be made
U ain't talked about cos ur Wack, so wouldn't it be retarded if ya buzzin,
I mean this bitch has to butt his head in every fuckin thread to be part of the discussion
Spent ur whole life on boards n u FINALLY won ur first site award
see off the top I wanted to give u lots a props... But FN's not a tourny to be prewritin for
^^^^
I feel like you really built up steam right here..
that opening bar was cool but seemed worded funny
as for the section that followed it was cool, but could have hit harder
I really enjoyed a majority of the ending though..nice work

v/I got Bust on this one, I thought Odd kind of shot himself in the foot.
He came nicely but due to wording and a clunky finish I feel Bust edged it out
dope battle fella's

[Useless]

those bars r fuckin dull, can't see how voters read his shit
u take so long to reel a punch, we'd rather watch Broke Lesnar go n fish
ya moms ain't a looker real rap, but trust Odd'll tear up the cat
only reason that brute'll come over, is cuz she knows my sex game is just that
----broke lesnar line coulda been a lot doper imo but it was still nice tho. Brutal was a simple wp but OK.

Vs.

While he tryna be the next Allen, Im consistently makin sure his slut gets dick
So any1 sayin odd, knight...is just pointing out a rare 1 ain't fucked his bitch..
Ya whole Stee is broke, not sure if doe could fix but no1's as lame as U be, ways
So take this sign, can, n ur bummy style to a I-75 off ramp where changes to be made
Spent ur whole life on boards n u FINALLY won ur first site award
see off the top I wanted to give u lots a props... But FN's not a tourny to be prewritin for
-----these lines were good. And u only had one miss, the Chauncey line was an almost.

I got bust with better and more quotables.

V. Bust

[Cred]

Ispaz out n ehhh reel punch ALMOST made it

vs

Fight night

Hmmm. Not really wat I expected from either tbch. Both had sum pretty bad misses or sum i jus wasnt feeling at all. Idk going by the verse i have it 1vs 1 n a possible. Odd edged dis one imo

Vote - odd ways

[Victor.]

5-4 Bust, we need more votes.

[Orc]

n that chick u hold dear, I hit her raw let's be clear
the way my shaft lifted that bitch, she'd revolutionize pole vaulting for yrs
to hush he's great, but to the league he's gay
it's ironic that after i spaz out, he'll get bodied for 2 weeks straight


Vs


Ur to Fragile to fuck wit me, get that scrawny build crushed
Shiit 1 punch'll have this Detroit pussy plagued wit injuries, that's Chauncy Billups
Spent ur whole life on boards n u FINALLY won ur first site award
see off the top I wanted to give u lots a props... But FN's not a tourny to be prewritin for,

not sure who to vote for tbh

neck and neck

i liked Busts attempts more. he remind me of Bags when he first started, has a raw approach. Odd's is more NC friendly but i don't think it worked in his favour here

i think Bust edged it, could definitely go either way

[Victor.]

6-4 Bust wins. All battles must be decided by at least TWO votes.