Dre 2-3 vs IAmRhetoric 2-3 - AMEN WINS

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Netcees Battle League Season VIII

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• Verses are due Thursday, July 23th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
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First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Dre @IAmRhetoric

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Rhetoric is penalized 4 votes for missing voting last week

penalty will take effect if votes aren't made up by thursday

[Amen.]

10

[IAmRhetoric]

Only shit you pop is miller lite, any slugs you throw you missin,
The gun spark no ignition, you aint got cans like the prohibition

Your girl my bitch, you know i keep her stationed
I say the right string of words n she do what i tell her to like a sleeper agent

I got the gun plug in France, 30 goons on my facebook friendslist,
So it aint nothin to run up on his bitch and give her the french tips,

cats on NC clowned you, wassup with that faggot name?
If I aint got the magnum aimed then you gettin hit with the truck, no Madden game

Spittin dragon flames, i'm brutal w/ every verb that i use
kid you couldn't be mean with your words if you caught a charge for verbal abuse

Prepare the team, Faggot u can't ketchup when i pair the beams,
Only a time a chik say "u hot dog" is when you're dressed up as one outside the local dairy queen

you're a fairy fiend, you know i'm mean with the chopper,
so the aftermath of me and him? wont be the last time Dre needs a doctor

dropped 14 @Dre

[Amen.]

Originally Posted by IAmRhetoric in Week 15 Chat

@Bust good performance bro.. i think im gonna sign out and start workin on my shit some more

tired of getting these l's..

Listen man…

Today he’ll learn quickly, this kid stay getting burned w/ the spits,
listen; before you trip, get that hoe of a mother to sign the permission slip.
This young faggot annoyin so I’m EASILY checkin him this moment,
Believe me; when I roll up you’ll get this work… NO Mexican Employment.
Why act gangsta, I seen ya’ picture, this ugly fat kid must be jokin,
This nerds known for being stuck up… Like every chick that he approaches.
He’s garbo w/ it, look his record, seems EVERYONE pealed his wig,
Everythin you drops, minor kid, even GOW’S cousin wouldn’t feel the shit.
You’ll never get as real as this, I’m on a whole new level of text, it’s scary,
Fact is; ya’ verses have so many dead spots – it could rival a pet cemetery.
You’re a joke, so when you gonna learn that ya FLOWS ARE TRASH!
Ironic; Failed to lay Bust down…
But every week your treated like one – SMOKED & Passed.
Plus ya’ HOE is wack, I’m honestly tired of doggin it, AND DUDE…
Ambush’n her mouth so often, next time ya’ kiss, your flossin w/ my pubes.

14, rest ez.

[El Muffin]

Only shit you pop is miller lite, any slugs you throw you missin,
The gun spark no ignition, you aint got cans like the prohibition
(concept had potential but the u aint got cans shit kinda weak. just saying he doesn't have guns. never seen the prohibition angle but when I think prohibition I don't think cans first. I think speakeasys n what they drink there tbh. its ok tho)

Your girl my bitch, you know i keep her stationed
I say the right string of words n she do what i tell her to like a sleeper agent
(hmm almost same as above. cool concept ok hit)

I got the gun plug in France, 30 goons on my facebook friendslist,
So it aint nothin to run up on his bitch and give her the french tips,
(this one I didn't like at all)

cats on NC clowned you, wassup with that faggot name?
If I aint got the magnum aimed then you gettin hit with the truck, no Madden game
(truck/madden done to death but the flow was decent. ok)

Spittin dragon flames, i'm brutal w/ every verb that i use
kid you couldn't be mean with your words if you caught a charge for verbal abuse
(this is older than rakim here tho)

Prepare the team, Faggot u can't ketchup when i pair the beams,
Only a time a chik say "u hot dog" is when you're dressed up as one outside the local dairy queen
(ketchup setup nono but lol @ the visual. like this)

you're a fairy fiend, you know i'm mean with the chopper,
so the aftermath of me and him? wont be the last time Dre needs a doctor
(kinda easy association. w/ the dr dre..the tie ins were well written tho. this ok too)



Today he’ll learn quickly, this kid stay getting burned w/ the spits,
listen; before you trip, get that hoe of a mother to sign the permission slip.
(no just rhymed awkward n kinda eh in inception)
This young faggot annoyin so I’m EASILY checkin him this moment,
Believe me; when I roll up you’ll get this work… NO Mexican Employment.
(lol this concept played but whole line worked. I can dig it)
Why act gangsta, I seen ya’ picture, this ugly fat kid must be jokin,
This nerds known for being stuck up… Like every chick that he approaches.
(ok u shoulda worked a he gets stabbed ref in there but its ok)
He’s garbo w/ it, look his record, seems EVERYONE pealed his wig,
Everythin you drops, minor kid, even GOW’S cousin wouldn’t feel the shit.
(ok)
You’ll never get as real as this, I’m on a whole new level of text, it’s scary,
Fact is; ya’ verses have so many dead spots – it could rival a pet cemetery.
(oh come on man this was pretty bad lol)
You’re a joke, so when you gonna learn that ya FLOWS ARE TRASH!
Ironic; Failed to lay Bust down…
But every week your treated like one – SMOKED & Passed.
(ungh this was dirty)
Plus ya’ HOE is wack, I’m honestly tired of doggin it, AND DUDE…
Ambush’n her mouth so often, next time ya’ kiss, your flossin w/ my pubes.
(lol cool)

mm kway weird battle

both had some good shit and some really bad shit

rhetoric pulled out the stick my dick in ur ear and fuck what u heard type line when the mean line he had

dre had dead spots like all dogs go to heaven which was on some he, be , g, bz shit

bust down was dirty tho. his last 4 were strong

rhet had a lot of ok lines. hotdog was funny but I think amen took it

v/amen

[Useless]

Only shit you pop is miller lite, any slugs you throw you missin,
The gun spark no ignition, you aint got cans like the prohibition
----I wanna like this but I don't really associate cans with prohibition. It was a nice try tho
Your girl my bitch, you know i keep her stationed
I say the right string of words n she do what i tell her to like a sleeper agent
----this could've been nice but didn't like the wording.
Prepare the team, Faggot u can't ketchup when i pair the beams,
Only a time a chik say "u hot dog" is when you're dressed up as one outside the local dairy queen
----fuckn deeeeaaad. This was roflzzz. Wasn't feeling ketchup in the setup tho. Concepts is super played but idc this was dope.

Only beef I got with this verse is ur misses were bad. Either super played or bland.

Plus ya’ HOE is wack, I’m honestly tired of doggin it, AND DUDE…
Ambush’n her mouth so often, next time ya’ kiss, your flossin w/ my pubes.
----OK

That's really the only quotable u had. Like ur whole verse was full of almost quotables but they were almost all played concepts. Even the gow reference was built around a played concept.

But I still gotta vote for dre because of consistency... He only had one bad miss whereas rhetoric had a few. And as dope as hotdog line was it too was built around a played concept. That shit was still lulz and lotb tho. If rhetoric would've had one or two more good jabs he would've had it.

V. Dre

[Bust]

Iam

Opener had a lot of potential, just fell flat at the end
String of words was an almost
French tips was ehh
Madden games was ooook, played concept tho
Mean with words verbal abuse is played also
I've seen hot dog before to but I feel like u referenced it cool.. Different twist made it ok
Didn't like the closer to much either


Dre

Opener was ehh
Mexican employment is pretty darn played
Stuck up coulda been doper, minus the simile,
Gow's cousin was ooook
Dead dogs named spots.. Lol ur funny man, wasn't that bad tho
Lay bust down was pretty good
Closer was ok,

Iunno this was a soft battle, lotta played not much fresh twists to um.. Iam just gotta take different angles man cos u got some cool concepts n honestly imo if u use similes make um dope af or it takes impact away.. Dre wasn't digging this verse that much either but u structured ure shit better n landed a couple more than Iam therefore I got u edging this...


Dre

[Unfukwitable]

Played material, Ok concepts, No sting.

vs.

He’s garbo w/ it, look his record, seems EVERYONE pealed his wig,
Everythin you drops, minor kid, even GOW’S cousin wouldn’t feel the shit.
Plus ya’ HOE is wack, I’m honestly tired of doggin it, AND DUDE…
Ambush’n her mouth so often, next time ya’ kiss, your flossin w/ my pubes.

..One took this easily the other had to much played ideas or lines that just didn't hit the others verse wasn't as good as I've seen from him but enough for the W. v/Amen

[Pinot Grij]

Rhetoric - prohibition and hot dog lines were cool ... sleeper agent line was fuckin' outstanding. From setup to execution. Hilarious and probably one of the best lines of the week. Nice drop.

Dre - stuck up line was nice - Pet Cemetery was probably the nicest line in your verse.

Overall, this was close and there were a few good hits on either side. There was also a few played concepts from both, which we're all guilty of. Overall, that sleeper agent put it over the top for me personally. That line really connected for me. But this was close.

Vote -- Rhetoric

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Originally Posted by IAmRhetoric

Only shit you pop is miller lite, any slugs you throw you missin,
The gun spark no ignition, you aint got cans like the prohibition
Nah, you could've flipped this better. And cans/prohibition? Ehh.
Your girl my bitch, you know i keep her stationed
I say the right string of words n she do what i tell her to like a sleeper agent
Not feeling.
I got the gun plug in France, 30 goons on my facebook friendslist,
So it aint nothin to run up on his bitch and give her the french tips,
Didn't like this either.
cats on NC clowned you, wassup with that faggot name?
If I aint got the magnum aimed then you gettin hit with the truck, no Madden game
This has a Muff style to it...it's ok.
Spittin dragon flames, i'm brutal w/ every verb that i use
kid you couldn't be mean with your words if you caught a charge for verbal abuse
Ehh. Think I've seen this.
Prepare the team, Faggot u can't ketchup when i pair the beams,
Only a time a chik say "u hot dog" is when you're dressed up as one outside the local dairy queen
Lol funny, but not too harsh. Decent tho.
you're a fairy fiend, you know i'm mean with the chopper,
so the aftermath of me and him? wont be the last time Dre needs a doctor
Nah.
dropped 14 @Dre

Originally Posted by Amen

Listen man…

Today he’ll learn quickly, this kid stay getting burned w/ the spits,
listen; before you trip, get that hoe of a mother to sign the permission slip.
Nah.
This young faggot annoyin so I’m EASILY checkin him this moment,
Believe me; when I roll up you’ll get this work… NO Mexican Employment.
This kinda cool.
Why act gangsta, I seen ya’ picture, this ugly fat kid must be jokin,
This nerds known for being stuck up… Like every chick that he approaches.
This is ok.
He’s garbo w/ it, look his record, seems EVERYONE pealed his wig,
Everythin you drops, minor kid, even GOW’S cousin wouldn’t feel the shit.
Don't get it.
You’ll never get as real as this, I’m on a whole new level of text, it’s scary,
Fact is; ya’ verses have so many dead spots – it could rival a pet cemetery.
I've seen pet cemetery before, but I'm not sure if it's been flipped like this. It's ok.
You’re a joke, so when you gonna learn that ya FLOWS ARE TRASH!
Ironic; Failed to lay Bust down…
But every week your treated like one – SMOKED & Passed.
Eh.
Plus ya’ HOE is wack, I’m honestly tired of doggin it, AND DUDE…
Ambush’n her mouth so often, next time ya’ kiss, your flossin w/ my pubes.
Eh.
14, rest ez.

This was pretty close. I think Dre edged it on consistency, but had Rhet executed a couple of his lines better, he would've taken this.

Dre

[Ace]

aside from the hot dog line rhetoric got some nice concepts.. they werent executed solid tho.. the sleeper agent/french shit could have been a killer 4 lines but it didnt land well here.. madden was gully tho
Amen first half was solid then started to trail off.. but def had more quotables for me than ur opponent

v Amen

[Mr. J]

Spittin dragon flames, i'm brutal w/ every verb that i use
kid you couldn't be mean with your words if you caught a charge for verbal abuse

Prepare the team, Faggot u can't ketchup when i pair the beams,
Only a time a chik say "u hot dog" is when you're dressed up as one outside the local dairy queen
^^^^^^^^
I feel like these were your strongest lines, the set ups seemed rough
but other than that some of the concepts you brought would have worked
I just felt like the punch could have hit harder had the set up not been weird
I lol'd at the hot dog line though, it was kind of odd how the punch landed
but it still worked...

Why act gangsta, I seen ya’ picture, this ugly fat kid must be jokin,
This nerds known for being stuck up… Like every chick that he approaches.
He’s garbo w/ it, look his record, seems EVERYONE pealed his wig,
Everythin you drops, minor kid, even GOW’S cousin wouldn’t feel the shit.
^^^^^^
this section made me lol, I thought the closer was dope as well
I didn't really enjoy that opener though, I see how it works
but I just felt like you could have opened better, that mexican employment was lulz worthy
but it wasn't as hard hitting as the above quoted and the closer


v/Dre, I felt like he came correct with the lines as well as execution
IAm had a decent run but some of the wording threw me off
his best line that seemed to work well was the Dairy Queen line
good use of set up and putting a visual punch together
dope battle fella's

[Netcees Battle League]

7-1 Amen wins.