07-19-2015, 01:27 PM | #1 |
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Lotto Smirk vs Remy LeBeau - REMY WINS
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due 48 hrs from both check ins first to 5 votes wins 3-0 KO rule in effect @Lotto Smirk @Remy LeBeau Lets make it a good one!
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07-20-2015, 01:34 PM | #2 |
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mediorce opponents verses make u sweat, bein dope? I don't think u are able had trouble dealing with aces, even when you brought all your best cards to the table I'll be thanked greatly for this killing, there'll be headshots without warning so when I'm popping open remy, we drinking that celebrating ya death till the morning me & fraze got it locked, you'll get picked last cus u ain't a vet ur just an unwanted tag hense when asked ppl look to the ground n just scratch thier neck I have kids that take up my time, but this pedophile geek still won't beat me he wouldn't be aloud near a minor so bad he's been banned of minecraft on the PC scrapped out 2 bars cus I seen ya pic in nbl n I went a bit wild cus u let kids draw on ya chest, no diss needed it already says pedophile |
07-20-2015, 05:16 PM | #3 | |
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Sooo if u the next jenner new school.. I wanna burn it down with u bitches inside it. Yo ur skills rising slowly but you'll never be reaching ours. U being asterisk alot vs me, cause I got them hands that'll have u seeing stars. 17-26? This fgt tryna learn how to text battle by reading thru instructions. I'll leave this Lot flattened like I was breaking ground for new construction. U can count the knuckles that smash ur smirkn face just for lookn goofy. I got them 'lucky numbers' that'll beat lotto like I was travolta in the movie. I'm dope bro, txting on my alien shit. Lotto is a gamble.. N u wack enough to be mistaken for one his aliases. Last edited by Useless; 07-20-2015 at 09:31 PM. |
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07-21-2015, 04:36 PM | #4 |
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mediorce opponents verses make u sweat, bein dope? I don't think u are able
had trouble dealing with aces, even when you brought all your best cards to the table ok I'll be thanked greatly for this killing, there'll be headshots without warning so when I'm popping open remy, we drinking that celebrating ya death till the morning ok me & fraze got it locked, you'll get picked last cus u ain't a vet ur just an unwanted tag hense when asked ppl look to the ground n just scratch thier neck meh didn't work IMO I have kids that take up my time, but this pedophile geek still won't beat me he wouldn't be aloud near a minor so bad he's been banned of minecraft on the PC can't decide on this one I like it n hate it at the same time ? scrapped out 2 bars cus I seen ya pic in nbl n I went a bit wild cus u let kids draw on ya chest, no diss needed it already says pedophile I liked this close Its insane u wrote that in 2015 thinking its fresh, u can't take that shit n revive it. Sooo if u the next jenner new school.. I wanna burn it down with u bitches inside it. ok bit statement like but ok Yo ur skills rising slowly but you'll never be reaching ours. U being asterisk alot vs me, cause I got them hands that'll have u seeing stars. I like the concept 17-26? This fgt tryna learn how to text battle by reading thru instructions. I'll leave this Lot flattened like I was breaking ground for new construction. the wording took away from this but I liked the concept U can count the knuckles that smash ur smirkn face just for lookn goofy. I got them 'lucky numbers' that'll beat lotto like I was travolta in the movie. nice I'm dope bro, txting on my alien shit. Lotto is a gamble.. N u wack enough to be mistaken for one his aliases. haha lotb Hard to choose a winner. I think lotto had a more consistent ten but remy had the better jabs when they landed.... Going to go lotto for having better flow. This could go either way. edit: change vote - sorry lotto but I reread an actually preferred remys on the second read through vote remy Last edited by Grandiloquent; 07-21-2015 at 04:39 PM. |
07-22-2015, 07:14 AM | #5 |
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mediorce opponents verses make u sweat, bein dope? I don't think u are able
had trouble dealing with aces, even when you brought all your best cards to the table decent flip, too many words for too simple of a punch I'll be thanked greatly for this killing, there'll be headshots without warning so when I'm popping open remy, we drinking that celebrating ya death till the morning wording is kinda weird but decent flip me & fraze got it locked, you'll get picked last cus u ain't a vet ur just an unwanted tag hense when asked ppl look to the ground n just scratch thier neck okay i like this I have kids that take up my time, but this pedophile geek still won't beat me he wouldn't be aloud near a minor so bad he's been banned of minecraft on the PC wayyyy too corny scrapped out 2 bars cus I seen ya pic in nbl n I went a bit wild cus u let kids draw on ya chest, no diss needed it already says pedophile lol Its insane u wrote that in 2015 thinking its fresh, u can't take that shit n revive it. Sooo if u the next jenner new school.. I wanna burn it down with u bitches inside it. nah Yo ur skills rising slowly but you'll never be reaching ours. U being asterisk alot vs me, cause I got them hands that'll have u seeing stars. nice 17-26? This fgt tryna learn how to text battle by reading thru instructions. I'll leave this Lot flattened like I was breaking ground for new construction. nice U can count the knuckles that smash ur smirkn face just for lookn goofy. I got them 'lucky numbers' that'll beat lotto like I was travolta in the movie. okay I'm dope bro, txting on my alien shit. Lotto is a gamble.. N u wack enough to be mistaken for one his aliases. damn v/ Remy Lotto if you work on your shit i could see you being pretty dope tbh |
07-23-2015, 01:12 AM | #6 |
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Bar1-Thought it was cool, couldve hit harder. 2.5/5 Bar2-Cool again. 2.5/5 Bar3-Yeah wording hurt this and not the greatest execution. 1.5/5 Bar4-Wording again was horrid, barely understood what you were trying to say. Wording really messed this bar up for me. 1.5/5 Bar5-Ehhh could've been better. 2/5 Overall-10/25 You started solid and lost steam towards the end. --------- Remy Bar1-I liked it. 3/5 Bar2-W/p was sound. Cool concept. 3/5 Bar3-Cool. 2.5/5 Bar4-Cool. 2.5/5 Bar5-Haha 3/5 Overall-14/25 You were definitely more consistent, first time reading from you. You had fresh concepts though. v/Remy - He was the attacking force and outmatched his opponents
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07-24-2015, 09:03 PM | #7 |
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I'll be thanked greatly for this killing, there'll be headshots without warning
so when I'm popping open remy, we drinking that celebrating ya death till the morning vs 17-26? This fgt tryna learn how to text battle by reading thru instructions. I'll leave this Lot flattened like I was breaking ground for new construction. U can count the knuckles that smash ur smirkn face just for lookn goofy. I got them 'lucky numbers' that'll beat lotto like I was travolta in the movie. I'm dope bro, txting on my alien shit. Lotto is a gamble.. N u wack enough to be mistaken for one his aliases. remy was more consistent and creative which lead to more quotables.. mvgt to rem for the harder hitters |
07-24-2015, 10:30 PM | #8 |
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Vote Remy
Better overall and concept His verse more creative than Lotto |
07-25-2015, 01:55 PM | #9 |
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Lotto-ace, opening remy
Remy-i pretty much enjoyed the whole verse. v-remy |
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