Contender Match: ill nik-A 3-1 vs Fraze 6-1 - NIK WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, June 18th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 12, maximum of 18
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck! @ill nik-A @fraze

[ill nik-A]

12
Welcome!

[fraze]

the text john mccain. claim maverick but to real niggas you’re not a rival,
this mark / cuban hasn’t been relevant since his team championed the NBA finals
i got magic johnson type of D, give bitches jump up on a boner vibes,
you drop weak as catching his disease… but I’ll make sure this ill nikA won’t survive...
my quotes are live… hi voltage... electroshock in high dose circuits,
you can’t shock me with a quote…there’s too much fucking rust on all your verses...
old. wack. garbage. worthless. lame. should have been taken out.
that’s a description of this nikA life… and a him vs. J.Hens full verse breakdown.
nik’s a giant in text? HOF? i’ll expose the vagina… that’s a riot
my Basic Instinct is Sharon Stone’s…in a slingshot vs. this fake as shit cuban goliath
busted bitches throw him pussy. you think THAT’s pathetic and sad, yo...
this faggot nika stay dodging muff… and i’m not just taking bout their pinkslip battle.
cokehead…. fag sucking pedophile... yep im pressing all your buttons...
wait, he quit drugs... but the boys? no… nika teen habit is still disgusting
a champ? pShhh on white… but off the snow his skills flounder...
he might skate by on the board… but stopped being a real threat when left the powder

[El Muffin]

I'll Nika
opene is slick ly worded but kinda cheesy. Kiss the bump in the rankings gbye n end up being diagnosed w/ herpes lol just kinda weird. Conceptually it's cool. Just personally don't dig the association
life was dope af tho. N the ur martin tie in was unneccesary but fucking hilarious. That's a nice extra tidbit u added there. Impressive
fraze/concept was slick. Again. Really simple but reaaaaly effective
handle w/ care is fresh. I see u stepped ur creativity up. Ur whole line was an entendre. U don't normally do this
sweat. Vintage nika. This was nasty
green/night vision lol fresh
fraze logic sucks tho to me
closer was eh too

damn. U were merkin shit then last 4 was wtf eh but still. Nice verse.

Fraze
I like the opener. Clean
I'll nika. you drop weak as catching his disease is just a bad phrase. I see the I'll nigga wp but that's kinda wack tbh
rust was creative. Execution was unique but a little long-winded abv avg
j hens lol that was old school but funny
Sharon stones was ok
dodging muff is relevant but kinda simplistic. Tb fair he didn't duck me. Just realized I wasn't being an asshole n retracted. But I would take advantage of the concept too I digress. Its a Lil on simple side
don't like teen habit
closer eh too

nice verse from u too

Both of u guys' last 4 were eh tho. So comparing the rest? I'll have to give it to nika. Just looking at my breakdown

He had creativity n harshness

Fraze cane nice too but just a Lil bit less memorable yknow

Close but


V/Nika


Props to both

[Amen.]

bump goodbye slick
quality of life was cool
fraze np was ok
glass jaw/signs was dope
little stuff was slick
see the green was ok
fraze logic was weak
closed door policy was mild

consistent verse. some dope bars bro, props.

vs

mark / cuban mild
catch his disease mild
shock play was mild
description of life was dope but end rhymes were garbage an wayyyy of
sharon stone was ok, choppy wordin but ok
dodging muff/pussy reference dumb played - weak personal approach
quit drugs was wack and choppy
skate by was off

decent concepts but your executions were off or mild. wasn't feelin your drop this week playa.

ill nik got it

[Allen Knight]

Up, fraze -1 votes.

[Greed]

u went from unnoticed to contender; u gracefully emerged see
this week u can can kiss that bump goodbye… & be diagnosed for carrying herpes
Okay

this kid is just broke, never had pussy & prefers dick in his throat
If u have a good quality of Life… it’s in VHS format & Martin thinks u’re a joke
Lol

whose givin ya hope? cuz tell me where ya nonsense connect, see
I mean what good is fraze… when he can’t do that to his concepts correctly
Good

confess geek, I got punches to rattle u scared, this battle’s unfair
no way u’re taking it & if ya glass jaw shows any signs… it’s handle with care
Decent

my ammo’s rare, bringin heat is all I’ve known, ease is all I’ve shown
I don’t sweat the little stuff… while u in a sauna drownin in 3 feet of ur own
Cool

my strike system hobbles son & I know my wisdom boggles some
ur dark secret is envy but I see the green like I had night-vision goggles on
Okay

ur style lacks average; lemme rephrase that, u not even bad practice
& if we go by fraze’s logic… RB has nothing but a bunch of wack phaggotz
Okay

animal caged here to maul cats, we in here till the last man falls flat
we gonna enforce the closed-door policy… this puss squeezin outta the dog flap
Ehh





Join Date: Mar 2013

Location: Louisville, KY

Posts: 183

Battle Record: 6-3

the text john mccain. claim maverick but to real niggas you’re not a rival,
this mark / cuban hasn’t been relevant since his team championed the NBA finals
Sick

i got magic johnson type of D, give bitches jump up on a boner vibes,
you drop weak as catching his disease… but I’ll make sure this ill nikA won’t survive...
No

my quotes are live… hi voltage... electroshock in high dose circuits,
you can’t shock me with a quote…there’s too much fucking rust on all your verses...
Cool line

old. wack. garbage. worthless. lame. should have been taken out.
that’s a description of this nikA life… and a him vs. J.Hens full verse breakdown.
Sickk

nik’s a giant in text? HOF? i’ll expose the vagina… that’s a riot
my Basic Instinct is Sharon Stone’s…in a slingshot vs. this fake as shit cuban goliath
Nah

busted bitches throw him pussy. you think THAT’s pathetic and sad, yo...
this faggot nika stay dodging muff… and i’m not just taking bout their pinkslip battle.
Ehh

cokehead…. fag sucking pedophile... yep im pressing all your buttons...
wait, he quit drugs... but the boys? no… nika teen habit is still disgusting
Lol

a champ? pShhh on white… but off the snow his skills flounder...
he might skate by on the board… but stopped being a real threat when left the powder
Yep

Consistency nik got it. Hardest hitting was fraze.

V fraze

[Sharp]

FUCK just deleted my quotes

I had it tied in quotes but nik got it on consistency imo

V/nik

[~RustyGunZ~]

u went from unnoticed to contender; u gracefully emerged see
this week u can can kiss that bump goodbye… & be diagnosed for carrying herpes
okay
this kid is just broke, never had pussy & prefers dick in his throat
If u have a good quality of Life… it’s in VHS format & Martin thinks u’re a joke

whose givin ya hope? cuz tell me where ya nonsense connect, see
I mean what good is fraze… when he can’t do that to his concepts correctly
cool
confess geek, I got punches to rattle u scared, this battle’s unfair
no way u’re taking it & if ya glass jaw shows any signs… it’s handle with care
eh okay
my ammo’s rare, bringin heat is all I’ve known, ease is all I’ve shown
I don’t sweat the little stuff… while u in a sauna drownin in 3 feet of ur own
okay
my strike system hobbles son & I know my wisdom boggles some
ur dark secret is envy but I see the green like I had night-vision goggles on
cool
ur style lacks average; lemme rephrase that, u not even bad practice
& if we go by fraze’s logic… RB has nothing but a bunch of wack phaggotz
nah
animal caged here to maul cats, we in here till the last man falls flat
we gonna enforce the closed-door policy… this puss squeezin outta the dog flap
okay

vs

the text john mccain. claim maverick but to real niggas you’re not a rival,
this mark / cuban hasn’t been relevant since his team championed the NBA finals
hate the / wordplays, forced
i got magic johnson type of D, give bitches jump up on a boner vibes,
you drop weak as catching his disease… but I’ll make sure this ill nikA won’t survive..
nah.
my quotes are live… hi voltage... electroshock in high dose circuits,
you can’t shock me with a quote…there’s too much fucking rust on all your verses...
just a statement, no punch unless you mean rust/metal conductor which is eh
old. wack. garbage. worthless. lame. should have been taken out.
that’s a description of this nikA life… and a him vs. J.Hens full verse breakdown.
okay
nik’s a giant in text? HOF? i’ll expose the vagina… that’s a riot
my Basic Instinct is Sharon Stone’s…in a slingshot vs. this fake as shit cuban goliath
okay, wording was off a bit to me, just could have been done better.
busted bitches throw him pussy. you think THAT’s pathetic and sad, yo...
this faggot nika stay dodging muff… and i’m not just taking bout their pinkslip battle.
not another muff/pussy line.....
cokehead…. fag sucking pedophile... yep im pressing all your buttons...
wait, he quit drugs... but the boys? no… nika teen habit is still disgusting

a champ? pShhh on white… but off the snow his skills flounder...
he might skate by on the board… but stopped being a real threat when left the powder
okay

dissapointing tbh but nik did enough to win

v/nika

[Tic]

Vhs, fraze, glass jaw, sweat

Vs

Shock, nicateen

Nik go it on consistency. He had a couple dope lines in there. I wasn't really feeling Fraze this week. His verse against me was nice but this was definitely a meh verse from him.

Nik

[Ronin]

Nikas whole verse minus the next to last bar was nice. Smooth read almost all the way thru with no lag or jumbled wording. Just a professional verse from a professional txt battler lol. Good shit

Opener was OK I thought I could've been smoother if u left mark out and just put Cuban. Rust line was OK, the him vs j hens line was OK, sharon stone would've been nice but it read like u added words in there just for the hell of it, teen habit OK n closer was just OK.

I got nik winning this with the smoother verse, cleaner punches/wording and consistency. Fraze had a bunch of OK punches but nothing stood out, he had a cpl misses too

Vote nika

[ill nik-A]

u went from unnoticed to contender; u gracefully emerged see
this week u can can kiss that bump goodbye… & be diagnosed for carrying herpes
this kid is just broke, never had pussy & prefers dick in his throat
If u have a good quality of Life… it’s in VHS format & Martin thinks u’re a joke
whose givin ya hope? cuz tell me where ya nonsense connect, see
I mean what good is fraze… when he can’t do that to his concepts correctly
confess geek, I got punches to rattle u scared, this battle’s unfair
no way u’re taking it & if ya glass jaw shows any signs… it’s handle with care
my ammo’s rare, bringin heat is all I’ve known, ease is all I’ve shown
I don’t sweat the little stuff… while u in a sauna drownin in 3 feet of ur own
my strike system hobbles son & I know my wisdom boggles some
ur dark secret is envy but I see the green like I had night-vision goggles on
ur style lacks average; lemme rephrase that, u not even bad practice
& if we go by fraze’s logic… RB has nothing but a bunch of wack phaggotz
animal caged here to maul cats, we in here till the last man falls flat
we gonna enforce the closed-door policy… this puss squeezin outta the dog flap