for all the true motherfuckers yo, what's the realest shit you ever wrote?

oats · 06-08-2015, 04:18 AM

from time to time I get bored and then nostalgic and re-read old verses of mine, most of which makes me cringe, but sometimes I'm like "man that line was real as fuck." so what do you guys think is the realest shit you ever wrote? not whole verses, just like 1-4 bars nah mean.

for me:

"my life's a comedy of errors and a porno of truth"

"True Gemini, two ends of I, at our cores an isotope
torn between seeing the world through telescopes or a microscope"

"the problem is I got more ideas than minutes
more ambitions to begin than I have reasons to finish
more horizons to explore than I have means to their limits
more pulpits to preach from than there are people to listen"

"My mind's the 9 to 5 grind with weekend trips to Atlantis
Painting pictures of my prison while I drift in the canvas"
mostly it

06-08-2015, 04:18 AM	#1
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,084 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005428	for all the true motherfuckers yo, what's the realest shit you ever wrote? from time to time I get bored and then nostalgic and re-read old verses of mine, most of which makes me cringe, but sometimes I'm like "man that line was real as fuck." so what do you guys think is the realest shit you ever wrote? not whole verses, just like 1-4 bars nah mean. for me: "my life's a comedy of errors and a porno of truth" "True Gemini, two ends of I, at our cores an isotope torn between seeing the world through telescopes or a microscope" "the problem is I got more ideas than minutes more ambitions to begin than I have reasons to finish more horizons to explore than I have means to their limits more pulpits to preach from than there are people to listen" "My mind's the 9 to 5 grind with weekend trips to Atlantis Painting pictures of my prison while I drift in the canvas" mostly it __________________ You should be water Last edited by oats; 06-08-2015 at 07:28 AM.