Sn00p 1-0 vs Killing Spree 1-0 - SN00P WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, May 7th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Sn00p @Killing Spree

[Sn00p]

sup man

[Kill Spree]

Check

[Sn00p]

aiming for 10 btw

[Kill Spree]

Deff man. Mad busy

[Sn00p]

ain't going home tonight. gonna need the ext

[Kill Spree]

That's fine. Was just about to post a key verse. @Sharp

[Sharp]

Sn00p's Verse


killing spree aka beans

Originally Posted by Killing Spree on RB

Couldn’t taste a win if you were hungry, wishin you were more thinner…
Cos if you ketchup when I drop hot dawg..its prolly muster’n a snack, before dinner!

& this is what u put me up against?

that's not even funny to read. wtf is wrong w/ this geek?!
the way u talk about a con'dement,cha look like one suffering from the disease
rapist & murderer that follows kids. otherwise this fag's soft
it's no fairytale when the boy's beans stalks get axed after they have Jack off
dude's wrecked. if sn00p text, the drop is fire & fresh
but when killing text... well. at least we know WHY it is dead
liars get neg'd. 4th base teaching this square ab patience
when that bitch didn't let u in, u were De/Knight worse than in their situation
take 'em back to mine when i hit on girls. u make bitches hurl...
only chick wanting to go back to KS has to find a yellow brick road to a wizard 1st

[Kill Spree]

Snoop



http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=118487
Avengers concept



See..
Im'a known bully in the streets. There's no give or take kid
Ppl always ACT'n tough, S'Why "doing U" is not in ur consideration
Plus I chop bodies. drop hot on me? I'll have sn00p quick in the trash
I'll go out on a limb wit sharp bars, till urs are small enough to fit in the bag
Ya moms corpse laid out is foreplay now - this wen I'm scarier
...finger that dead bitch
Then slap ya wit period blood on my hand before they burry her
Plus I blast Hulk size bullets out the Iron Man, that'll dead ya crew
One round'll have u out cold quicker than Hush, @ Avengers 2
Bring out that temper? Trust the hands'll do more than jus harm
I won't just push snoo's buttons, I'll record ya last words & use them for morning alarms

[Kill Spree]

@Sharp

[Wanderer]

& this is what u put me up against?
that's not even funny to read. wtf is wrong w/ this geek?!
the way u talk about a con'dement,cha look like one suffering from the disease
bit of a stretch but I still like it
rapist & murderer that follows kids. otherwise this fag's soft
it's no fairytale when the boy's beans stalks get axed after they have Jack off
I could just be stupid here.. but not really following. Wording doesn't make sense
dude's wrecked. if sn00p text, the drop is fire & fresh
but when killing text... well. at least we know WHY it is dead
What?
liars get neg'd. 4th base teaching this square ab patience
when that bitch didn't let u in, u were De/Knight worse than in their situation
Cool
take 'em back to mine when i hit on girls. u make bitches hurl...
only chick wanting to go back to KS has to find a yellow brick road to a wizard 1st
Didn't even rhyme. Didn't like


See..
Im'a known bully in the streets. There's no give or take kid
Ppl always ACT'n tough, S'Why "doing U" is not in ur consideration
Huh?
Plus I chop bodies. drop hot on me? I'll have sn00p quick in the trash
I'll go out on a limb wit sharp bars, till urs are small enough to fit in the bag
I like it
Ya moms corpse laid out is foreplay now - this wen I'm scarier
...finger that dead bitch
Then slap ya wit period blood on my hand before they burry her
Nah
Plus I blast Hulk size bullets out the Iron Man, that'll dead ya crew
One round'll have u out cold quicker than Hush, @ Avengers 2
Haha funny
Bring out that temper? Trust the hands'll do more than jus harm
I won't just push snoo's buttons, I'll record ya last words & use them for morning alarms
This is clever. Not sure I'm feeling a whole bunch though

Damn, overall a difficult one, think i got KS on this one. Was really feeling snoops verse last week but I dunno.. This battle, I'm thinking KS was more consistent.

V/ks

[Razah]

rapist & murderer that follows kids. otherwise this fag's soft
it's no fairytale when the boy's beans stalks get axed after they have Jack off

To me, this was probably your best line. The wording was weird on it though, it was difficult to read. Also, your closer didn't rhyme to me at all, that threw me off.

Ya moms corpse laid out is foreplay now - this wen I'm scarier
...finger that dead bitch
Then slap ya wit period blood on my hand before they burry her

That's sick. Not sick as in dope, as in, seek help bruh. Anyways, the verse was okay, they were all jabs, but constant.


Overall, I think KS had a more consistent verse. Snoop's verse is kind of choppy as far as the wording goes, doesn't come off as smooth. So my vote goes to Killing Spree

[Sharp]

that's not even funny to read. wtf is wrong w/ this geek?!
the way u talk about a con'dement,cha look like one suffering from the disease
bit of a stretch for me on the wp
rapist & murderer that follows kids. otherwise this fag's soft
it's no fairytale when the boy's beans stalks get axed after they have Jack off
lil awkward on wording
dude's wrecked. if sn00p text, the drop is fire & fresh
but when killing text... well. at least we know WHY it is dead
dope
liars get neg'd. 4th base teaching this square ab patience
when that bitch didn't let u in, u were De/Knight worse than in their situation
de-knight kind of works as denied but I never thought of des as 'de' so that takes away from it for me. not feeling it
take 'em back to mine when i hit on girls. u make bitches hurl...
only chick wanting to go back to KS has to find a yellow brick road to a wizard 1st
solid



Im'a known bully in the streets. There's no give or take kid
Ppl always ACT'n tough, S'Why "doing U" is not in ur consideration
I get it now but coulda hit harder
Plus I chop bodies. drop hot on me? I'll have sn00p quick in the trash
I'll go out on a limb wit sharp bars, till urs are small enough to fit in the bag
I've seen out on a limb lines before. this was ok
Ya moms corpse laid out is foreplay now - this wen I'm scarier
...finger that dead bitch
Then slap ya wit period blood on my hand before they burry her
horrorcore...?
Plus I blast Hulk size bullets out the Iron Man, that'll dead ya crew
One round'll have u out cold quicker than Hush, @ Avengers 2
alright tbh i dont think you need the explanation at the begining
Bring out that temper? Trust the hands'll do more than jus harm
I won't just push snoo's buttons, I'll record ya last words & use them for morning alarms
I'm on the fence about this cause its worded well but I'm rarely into nameflips that break up a name smaller than a syllable... same thing with sn00p using 'De' for 'des'


mad close battle but I had two I'd quote from snoop and 1 from KS and that gives snoop a slight edge. enjoyed this one though. different styles but still effective from both

v/sn00p

[Junto]

dude's wrecked. if sn00p text, the drop is fire & fresh
but when killing text... well. at least we know WHY it is dead
take 'em back to mine when i hit on girls. u make bitches hurl...
only chick wanting to go back to KS has to find a yellow brick road to a wizard 1st

vs.

Plus I blast Hulk size bullets out the Iron Man, that'll dead ya crew
One round'll have u out cold quicker than Hush, @ Avengers 2
Bring out that temper? Trust the hands'll do more than jus harm
I won't just push snoo's buttons, I'll record ya last words & use them for morning alarms

Both verses were real hit or miss
Snoop had killing text which was solid... simple but effective.
Back to KS was a dope concept, LOTB for creativity. Wording was a bit off or it'd be fire.
Condimentia was terrible, I hated that. Axed after they jack off? just weird man...
De/Night didn't work for me on multiple levels. De = destroyer? DeNight = denied?
Massaker started off wit one that didn't really have much sting or complexity...
Out on a limb been played for a while and seen it recently too.
Finger dead bitch... period blood... ?? I on't know what the fuck was goin on there
Last two were decent though. I like the Avengers setup... the punch was solid
I liked the execution of the last bar but snoo = snoop was a reach...

Overall it's close... tough to judge because of the misses on both side...
but I got Snoop pullin it out for creativity of KS/wizard.

v/Sn00p

[fraze]

Sn00p

that's not even funny to read. wtf is wrong w/ this geek?!
the way u talk about a con'dement,cha look like one suffering from the disease
like the concept, but the wording needs work. this comes off a little forced
rapist & murderer that follows kids. otherwise this fag's soft
it's no fairytale when the boy's beans stalks get axed after they have Jack off
not a fan of this one
dude's wrecked. if sn00p text, the drop is fire & fresh
but when killing text... well. at least we know WHY it is dead
this as cool
liars get neg'd. 4th base teaching this square ab patience
when that bitch didn't let u in, u were De/Knight worse than in their situation
haven't been around long enough to know the background on this, but denied to de/knight is a little forced to me
take 'em back to mine when i hit on girls. u make bitches hurl...
only chick wanting to go back to KS has to find a yellow brick road to a wizard 1st
i like the closer


Killing Spree

Im'a known bully in the streets. There's no give or take kid
Ppl always ACT'n tough, S'Why "doing U" is not in ur consideration
i see what you were doing but the punch is weak
Plus I chop bodies. drop hot on me? I'll have sn00p quick in the trash
I'll go out on a limb wit sharp bars, till urs are small enough to fit in the bag
you need a better set up to make 'out on a limb' work here. this would have been cool if worded properly
Ya moms corpse laid out is foreplay now - this wen I'm scarier
...finger that dead bitch
Then slap ya wit period blood on my hand before they burry her
this is more gross out than effective punch. and im pretty sure dead women don't have periods. concept needs some work
Plus I blast Hulk size bullets out the Iron Man, that'll dead ya crew
One round'll have u out cold quicker than Hush, @ Avengers 2
this punch works
Bring out that temper? Trust the hands'll do more than jus harm
I won't just push snoo's buttons, I'll record ya last words & use them for morning alarms
got you but doesn't hit that hard the way its worded.

I've seen better from Sn00p back in the day, but he delivered on the basics with a solid but not earthshattering drop. killing text and the closer were cool, even if there weren't any draw dropping lines in the verse.

Don't think I've read Killing Spree before, and I can tell he's a little bit newer because he's not picking the best concepts and still needs to work on his wording. A few of these bars are complete misses outright, and some just missed because of bad execution, but I can see the potential from the Avengers 2 line and snoo's buttons. Just need to work on the wording.

Vote: Snoop

[iSpaz]

killing text, beanstalk played vs ks

vs.

out on a limb kinda, hush

close battle. ehh sliiight edge to v/kd

[Allen Knight]

that's not even funny to read. wtf is wrong w/ this geek?!
the way u talk about a con'dement,cha look like one suffering from the disease
^^^Nah at this opener
rapist & murderer that follows kids. otherwise this fag's soft
it's no fairytale when the boy's beans stalks get axed after they have Jack off
^^^LOL dope
dude's wrecked. if sn00p text, the drop is fire & fresh
but when killing text... well. at least we know WHY it is dead
^^^decent
liars get neg'd. 4th base teaching this square ab patience
when that bitch didn't let u in, u were De/Knight worse than in their situation
^^^nah
take 'em back to mine when i hit on girls. u make bitches hurl...
only chick wanting to go back to KS has to find a yellow brick road to a wizard 1st
^^^good closer


Vs

See..
Im'a known bully in the streets. There's no give or take kid
Ppl always ACT'n tough, S'Why "doing U" is not in ur consideration
^^^nah
Plus I chop bodies. drop hot on me? I'll have sn00p quick in the trash
I'll go out on a limb wit sharp bars, till urs are small enough to fit in the bag
^^^naw way to played
Ya moms corpse laid out is foreplay now - this wen I'm scarier
...finger that dead bitch
Then slap ya wit period blood on my hand before they burry her
^^^nah its to bland not creative
Plus I blast Hulk size bullets out the Iron Man, that'll dead ya crew
One round'll have u out cold quicker than Hush, @ Avengers 2
^^^dope
Bring out that temper? Trust the hands'll do more than jus harm
I won't just push snoo's buttons, I'll record ya last words & use them for morning alarms
^^^decent coulda been dope reworded but a lil strech here

V/sn00p this was a decent one, i just think snoop was a lil more consistent an had lotb w/ the bean stalk, killing had a ok verse concepts hurt him tbh avenger line was dope tho, props to both.

[Sharp]

4-3 sn00p

[Cashius]

Snoops concepts were a little forced and wording was a little weird to me. I did like killing text and the closer was ok.

KS- wasn't really feeling much. The Hush thing was ok. The closer was ok but calling him Snoo is pretty forced to me.

This battle was a little underwhelming to me but I though Snoop was a bit better.

[El Muffin]

Snoop had

Dementia
killing text
Kansas


Ks had

Hmm opener had potential but eh

The last 4 were dope


I have this 3-2 on quotes

Fkn ks had lotb tho

Real close

V/snoop by 1 quote