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Care to listen? at my barren description
Of each phase of cellular division No, I'll spare you your Christmas Mitosis and karyokinesis are boring to listen to. Instead, inhale this verses nuclear emission Radioactive nuances you wouldn't dare to nitpick Out of control metastasis of your weary spirit makes the skeleton you wear feel frigid, ever so rigid. The marrow stiffens, forgetting the serum in you Relaxation only happens when doctors syringe you Hitting the bulls eye with their arrow quivers Lancing the tissue of God with sterile equipment Mere serfs analyzing a pharaoh's condition. Lithium makes the breathing air so blissful Reminisce your childhood, the ferries wheel spinning The shimmering armor of your favorite hero glistening Bringing forth mirth to VII year old children. Neurons lifted from the state of despair their given T killer cell instincts, circulating as they filter the system Dealing with symptoms you conceal with superficial stitches Ignoring the cry for help signal in them, Displaying discomfort becomes a superstitious villain. Mind warped, like a rabid dog with scabies Blood contaminated with sulfur traces Toxic stasis are how snow angels suffer aging Capturing the heavens in pain is a subtle painting With requiste for details & a philosopher's patience Despirited I want to hop into my mother's matrix Where I'm innocent and can see every colored rainbow. The opening of my cusp valves are breaking Leaving a giant gaping hole that aids in making the creation of my second soul a failure. I thought I could make the scathing hell's coruscating Experimenting on my soul like some kind of holy play thing Unraveling only total mayhem, vagrant particles discombobulating The transmutation of life a carnivore is contemplating. Bearing sickness, a rare encryption Unseen by any diagnostic image Physicians can't see where it's listed. Its insignia is severe larynx restriction And to a lyricist that's everything wicked Taking high doses of beta-carotene mixtures Hoping to chelate mercury crystals, Or some kind of residual from a very deep issue At least I'm alive, the injury kindred. Yet, a splurge of never ending memories visit Embedded abdomens with pensive pathogens Entrenched, recalcitrant... Bones shatter, the facts are real Supplementing calcium pills won't halt the ills When the breaking down is already half fulfilled Medical miracles involve the will.... resentful, bitter? Squeeze the alkaloid shards from your keloid scars For deep voids of the heart are blaring symbols Indicating progression of the terror in it. Huddled around a kerosone heater, Quivering as my nail keratin withers My cerebral is drenched in cherubim spittle Artistic, creative faculties carry Da Vinci Experiencing more euphorium inwards Than I ever did with heroin needles The sanctity of Nature makes every man richer With her visions distilling her myriad secrets Set free through Emerson's scripture, and other Revered American literature, weird non fiction. Nature lies within us, an interstitial creature Yet, we ignore intrinsic calling like berserk bigots. -Sickness and emotions, Their transcendence is the simian's motive Albeit, the release form requires a Signature motion Opposable thumbs are more than a visual notion. Last edited by UnbornBuddha; 12-25-2014 at 06:17 AM. |
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ghost in the matrix
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Tbh this read like a dictionary that rhymed. No real direction just...stuff
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Don't believe the hype
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Seems like the task was to use a predetermined amount of 'intelligent' words and just rhyme them....hoping to get by on impression, or "shock and awe"...unfortunately we are not Iraqis people and most are well read enough here that this seemed a bit presumptuous.
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
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Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
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- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
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- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
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I think you guys are reading too much into it. I thought it was good for what it was. Using big words and rhyming them doesn't mean someones sticking their nose out. And i would hardly call what he's using 'big words'.
It's just, rare words, lol. gj |
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"Huddled around a kerosone heater,
Quivering as my nail keratin withers" that made me jolly. i think we have a shakespeare here. |
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