GARNISH - Dallas

[dull boy]

bonk flow go



The lilly pads balked at my requests for redemption. The wetness surrendered; perplexed by my vigor.
Plexiglass ceilings made light of the cloudiest silver linings. My bouts with pills undying as the sounds of guilts horizon.
Empty beds. Sheets ruffled by loneliness. You used to fluff my pillows. Now she loves her dildo, but that's the trouble with hopelessness.
The ashes of journal entries scattered by breath gasped by purple titties sagging from chests.
Melancholy; my last surviving friend. Ilol never blame you for killing hope... but when will the violence end?
Christmas carols fall on deaf ears 'til Fall of next year. Wine cellar stocked with fine mellowed scotch to soften wet tears.
Your soul is embroidered with such a rich tapestry. I wanna fuck your tits, cunt and fists savagely. I love you. - Dick Dastardly.

- Ryder Strong

[dull boy]

Sorry so short; in my car driving...


into barns. Smiling.

[dead man]

johnny pneumonic bubonic

[big baby]

not UR best bad glad ur writing i like dis line

the lil pads bawled at my redemption

wish I could write that i cried when i read it


I think U write things and when I think things im too dumb to rite it so a divine entervenshins comes and U speak for me landau keffner expression U r so good my favorite ily fuck me in bb butt

[Witty]

BB hurt because i complimented someone else.

[Witty]

Sheets ruffled by loneliness. You used to fluff my pillows. Now she loves her dildo, but that's the trouble with hopelessness.

This was incredible.

Enjoyed as always, and inspired to write as always, I won't though, I fight it.

[Wise Wiggles]

dat bonk twonk shit nigga
I'm inspired now with this perspiring frown spiraling down nigga

[Witty]

Too gifted to brag, ridiculous swag, fuckin a bitch on the rag
if santa clause is black, all cops are getting shit in a bag.

[big baby]

you listen to too much nigger music if u think all cops are white

[dull boy]

african Americans are black and it's disparaging how lacking in the parenting department they are. Guardians? Ha. Hardly. I saw a tar baby fall at the park, and it's mom? Scoffed, the she paused before erupting in anger for the baby fussing. And maybe I could lie and say this witnessing was an isolated incident, but its not. These types are maybe infinite. The intellect is frightening. Mob mentality IS infecting RHYMING SHIT

[Witty]

Originally Posted by BANE BABY

you listen to too much nigger music if u think all cops are white

here they are.

[PancakeBrah]

I got to say, when I read this I realized you're a lot better than Bane Baby. Your flow is bonk, whereas his flow is just ridic.

[big baby]

but

[PancakeBrah]

Bb you say things I say all the time but dull boy says stuff I just think all the time and his flow is bonk whereas your flow is ridic. you're a solid 2b tho so chill out man.

[big baby]

i wrote this

[PancakeBrah]

lol whatever you say pippy

[Wise Wiggles]

Who? Pippy Long Stockings? I kick it w/hippies on odd things
If you don't like Disney
You can bibbity
Bobbity
Back the fuck outta my life..

[PancakeBrah]

I think Wise Wiggles open mic about his uncle was the best piece. Better than this one.

This one was dat dere Dengue Fever sick tho gnomshayin

[dead man]

Fuck you guys

Especially dull boy who spends hours in my thread but is too cool to post a comment so I feel validated and then makes another oh-so innovative dead man satire verse

Cool man. Awesome

[NYCSPITZ]

yea it's pretty good, a bit grammatically sloppy and nonsensical but that's the norm coming from your clique. Don't find your brand of dry humor engaging but that's just me. About 7/10