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Old 11-26-2014, 11:19 AM   #1
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Im violent, get high and drink til i blackout in my bed
Cause i lost my temper at birth, and never found it again
Pounding on heads at the bar until you fucks dissapear
Leave you with hairline fractures, a bowlcut, and a beard
Im so discgusted with wierd humor, you whores are a joke
Im the ignorant truth bearing news, a scorpios horroscope
Chop you into four inch bones, feed your remains to a hog
Bout to get tossed in the slammer, and the game isnt pogs
A titanium boss, whos craniums lost, just scribbling this..
A forum full of shit, making myself a nest in the middle of it
Innocent victims get split in half when i deliver my blows
Gross, Gangbanging a society filled with individual hoes
Little is known about the real world, or how you all interact
Fact -Your a buncha spies, RB eyes, like a ball and a bat
My cardiovascular sucks, smoking way to many packs
Writers block makes it safe to say, or assume that im wack
But its cool, if thats the thought pattern you choose
At least it rhymes, which is more than you actually do
Bad habits consume my free time, im never really available
Popping pills, drinking, snorting anything that is there to do
And i swear to you, scouts honor, ill do me to the death
You talk to any slut i fucked, i gave her unbelievable sex
Thats niether here nor there, what is he thinking, its rude..
But i would die for my people, like the king of the jews
Ima fuckin drink up your booze, and bellyflop on the couch
With nothin but my balls and a chain on, lockin it down
Your wife staring at me, like she wants a dick in her throat
Cuz i told her i need something to eat, from the kitchen, u hoe
Do the dishes with soap, and fill this damn table with beer
And ill fuck her until she yells god! Like our savior is here
You cant sway me with fear, fagot, to hard for the scare
assholes'll always talk shit, a buncha farts in the air
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Old 11-26-2014, 04:47 PM   #2
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I doubt you have the love for any people enough in your heart to die selflessly for. ..how do I know this? Cos you don't even love your self

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I say this out of love...it don't always feel good, nah mean?

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Old 11-26-2014, 04:52 PM   #3
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U dont know this.
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Old 11-26-2014, 09:55 PM   #4
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True.

I wondered to myself what you genuinely thought what "weird humor" is? In context of the verse.

To me this verse screams "me vs. the world" and a profile of a person like this shares some of these traits:

Narcissism, lack of self worth, passive aggressiveness and is distant or coldness to others.

Not saying you are any of these but from the verse I got a strong argument you are some, and I got this vibe and I know it cos these are things I'm being born free of by a renewing of the mind.

There is a righteous, loving and real way to be "me against the World" and a wrong way. The right way takes knowledge and study and practice. The wrong way just takes the relentless indoctrination and conditioning all are subjected to by the world and its brain washing institutions. All you have to do is nothing and be entertained into ignorance.

You sir wrote of savage man, an animal that the world calls a real man.

Up is down, down is up.
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Old 11-27-2014, 10:53 AM   #6
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Not sure what wise meant. Or iv hes talking to me or coup. Anyhow.. coup. Good assessment. Pretty accurate i guess. Although, savage man i may be... but educated and studied am i as well. Thanks for your time.

This was pretty random writing. I do this alot.. just start writi g and whatever comes to mind as far as rhymes.. once i find a rhyme i just put shit around it. So basically, this type of piece isnt very real.. or true to how i feel. Its just something i wrote during wwriters block while i have nothing interesting, or nothing that i really care to write about lol.

Not to be taken literally. Thanks.
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Old 11-27-2014, 11:20 AM   #7
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It was to coup. I liked this! Happy turkey day homie !
and I don't know what i meant either lol
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Haha. Figured. U to bro.
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@Sideways...No agenda,this piece compelled me to respond the way I did. Duly noted though, that I'll just read your work and comment more low key in the future.
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