Contendership Match: Unfukwitable vs. Beans [Beans Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 11-01-2014, 08:19 AM

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

Unfukwitable · 11-01-2014, 11:33 AM

check

Kill Spree · 11-01-2014, 12:48 PM

Check

Unfukwitable · 11-03-2014, 11:29 PM

Ima poison this dweeb, One dose'll leave'em dead on the scene,
&Afta u die from Ricin, Beans, Ur family'll mourn off the sight of Spanish cuisines.

Kill Spree · 11-04-2014, 08:18 AM

Unfukwitable aka NoQuear on rb

I'm flaming vets, every week I kill a faggot & ya name is next
It takes allot of back bone to admit u Queer, & that's just how u gained a rep

Packed Graves · 11-04-2014, 08:22 AM

This was a close match both came pretty good, feel beans could have done more with the admit part & tie it in with somehingng else. Fuk had a nice flip on a played nameplay & brought wordplay with it.

Unfuk

Persist · 11-04-2014, 12:38 PM

Wasn't Feeling Beans Bar Tbh, Unfikwitable Came Harder

Vote: Unfukwitable

jilti · 11-04-2014, 12:50 PM

Both dropped fire. Easily BOTW. Ricin was sick, backbone Queer was sick. Soooooo close, hate to give it to one over the other but..

Vote - Beans

fresh · 11-04-2014, 01:01 PM

ricin, beans was dope. I thought it connected well and was executed nicely.

I had to re-read beans a couple times to get it. backbone admit u queer was actually dope once it clicked in.

Man close as fuck here but I think beans had a little more personal factor and was harsher imo, so he's getting my vote here.

v/Beans

11-04-2014, 03:41 PM

I wasn't feelin ricin beans, tbh. I felt like it was an obvious flip on his name which lacked creativity, IMO. IDK what it was, but it didn't sit well for me and had to read the bar like 9 times, and every time I read it, something felt off about it. Beans bar wasn't all that either but felt if he would have brushed up/touched up his wording, it could have been a lot better. However, I do feel Beans edges this...

v/Beans.

BROKE LESNAR · 11-04-2014, 04:47 PM

This battle wowed me. Both used np's. Both pulled them off rather nicely. Most likely the sleeper battle of the week. Reading Fuk's I thought it would take a similar bar from Beans to equal it, the rhyme scheme Fuk brought was vicious. But Beans countered and did so with the same animus. And included a personal to boot.

v-Beans

Spoken · 11-04-2014, 05:55 PM

I got beans

Both were fire and both did nice flips but the back bone to admit decipher was nice as fuuuccccckkk

Certain · 11-04-2014, 06:57 PM

Unfukwitable: I'm 99% sure you learned what ricin does from Breaking Bad, so you should know that it won't leave him dead on the scene. The actual name play was OK, but the follow through was no better than the setup.

Beans: The concept again was better than the setup. But I liked the double usage of admit, and the mistakes weren't as bad as Unfukwitable's.

Vote: Beans

YDK · 11-04-2014, 08:53 PM

Damn reading fuks bar I thought he killed it than I read beans an was even more wowed with the wp personal combo.
thus was easily battle of the week but I got beans taking this by a flea hair
Dope shit fellas

Destroyer · 11-04-2014, 10:48 PM

I got unfuk
beans shit was just ok to me
thought ricin beans was clever, liked the rhyme schemes

Kin · 11-05-2014, 08:29 AM

unFuck ricin' beans was straight....came pretty correct at him

Beans...actually had to re-read the line for the BackBone to make sense...thats dope when you sneak somethin' so simple in but still it's hard to catch...Best I seen from you...

Vote- Beanz

~RustyGunZ~ · 11-05-2014, 07:38 PM

didnt like eithers wording at all

eh...

v/beans

personal vs. NP

11-01-2014, 08:19 AM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Contendership Match: Unfukwitable vs. Beans [Beans Wins] Rebuttal Option ▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in ▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar) Due Monday 12am PST

11-01-2014, 11:33 AM	#2
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	check __________________ WICKeD

11-03-2014, 11:29 PM	#4
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	Ima poison this dweeb, One dose'll leave'em dead on the scene, &Afta u die from Ricin, Beans, Ur family'll mourn off the sight of Spanish cuisines. __________________ WICKeD

11-04-2014, 08:22 AM	#6
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777847	This was a close match both came pretty good, feel beans could have done more with the admit part & tie it in with somehingng else. Fuk had a nice flip on a played nameplay & brought wordplay with it. Unfuk __________________ back

11-04-2014, 05:55 PM	#12
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	I got beans Both were fire and both did nice flips but the back bone to admit decipher was nice as fuuuccccckkk __________________ WP Po'ethics

11-01-2014, 12:48 PM	#3
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	Check

11-04-2014, 08:18 AM	#5
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	Unfukwitable aka NoQuear on rb I'm flaming vets, every week I kill a faggot & ya name is next It takes allot of back bone to admit u Queer, & that's just how u gained a rep

11-04-2014, 12:38 PM	#7
Persist Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2014 Posts: 23 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 0	Wasn't Feeling Beans Bar Tbh, Unfikwitable Came Harder Vote: Unfukwitable

11-04-2014, 12:50 PM	#8
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816228	Both dropped fire. Easily BOTW. Ricin was sick, backbone Queer was sick. Soooooo close, hate to give it to one over the other but.. Vote - Beans

11-04-2014, 01:01 PM	#9
fresh Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 302 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 0	ricin, beans was dope. I thought it connected well and was executed nicely. I had to re-read beans a couple times to get it. backbone admit u queer was actually dope once it clicked in. Man close as fuck here but I think beans had a little more personal factor and was harsher imo, so he's getting my vote here. v/Beans

11-04-2014, 03:41 PM	#10
Amen Guest Posts: n/a	I wasn't feelin ricin beans, tbh. I felt like it was an obvious flip on his name which lacked creativity, IMO. IDK what it was, but it didn't sit well for me and had to read the bar like 9 times, and every time I read it, something felt off about it. Beans bar wasn't all that either but felt if he would have brushed up/touched up his wording, it could have been a lot better. However, I do feel Beans edges this... v/Beans.

11-04-2014, 04:47 PM	#11
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	This battle wowed me. Both used np's. Both pulled them off rather nicely. Most likely the sleeper battle of the week. Reading Fuk's I thought it would take a similar bar from Beans to equal it, the rhyme scheme Fuk brought was vicious. But Beans countered and did so with the same animus. And included a personal to boot. v-Beans

11-04-2014, 06:57 PM	#13
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	Unfukwitable: I'm 99% sure you learned what ricin does from Breaking Bad, so you should know that it won't leave him dead on the scene. The actual name play was OK, but the follow through was no better than the setup. Beans: The concept again was better than the setup. But I liked the double usage of admit, and the mistakes weren't as bad as Unfukwitable's. Vote: Beans __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

11-04-2014, 08:53 PM	#14
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181112	Damn reading fuks bar I thought he killed it than I read beans an was even more wowed with the wp personal combo. thus was easily battle of the week but I got beans taking this by a flea hair Dope shit fellas __________________

11-05-2014, 08:29 AM	#16
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662201	unFuck ricin' beans was straight....came pretty correct at him Beans...actually had to re-read the line for the BackBone to make sense...thats dope when you sneak somethin' so simple in but still it's hard to catch...Best I seen from you... Vote- Beanz

11-05-2014, 07:38 PM	#17
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,844 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899406	didnt like eithers wording at all eh... v/beans personal vs. NP