05-25-2020, 06:26 PM | #1 |
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Week 8: Inf (4-2) vs. Ryno (3-1) - INF WINS
NBL Season XIV Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends MONDAY ideally • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 10 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more lines. @INF @Ryno
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05-25-2020, 10:28 PM | #2 |
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05-26-2020, 05:35 PM | #3 |
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@INF Ryno sent me 10
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05-26-2020, 10:31 PM | #4 |
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Ry runnin this fool pockets. Im about to clown this sucker Cuz I’m takin this Mando w/ the beam just like that bounty hunter U couldn’t handle tag beef kid. U’ve never had skills rippin Plus everything ‘Sai Dished’ proved he was never the Meal Ticket INF u mid tier or top? U left the tourney shitless kid U tried giving Cash Assistance then he found out he couldn’t benefit & we hate all ur drops pussy. U ain’t savage or vicious If ‘Sai Show Violence’ I guarantee u what he channels is scripted On my court I’m a soldier. Against the vets u lack composure It’s ironic u had ur shot to check Answer & wound up crossing over Last edited by Ryno; 05-27-2020 at 05:41 PM. |
05-29-2020, 03:06 AM | #5 |
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His girl
Sneaks away to fuck me at work cuz this losers avg I slam it on the break after shifts - we pray u'd jump in moving traffic Dont meditate on the loss, seek help or a pill request And from A MD Ry, Zen's not enough to process the mental stress Kids depressed? Wait til votes turn em the littlest girl Golden Globe would fit his performance being pissed at the world Ya body holding THAT much mass up borders insanity Climbing stairs legs 'gave out' so much they got awards in philanthropy The gat w/ me. Empty 1 in ur gut then swallow the butt Squeeze on your waist like a GERD'll & that have ya coughing up blood Last edited by Saint; 05-29-2020 at 05:23 AM. |
05-29-2020, 01:01 PM | #6 |
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Cool short battle. I got these standouts from each
Ryno U couldn’t handle tag beef kid. U’ve never had skills rippin Plus everything ‘Sai Dished’ proved he was never the Meal Ticket Inf Sneaks away to fuck me at work cuz this losers avg I slam it on the break after shifts - we pray u'd jump in moving traffic Ya body holding THAT much mass up borders insanity Climbing stairs legs 'gave out' so much they got awards in philanthropy I enjoy Ryno’s style a lot but I thought Inf just had the edge here. Couple more I was feeling compared with Ryno’s. Coulda quoted ‘cash assistance’ from Ryno too just felt it was a little too bland... Vote - Inf |
05-29-2020, 01:35 PM | #7 |
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Ry runnin this fool pockets. Im about to clown this sucker
Cuz I’m takin this Mando w/ the beam just like that bounty hunter cool opener U couldn’t handle tag beef kid. U’ve never had skills rippin Plus everything ‘Sai Dished’ proved he was never the Meal Ticket I think the pause in side dish is a bit kinda throws off the wp phonetically but decent INF u mid tier or top? U left the tourney shitless kid U tried giving Cash Assistance then he found out he couldn’t benefit execution and wording is cool here, the only drawback is that cash flips are hard to implement without seeming played & we hate all ur drops pussy. U ain’t savage or vicious If ‘Sai Show Violence’ I guarantee u what he channels is scripted this is alright, wording couldve been more aggressive On my court I’m a soldier. Against the vets u lack composure It’s ironic u had ur shot to check Answer & wound up crossing over Think maybe you could've had an A.I. or stronger basketball reference in the set-up, but this is cool His girl Sneaks away to fuck me at work cuz this losers avg I slam it on the break after shifts - we pray u'd jump in moving traffic ok opener Dont meditate on the loss, seek help or a pill request And from A MD Ry, Zen's not enough to process the mental stress I'm guessing MD is mental distress or mental disorder, I think you're doing a little too much with the wp here Kids depressed? Wait til votes turn em the littlest girl Golden Globe would fit his performance being pissed at the world kinda funny, just not a huge hit Ya body holding THAT much mass up borders insanity Climbing stairs legs 'gave out' so much they got awards in philanthropy Bleh, I had a similar bar to this for my verse this week so I'll probably scrap it. It's decent, just mad your battle's up first The gat w/ me. Empty 1 in ur gut then swallow the butt Squeeze on your waist like a GERD'll & that have ya coughing up blood I like the idea, execution could be a little smoother I think inf's traffic bar is lotb, but I think ryno was a little more consistent overall. I might be the only one who feels that way, but that is what it is. mvgt Ryno |
05-29-2020, 10:01 PM | #8 | |
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U couldn’t handle tag beef kid. U’ve never had skills rippin
Plus everything ‘Sai Dished’ proved he was never the Meal Ticket INF u mid tier or top? U left the tourney shitless kid U tried giving Cash Assistance then he found out he couldn’t benefit For the italicized bar, you should've said Sai'd Dish/side dish. I still liked it, even though the pause slightly messes with the wp. I'll give you like a 1.5 for quotable bars, because the lines are smooth, but that one area messed up the finish to that beef bar. vs. Dont meditate on the loss, seek help or a pill request And from A MD Ry, Zen's not enough to process the mental stress Ya body holding THAT much mass up borders insanity Climbing stairs legs 'gave out' so much they got awards in philanthropy With your italicized bar, I actually get the reference of AMD Ryzen processor and A Medical Doctor prescribing Ryno meditation techniques. I just found that the actual diss lacked, while it was dope as a name flip, which you'll get credit for. It's actually clever as shit, but those who aren't into technology might get it (and niggas are lazy). I'll give you about a 1.5 for quotables as well. v - INF. I'll say the philanthropy bar was LOTB for me, and after both tied in the amount of bars quotable, I couldn't find any others to sufficiently break the tie in attempt or any other criteria. So, I just decided to use LOTB as the next thing, and I felt like that philanthropy bar was worded and executed very well, while being clever. Both guys had some good material, and some stuff that could've been replaced.
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05-29-2020, 10:42 PM | #9 |
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Sai dished vs. Philanthropy
V inf All around better verse imo. More consistent verse and lotb. |
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This was cool enough for what it was. A short, entertaining little battle. The philanthropy line was the best punch here (and was executed really well). It was close, but I’ll give the edge to Inf.
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06-02-2020, 09:27 AM | #12 |
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INF wins
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