Week 8: Inf (4-2) vs. Ryno (3-1) - INF WINS

[Blue Bayou]

NBL Season XIV

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@INF
@Ryno

[Saint]

10 buddy

[Blue Bayou]

@INF Ryno sent me 10

[Ryno]

Aka Saitama

Ry runnin this fool pockets. Im about to clown this sucker
Cuz I’m takin this Mando w/ the beam just like that bounty hunter
U couldn’t handle tag beef kid. U’ve never had skills rippin
Plus everything ‘Sai Dished’ proved he was never the Meal Ticket
INF u mid tier or top? U left the tourney shitless kid
U tried giving Cash Assistance then he found out he couldn’t benefit
& we hate all ur drops pussy. U ain’t savage or vicious
If ‘Sai Show Violence’ I guarantee u what he channels is scripted
On my court I’m a soldier. Against the vets u lack composure
It’s ironic u had ur shot to check Answer & wound up crossing over

[Saint]

His girl

Sneaks away to fuck me at work cuz this losers avg
I slam it on the break after shifts - we pray u'd jump in moving traffic
Dont meditate on the loss, seek help or a pill request
And from A MD Ry, Zen's not enough to process the mental stress
Kids depressed? Wait til votes turn em the littlest girl
Golden Globe would fit his performance being pissed at the world
Ya body holding THAT much mass up borders insanity
Climbing stairs legs 'gave out' so much they got awards in philanthropy
The gat w/ me. Empty 1 in ur gut then swallow the butt
Squeeze on your waist like a GERD'll & that have ya coughing up blood

[Wanderer]

Cool short battle. I got these standouts from each

Ryno

U couldn’t handle tag beef kid. U’ve never had skills rippin
Plus everything ‘Sai Dished’ proved he was never the Meal Ticket

Inf

Sneaks away to fuck me at work cuz this losers avg
I slam it on the break after shifts - we pray u'd jump in moving traffic
Ya body holding THAT much mass up borders insanity
Climbing stairs legs 'gave out' so much they got awards in philanthropy

I enjoy Ryno’s style a lot but I thought Inf just had the edge here. Couple more I was feeling compared with Ryno’s. Coulda quoted ‘cash assistance’ from Ryno too just felt it was a little too bland...

Vote - Inf

[Answer]

Ry runnin this fool pockets. Im about to clown this sucker
Cuz I’m takin this Mando w/ the beam just like that bounty hunter

cool opener

U couldn’t handle tag beef kid. U’ve never had skills rippin
Plus everything ‘Sai Dished’ proved he was never the Meal Ticket

I think the pause in side dish is a bit kinda throws off the wp phonetically but decent

INF u mid tier or top? U left the tourney shitless kid
U tried giving Cash Assistance then he found out he couldn’t benefit

execution and wording is cool here, the only drawback is that cash flips are hard to implement without seeming played

& we hate all ur drops pussy. U ain’t savage or vicious
If ‘Sai Show Violence’ I guarantee u what he channels is scripted

this is alright, wording couldve been more aggressive

On my court I’m a soldier. Against the vets u lack composure
It’s ironic u had ur shot to check Answer & wound up crossing over

Think maybe you could've had an A.I. or stronger basketball reference in the set-up, but this is cool




His girl
Sneaks away to fuck me at work cuz this losers avg
I slam it on the break after shifts - we pray u'd jump in moving traffic

ok opener

Dont meditate on the loss, seek help or a pill request
And from A MD Ry, Zen's not enough to process the mental stress

I'm guessing MD is mental distress or mental disorder, I think you're doing a little too much with the wp here

Kids depressed? Wait til votes turn em the littlest girl
Golden Globe would fit his performance being pissed at the world

kinda funny, just not a huge hit

Ya body holding THAT much mass up borders insanity
Climbing stairs legs 'gave out' so much they got awards in philanthropy

Bleh, I had a similar bar to this for my verse this week so I'll probably scrap it. It's decent, just mad your battle's up first

The gat w/ me. Empty 1 in ur gut then swallow the butt
Squeeze on your waist like a GERD'll & that have ya coughing up blood

I like the idea, execution could be a little smoother

I think inf's traffic bar is lotb, but I think ryno was a little more consistent overall. I might be the only one who feels that way, but that is what it is.


mvgt Ryno

[Steve Fox]

U couldn’t handle tag beef kid. U’ve never had skills rippin
Plus everything ‘Sai Dished’ proved he was never the Meal Ticket
INF u mid tier or top? U left the tourney shitless kid
U tried giving Cash Assistance then he found out he couldn’t benefit

For the italicized bar, you should've said Sai'd Dish/side dish. I still liked it, even though the pause slightly messes with the wp. I'll give you like a 1.5 for quotable bars, because the lines are smooth, but that one area messed up the finish to that beef bar.

vs.

Dont meditate on the loss, seek help or a pill request
And from A MD Ry, Zen's not enough to process the mental stress
Ya body holding THAT much mass up borders insanity
Climbing stairs legs 'gave out' so much they got awards in philanthropy

With your italicized bar, I actually get the reference of AMD Ryzen processor and A Medical Doctor prescribing Ryno meditation techniques. I just found that the actual diss lacked, while it was dope as a name flip, which you'll get credit for. It's actually clever as shit, but those who aren't into technology might get it (and niggas are lazy). I'll give you about a 1.5 for quotables as well.

v - INF. I'll say the philanthropy bar was LOTB for me, and after both tied in the amount of bars quotable, I couldn't find any others to sufficiently break the tie in attempt or any other criteria. So, I just decided to use LOTB as the next thing, and I felt like that philanthropy bar was worded and executed very well, while being clever. Both guys had some good material, and some stuff that could've been replaced.

[tradanN]

Sai dished vs. Philanthropy

V inf

All around better verse imo. More consistent verse and lotb.

[Hands]

Originally Posted by Ryno

Aka Saitama

Ry runnin this fool pockets. Im about to clown this sucker
Cuz I’m takin this Mando w/ the beam just like that bounty hunter
Kind of a stretch because nobody would say man doe without the 's irl, but good try
U couldn’t handle tag beef kid. U’ve never had skills rippin
Plus everything ‘Sai Dished’ proved he was never the Meal Ticket
A bit forced. Sai'd dish could have made this dope (unlike tic lmao)
INF u mid tier or top? U left the tourney shitless kid
U tried giving Cash Assistance then he found out he couldn’t benefit
Man you suck at rhyming, but this was a dope concept. Decent overall
& we hate all ur drops pussy. U ain’t savage or vicious
If ‘Sai Show Violence’ I guarantee u what he channels is scripted
Below average
On my court I’m a soldier. Against the vets u lack composure
It’s ironic u had ur shot to check Answer & wound up crossing over
No

Originally Posted by INF

His girl

Sneaks away to fuck me at work cuz this losers avg
I slam it on the break after shifts - we pray u'd jump in moving traffic
Dope
Dont meditate on the loss, seek help or a pill request
And from A MD Ry, Zen's not enough to process the mental stress
Not dope. Far from it
Kids depressed? Wait til votes turn em the littlest girl
Golden Globe would fit his performance being pissed at the world
Forgot 'to' or 'into' in the setup I'm assiming? Golden globe/pissed at the world was creative but corny. Decent overall
Ya body holding THAT much mass up borders insanity
Climbing stairs legs 'gave out' so much they got awards in philanthropy
Lol good
The gat w/ me. Empty 1 in ur gut then swallow the butt
Squeeze on your waist like a GERD'll & that have ya coughing up blood
Ok

Inf won

[Ajax]

This was cool enough for what it was. A short, entertaining little battle. The philanthropy line was the best punch here (and was executed really well). It was close, but I’ll give the edge to Inf.

[Blue Bayou]

INF wins