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Old 07-22-2023, 01:59 PM   #1
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Season 11 XI


VERSE DUE: Wednesday, July, 26th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 24 Hour Ext: Mod Discretion

VOTE DUE: Thursday, July, 27th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 2 Vote Requirement Enforced/Penalty

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Old 07-28-2023, 07:39 AM   #2
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Summertime's scorching heat beds,
A giant furry with a handful of ladies,
Climbing skyscrapers, flossing breasts,
Call the Air Force, he's swiping right on all the jets.
Spit falling on parked cars, water drenched,
Another blonde falling 100 floors, who's using all those steps?

Genetic control, evolutionary science, lonely apes,
Longing for intimacy, that's all it takes, bananas rising
Questions about care, I'm offering insight to various ciphers,
And I'm haunted by the feeling that something is missing,
Links in this shifting kink, dangling broads over the sidereal sky bridge.

"His giant fingers smelt like jungle dirt and rotting leather in the tannery,
Howling at the moon, her naked body didn't stand a chance with rough handling,"
She could sense the pain in Kong's voice,
She felt an immediate connection to the giant ape, like he was a pet.
"Kong, I understand your heart, it aches," he looked as if he knew,
She whispered with concern, "This is your first time in the city, risky move."

Kong knew she didn't mean it, like other humans he was a novelty of nature, a one of a kind.
This hurt Kong even more, knowing that love ain't blind.
The street was filled with onlookers cheering and aghast,
He was nothing but a creep, a failed design in the present with no past.
He didn't say a peep, just took a leap,
landing head first on the street next to a neon parking sign.
He now hangs in a museum, stuffed like a doll,
The woman he held hostage was miraculously saved from the fall.

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Old 07-29-2023, 04:21 AM   #3
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KING KONG

King Kong, Jim Kong; Andrew Kong, elitist of the envious few
For poachers, scimitars, danced in the view of a gorilla from the blue/blew
He ate banananas, zebras, elephants, even you!
For who are you to a king, a fucking peasent, pheasent!
I am king kong, a gorilla smashing planets to atoms
GRANITE IS HANDSOME TILL IT TURNED TO SALT
Revolt said the revolution of voyagers and pioneers
PILE NEAR PILE NEAR PILE NEAR!
I am not overrated, but I assault and insault
It was no match for the clever revolt, they took my to NY
THEN I CRY! FOR I SAW A BEAUTIFUL WOMAN, fine as dutch
And it was clutch, so was such
I didn't enjoy that, being poked by liquid spears,
SIMPLISTIC hero's in the midst of near, quenching fear
They were merley jealous I thought with the last few seconds of my death
SNAKES AND LIZARD DEMONS, I saw before my last breath
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Both had flaw verse
Sin verse had some deep emotions

Broke had dope lines flow soiled
emotions very deep

Vote- Broke I felt like his verse more polished
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Old 08-08-2023, 05:51 PM   #5
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