02-10-2018, 08:25 PM
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The Bat God
Join Date: Sep 2015
Location: The Crystal Labyrinth
Posts: 106
Battle Record: 1-2
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Originally Posted by Profit
S' clear w/wack bars u jump on cocks fa chears & daps, par
I mean if u wanted to ride 500 laps.. u shoulda pursued a career in NASCAR
> Good execution on this one, with solid internal multis. I get the concept and it's fairly solid, though it seems a bit outlandish.
They say u do a bunch fa the site, well don't believe the lies peeps made
Cos we wanna to change the culture, by gettin rid of ur wack ass like the IT trade
> This is an Isaiah Thomas / basketball concept, right? I guess I sort of get it but I'm not feeling it. Sports bars usually go right over my head even when they don't.
U bleed this text shit, Type to ignore ur life to talk w/nerds
Gotta reputation for bein a PUSSY, cos infamous treat his wife to drop a verse
> Is this a personal or something? I don't get it.
U don't rap sick, straight trash plus ur no savage
Typically it's 40 degrees but today's mid 20's.. faggit ur below average
> Again, is this a personal? Or did you just look at the thermometer and come up with this?
Overall: A boring and unimpressive verse, except for the fairly humorous and well-written opener. [9/20]
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Originally Posted by Infiltration
U hate pussy & dick down men. that's a retrofit; bitch
Faggot s'like you biting finny, how yo steeze is such an Estrogen Diss
> Huh?
Talk stocks & shares. I broughttt protection out for profit
So 'kaching kaching' on investment sounds of ur bullets bouncin off it
> Bullets sound like "kaching kaching?" Nah.
I vacay then return the same day. & never live wit regrets
A Daytripper.....same thing you become when they refuse consensual sex
> Day tripper / Date raper. What the fuck kind of accent does that work in? BATS!
Weirdo's into fetishes; midgets, animals. KNOW u a freak
Ur porn searches have a more 'XXX gimmick' than the roast did this week.
> Alright, I'll give you this one. The XXX concept and resulting bar are both fairly obvious, but the result isn't too bad.
Overall: A verse full of bad bars, especially the hilariously horrid "day tripper" "wordplay." [7/20]
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MVGT: Profit
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