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Old 02-10-2018, 08:25 PM   #1
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Originally Posted by Profit
S' clear w/wack bars u jump on cocks fa chears & daps, par
I mean if u wanted to ride 500 laps.. u shoulda pursued a career in NASCAR

> Good execution on this one, with solid internal multis. I get the concept and it's fairly solid, though it seems a bit outlandish.

They say u do a bunch fa the site, well don't believe the lies peeps made
Cos we wanna to change the culture, by gettin rid of ur wack ass like the IT trade

> This is an Isaiah Thomas / basketball concept, right? I guess I sort of get it but I'm not feeling it. Sports bars usually go right over my head even when they don't.

U bleed this text shit, Type to ignore ur life to talk w/nerds
Gotta reputation for bein a PUSSY, cos infamous treat his wife to drop a verse

> Is this a personal or something? I don't get it.

U don't rap sick, straight trash plus ur no savage
Typically it's 40 degrees but today's mid 20's.. faggit ur below average

> Again, is this a personal? Or did you just look at the thermometer and come up with this?

Overall: A boring and unimpressive verse, except for the fairly humorous and well-written opener. [9/20]
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Originally Posted by Infiltration
U hate pussy & dick down men. that's a retrofit; bitch
Faggot s'like you biting finny, how yo steeze is such an Estrogen Diss

> Huh?

Talk stocks & shares. I broughttt protection out for profit
So 'kaching kaching' on investment sounds of ur bullets bouncin off it

> Bullets sound like "kaching kaching?" Nah.

I vacay then return the same day. & never live wit regrets
A Daytripper.....same thing you become when they refuse consensual sex

> Day tripper / Date raper. What the fuck kind of accent does that work in? BATS!

Weirdo's into fetishes; midgets, animals. KNOW u a freak
Ur porn searches have a more 'XXX gimmick' than the roast did this week.

> Alright, I'll give you this one. The XXX concept and resulting bar are both fairly obvious, but the result isn't too bad.

Overall: A verse full of bad bars, especially the hilariously horrid "day tripper" "wordplay." [7/20]
MVGT: Profit
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