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For Battling 02-05-2018 02:14 PM

Profit (4-3) vs. Infiltration (4-4) - PROFIT WINS
 
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@Profit @Infiltration

Saint 02-08-2018 12:32 AM

8-10

Profit 02-08-2018 08:17 AM

8 is good right now but can I get the ext cos I won't be able to write till tomorrow night

Profit 02-09-2018 11:09 PM

S' clear w/wack bars u jump on cocks fa chears & daps, par
I mean if u wanted to ride 500 laps.. u shoulda pursued a career in NASCAR
They say u do a bunch fa the site, well don't believe the lies peeps made
Cos we wanna to change the culture, by gettin rid of ur wack ass like the IT trade
U bleed this text shit, Type to ignore ur life to talk w/nerds
Gotta reputation for bein a PUSSY, cos infamous treat his wife to drop a verse
U don't rap sick, straight trash plus ur no savage
Typically it's 40 degrees but today's mid 20's.. faggit ur below average

Blah.. all I cud do

Saint 02-09-2018 11:17 PM

U hate pussy & dick down men. that's a retrofit; bitch
Faggot s'like you biting finny, how yo steeze is such an Estrogen Diss
Talk stocks & shares. I broughttt protection out for profit
So 'kaching kaching' on investment sounds of ur bullets bouncin off it
I vacay then return the same day. & never live wit regrets
A Daytripper.....same thing you become when they refuse consensual sex
Weirdo's into fetishes; midgets, animals. KNOW u a freak
Ur porn searches have a more 'XXX gimmick' than the roast did this week.

Enbombz 02-10-2018 06:29 PM

prof ill be honestywas feeling your verse here. The opener was mechanically sound it us wasnt a great angle. the closer wasn't bad but it wasn't good either. Felt faiir

inf- opener i like the reference idea more than how you executed it. same with the second nice idea but i want more clarity, 3rd i spent fucking ages thinking about this, if its date raper the its almost so bad its good but its just too much of a reach. closer was okay

i got inf here pretty clearly, v/inf

Sovereign 02-10-2018 08:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Profit
S' clear w/wack bars u jump on cocks fa chears & daps, par
I mean if u wanted to ride 500 laps.. u shoulda pursued a career in NASCAR

> Good execution on this one, with solid internal multis. I get the concept and it's fairly solid, though it seems a bit outlandish.

They say u do a bunch fa the site, well don't believe the lies peeps made
Cos we wanna to change the culture, by gettin rid of ur wack ass like the IT trade

> This is an Isaiah Thomas / basketball concept, right? I guess I sort of get it but I'm not feeling it. Sports bars usually go right over my head even when they don't.

U bleed this text shit, Type to ignore ur life to talk w/nerds
Gotta reputation for bein a PUSSY, cos infamous treat his wife to drop a verse

> Is this a personal or something? I don't get it.

U don't rap sick, straight trash plus ur no savage
Typically it's 40 degrees but today's mid 20's.. faggit ur below average

> Again, is this a personal? Or did you just look at the thermometer and come up with this?

Overall: A boring and unimpressive verse, except for the fairly humorous and well-written opener. [9/20]

Quote:

Originally Posted by Infiltration
U hate pussy & dick down men. that's a retrofit; bitch
Faggot s'like you biting finny, how yo steeze is such an Estrogen Diss

> Huh?

Talk stocks & shares. I broughttt protection out for profit
So 'kaching kaching' on investment sounds of ur bullets bouncin off it

> Bullets sound like "kaching kaching?" Nah.

I vacay then return the same day. & never live wit regrets
A Daytripper.....same thing you become when they refuse consensual sex

> Day tripper / Date raper. What the fuck kind of accent does that work in? BATS!

Weirdo's into fetishes; midgets, animals. KNOW u a freak
Ur porn searches have a more 'XXX gimmick' than the roast did this week.

> Alright, I'll give you this one. The XXX concept and resulting bar are both fairly obvious, but the result isn't too bad.

Overall: A verse full of bad bars, especially the hilariously horrid "day tripper" "wordplay." [7/20]

MVGT: Profit

Cred 02-11-2018 08:46 AM

Profit had the opener that was cool I thought

Vs

Infiltrations opener was also the only thing I liked in his verse

Tbch I thought inf was gonna catch a body here, idk why. But this shit was honestly a let down. Profit seemed rushed but the opener was better than Infs and those were the only stand out lines of the battle. Inf, 8 lines, 3 fag related punches? Yeah I wasn’t feeling much here but profit edged it IMO


Vote / profit

Habitat 02-11-2018 09:01 AM

NASCAR

Vs

XXX Gimmick

Didn't really like either verse but I got profit edging this one out barely

v/profit

Alvin Karpis 02-11-2018 09:25 AM

This was tough to call
Both were a bit lazy
Profit had the opener
In had the closer
But the other lines just fell a bit flat, idk
Overall I gotta give it to Profit by a hair
Both didn’t bring what they usually do so it just came down to the better misses
V/Profit

2tripple0 02-11-2018 01:34 PM

S' clear w/wack bars u jump on cocks fa chears & daps, par
I mean if u wanted to ride 500 laps.. u shoulda pursued a career in NASCAR
good
They say u do a bunch fa the site, well don't believe the lies peeps made
Cos we wanna to change the culture, by gettin rid of ur wack ass like the IT trade
better
U bleed this text shit, Type to ignore ur life to talk w/nerds
Gotta reputation for bein a PUSSY, cos infamous treat his wife to drop a verse
nah
U don't rap sick, straight trash plus ur no savage
Typically it's 40 degrees but today's mid 20's.. faggit ur below average
ummm nah

vs.

U hate pussy & dick down men. that's a retrofit; bitch
Faggot s'like you biting finny, how yo steeze is such an Estrogen Diss
uhh nah
Talk stocks & shares. I broughttt protection out for profit
So 'kaching kaching' on investment sounds of ur bullets bouncin off it
maybe
I vacay then return the same day. & never live wit regrets
A Daytripper.....same thing you become when they refuse consensual sex
hmm okay
Weirdo's into fetishes; midgets, animals. KNOW u a freak
Ur porn searches have a more 'XXX gimmick' than the roast did this week.
could've been better worded


vote: profit

Nick James 02-11-2018 01:56 PM

Talk stocks & shares. I broughttt protection out for profit
So 'kaching kaching' on investment sounds of ur bullets bouncin off it
Weirdo's into fetishes; midgets, animals. KNOW u a freak
Ur porn searches have a more 'XXX gimmick' than the roast did this week.

man when I read that opener the other day it was different lol..

vs

S' clear w/wack bars u jump on cocks fa chears & daps, par
I mean if u wanted to ride 500 laps.. u shoulda pursued a career in NASCAR

Inf had sum fresher shit here.. took it pretty easy imo

Vote - inf

Barcotic 02-12-2018 01:04 AM

You been in more laps than the Indy 500. - Ludacris

Profit
not feeling a whole lot from u this time around, & im sure u didnt get ur opening concept from luda but it doesnt make it any less played

vs

Inf
date ripper was cool i thought

closer could have hit w better wording

v/infiltration

bleak 02-12-2018 04:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Infiltration (Post 641274)
U hate pussy & dick down men. that's a retrofit; bitch
Faggot s'like you biting finny, how yo steeze is such an Estrogen Diss
-Didn't get this at all
Talk stocks & shares. I broughttt protection out for profit
So 'kaching kaching' on investment sounds of ur bullets bouncin off it
-At first I read this wrong but I see what you did it's decent

The other stuff want misses but not great

Quote:

Originally Posted by Profit (Post 641273)
S' clear w/wack bars u jump on cocks fa chears & daps, par
I mean if u wanted to ride 500 laps.. u shoulda pursued a career in NASCAR
- pretty good
U bleed this text shit, Type to ignore ur life to talk w/nerds
Gotta reputation for bein a PUSSY, cos infamous treat his wife to drop a verse
- don't see how ppl didn't connect this it was pretty good but the infamous connection could have been better

Blah.. all I cud do

Decent stuff here I've seen better from both esp. Inf but i gotta lean the other way on this one. Wanted to see maybe a few more lines to match

Profit

Pinot Grij 02-12-2018 01:59 PM

Profit

"daps, par" is a shit set-up, the punch is cool, but you could tell a Nascar line was coming by the way you reached on the rhyme
Culture line is the best play on the Cavs trades that I've seen here yet.
I don't follow the Infamous wp
Closer is a little soft too.

Inf

Opener is too much information.
Kaching is ok.
Daytripper setup was a reach for a confusing punchline
Closer is cool

Inf was pretty light -- Profit started strong and tapered off, but those opening bars stand out as the highlight of this match up for me.

Vote -- Profit


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