fraze 7-4 vs Odd Ways 2-1 - ODD WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

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Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 23th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

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• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
@fraze @Odd Ways

[Bash]

12 is good

[fraze]

Word homie.

[Bash]

-Pray for the Departed

Cred flatlined u harsh, so trust I'm gonna do the same shit
I'll punch his top so hard, when paramedics lift his skull it'll sound like a rain stick
The hood banged ya bitch out, there was no resistin hardly
I saw so many niggas twisted in her sheets, the shit looked like a fuckin toga party
Tryna explain ya weak raps, n we're all like damn dude
U used a Greece line so corny, I thought John Travolta would of come n danced through
We know he's a hater, the hood says he ain't gettin no paper
Fact: the closest he'll get to a trap King, is catchin dinner every 22 acres
This dude is a straight clown, but no worries cuz this tech'll let go
I'll put the metal to this jokers mouth, n give em more exposure than Jared Leto
U act froggy then it's a wrap, u'll be river bound just for actin hard
The way his body'll hit the water, the crime scene'll come w/ olympic judges n scorecards



@fraze

[fraze]

edit: meant to post this last night

lost but i got cred last week. sometimes my ‘lines go over heads’.
if this week goes to the wire… i'm choking you after bringing it down around your neck….
im going for the throat. if you see hawks… better scamper quick…
so fast to give Odd a bull rush with Lynch that I would have won the NFL championship...
fraze is hot as sin. shut the fuck up. just nod and grin.
if im at odds with a bitch… ill bust bananas inna face…. now that’s a sloppy cap.a.chin...
ya bars are kneelin huddled round corners on my old block.
such a crap shoot... so ill keep shooting odds with the 3-4 cause you know i keep the roll hot….
im in the field concealed, sniping bitches with aggressive means…
when i get charged up… i’m prone to ‘pick a low position’ then hit you with the special beam...
fraze or Bust huh?..... easy win’s what you thought, but *syke*
you’ve been robbed... now you can go Destroyer on the boards like him titty fucking his wife...

[Bash]

@Sharp open for votes

[2tripple0]

I've got odd taking this. .His verse had more structure and I thought his punches hit harder. I thought phrase was alright and he made odd run for his money but odd came with just enough

[Grandiloquent]

Toga party / travolta

Vs

Fraze opening 3 bars.

Not got time to go into any more detail

Vote fraze

[Yppih]

Fraze

Bar1-Concept had a cool twist I liked. 3/5
Bar2-Felt like wording could've been better. 2.5/5
Bar3-Nah wasn't feelin. 1/5
Bar4-Cool punch, got too wordy 2.5/5
Bar5-I liked the Piccolo play. Again still felt wording could've made this hit harder 3/5.
Bar6-Ehh wasn't the biggest fan of this. 2/5

Overall- 14/30

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Odd

Bar1-Cool thought it had a pop 3/5
Bar2-Yeah I lol'd 3/5
Bar3-Again I liked this. 3/5
Bar4-Was cool. 2.5/5
Bar5-Was cool again. 2.5/5
Bar6-Rhyming in the end didn't end off the sweetest. Thought the concept was cool though. 2.75/5

Overall- 16.75/30

Both came pretty solid, but I favored Odd's concepts a bit more.

[Amen.]

opener was ok
toga party was good
travolta was nastyyyy
trap king lol - this nigga haha
jared leto was mild
closer was mean

vs

wire bars were flipped every which was in 04 bro
okay fed off opening concept which to me was creative, still played but creative - My lynch bar last year was doper in LLL
cap a chin was weak
3-4 was stretched an over worded - killed impact
low position was ok
closer over worded but dece

if fraze can stop over wordin his concepts he would be so much better fr fr.

Odd got it imo

[Unfukwitable]

The hood banged ya bitch out, there was no resistin hardly
I saw so many niggas twisted in her sheets, the shit looked like a fuckin toga party
This dude is a straight clown, but no worries cuz this tech'll let go
I'll put the metal to this jokers mouth, n give em more exposure than Jared Leto

vs

im in the field concealed, sniping bitches with aggressive means…
when i get charged up… i’m prone to ‘pick a low position’ then hit you with the special beam...

..

There was a bunch of good/dope concepts in this battle that were not executed 100% so that took away from both drops, I hate seeing something that could be so dope just fizzle out, but one had the better quotes and misses was slightly better. v/Odd

[iSpaz]

Cred flatlined u harsh, so trust I'm gonna do the same shit
I'll punch his top so hard, when paramedics lift his skull it'll sound like a rain stick
// this was aight
The hood banged ya bitch out, there was no resistin hardly
I saw so many niggas twisted in her sheets, the shit looked like a fuckin toga party
// lol
Tryna explain ya weak raps, n we're all like damn dude
U used a Greece line so corny, I thought John Travolta would of come n danced through
// this killed me lolllzz
We know he's a hater, the hood says he ain't gettin no paper
Fact: the closest he'll get to a trap King, is catchin dinner every 22 acres
// its ok
This dude is a straight clown, but no worries cuz this tech'll let go
I'll put the metal to this jokers mouth, n give em more exposure than Jared Leto
// cool
U act froggy then it's a wrap, u'll be river bound just for actin hard
The way his body'll hit the water, the crime scene'll come w/ olympic judges n scorecards
// wtf lol well i think in the olympics they judge off not making a splash haha. but i still got a visual of a body flyin all cray.

vs.

lost but i got cred last week. sometimes my ‘lines go over heads’.
if this week goes to the wire… i'm choking you after bringing it down around your neck….
// not bad
im going for the throat. if you see hawks… better scamper quick…
so fast to give Odd a bull rush with Lynch that I would have won the NFL championship...
// cool
fraze is hot as sin. shut the fuck up. just nod and grin.
if im at odds with a bitch… ill bust bananas inna face…. now that’s a sloppy cap.a.chin...
// not feeling
ya bars are kneelin huddled round corners on my old block.
such a crap shoot... so ill keep shooting odds with the 3-4 cause you know i keep the roll hot….
// ahh i want to like it
im in the field concealed, sniping bitches with aggressive means…
when i get charged up… i’m prone to ‘pick a low position’ then hit you with the special beam...
// cool
fraze or Bust huh?..... easy win’s what you thought, but *syke*
you’ve been robbed... now you can go Destroyer on the boards like him titty fucking his wife...
// i didn't like


v/ odd. it was a pretty mean verse.
__________________

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Odd Ways

-Pray for the Departed

Cred flatlined u harsh, so trust I'm gonna do the same shit
I'll punch his top so hard, when paramedics lift his skull it'll sound like a rain stick
not feeling this man
The hood banged ya bitch out, there was no resistin hardly
I saw so many niggas twisted in her sheets, the shit looked like a fuckin toga party
nice
Tryna explain ya weak raps, n we're all like damn dude
U used a Greece line so corny, I thought John Travolta would of come n danced through
lol ok, could of been worded better and u should of quoted his line to double the impact,but i remember the bar so this is ok
We know he's a hater, the hood says he ain't gettin no paper
Fact: the closest he'll get to a trap King, is catchin dinner every 22 acres
dont get it
This dude is a straight clown, but no worries cuz this tech'll let go
I'll put the metal to this jokers mouth, n give em more exposure than Jared Leto
ok but nothing special, and really light
U act froggy then it's a wrap, u'll be river bound just for actin hard
The way his body'll hit the water, the crime scene'll come w/ olympic judges n scorecards
kinda weak


@fraze

Originally Posted by fraze

edit: meant to post this last night

lost but i got cred last week. sometimes my ‘lines go over heads’.
if this week goes to the wire… i'm choking you after bringing it down around your neck….
wish u could of gave a better rhyme than end and neck bro. really hurts the line
im going for the throat. if you see hawks… better scamper quick…
so fast to give Odd a bull rush with Lynch that I would have won the NFL championship...
ok
fraze is hot as sin. shut the fuck up. just nod and grin.
if im at odds with a bitch… ill bust bananas inna face…. now that’s a sloppy cap.a.chin...
huh?
ya bars are kneelin huddled round corners on my old block.
such a crap shoot... so ill keep shooting odds with the 3-4 cause you know i keep the roll hot….
this is dope
im in the field concealed, sniping bitches with aggressive means…
when i get charged up… i’m prone to ‘pick a low position’ then hit you with the special beam...
fire, concept is eh but u did it on execution i fux with this
fraze or Bust huh?..... easy win’s what you thought, but *syke*
you’ve been robbed... now you can go Destroyer on the boards like him titty fucking his wife...
ehh

i got fraze in a fucking close one


odds was too simple
toga party fire

both had BBAAAAD misses
but I thought fraze had the best line and the better line if I put they 2 best lines vs one another

v fraze

[Swerve]

The hood banged ya bitch out, there was no resistin hardly
I saw so many niggas twisted in her sheets, the shit looked like a fuckin toga party

vs.

im going for the throat. if you see hawks… better scamper quick…
so fast to give Odd a bull rush with Lynch that I would have won the NFL championship...
ya bars are kneelin huddled round corners on my old block.
such a crap shoot... so ill keep shooting odds with the 3-4 cause you know i keep the roll hot….
im in the field concealed, sniping bitches with aggressive means…
when i get charged up… i’m prone to ‘pick a low position’ then hit you with the special beam...


I got Fraze here. I thought Odd Ways had LOTB with the toga line and his wording was much better, but the concepts from fraze were quite solid and got it for me. I also did kind of like the Destroyer's wife's titties line.

V/ Fraze

[Bust]

Odd

Opener was oooooook
Haha toga party was cool
Greece was ok lol
Trap king coulda been better idk though it wasn't referenced well enuff to land good
Jared Leto was ok
Didn't really like the closer much


Fraze

Didn't like ur opener that much I've seen that down to the wire/ use the wire to choke u type shit a lot
Bull rush wit lynch was ok
U lost me on the cap a chin bar
Me shooting odds was slick
Pick a low position was nice
Close was weak


Damn, close call, I felt odd was consistent with light jabs plus had a couple misses n faze had two solid lines a light jab n a couple misses so overall the 2 dope barz from fraze pretty much wrap this up I'm.. Good shit tho..

Fraze

[Useless]

he hood banged ya bitch out, there was no resistin hardly
I saw so many niggas twisted in her sheets, the shit looked like a fuckin toga party
Tryna explain ya weak raps, n we're all like damn dude
U used a Greece line so corny, I thought John Travolta would of come n danced through
his dude is a straight clown, but no worries cuz this tech'll let go
I'll put the metal to this jokers mouth, n give em more exposure than Jared Leto
U act froggy then it's a wrap, u'll be river bound just for actin hard
The way his body'll hit the water, the crime scene'll come w/ olympic judges n scorecards

This is what I liked out of ur verse. Travolta dancing thru was lulz. Toga party was original but worded badly. Jared leto was barely. And hit the water is barely too. With better wording tho leto n Olympic would've been nice. I liked the concept.

lost but i got cred last week. sometimes my ‘lines go over heads’.
if this week goes to the wire… i'm choking you after bringing it down around your neck….
im going for the throat. if you see hawks… better scamper quick…
so fast to give Odd a bull rush with Lynch that I would have won the NFL championship..
ya bars are kneelin huddled round corners on my old block.
such a crap shoot... so ill keep shooting odds with the 3-4 cause you know i keep the roll hot….
im in the field concealed, sniping bitches with aggressive means…
when i get charged up… i’m prone to ‘pick a low position’ then hit you with the special beam..

This is what I liked outta ur verse. That first line barely made it tho.

I think craze got cause his quotables were better. Both had bad misses that made zero sense, so...

V. Fraze

[murda sho]

fraze

im going for the throat. if you see hawks… better scamper quick…
so fast to give Odd a bull rush with Lynch that I would have won the NFL championship...

im in the field concealed, sniping bitches with aggressive means…
when i get charged up… i’m prone to ‘pick a low position’ then hit you with the SPECIAL beam...


Odd Ways

This dude is a straight clown, but no worries cuz this tech'll let go
I'll put the metal to this jokers mouth, n give em more exposure than Jared Leto
U act froggy then it's a wrap, u'll be river bound just for actin hard
The way his body'll hit the water, the crime scene'll come w/ olympic judges n scorecards


So this actually comes down to two quotes per piece... the bolded ones were the haymakers which I feel were both pretty good... so ima judge em by the other two bars which were also nice not as good as the bolded ones. I like OW's better because it was more up to date... and the first punch i've seen on the new joker... Frazer bar was dope but that shit old though so v/ Odd Ways

[Sharp]

6-5 odd

[Junto]

Cred flatlined u harsh, so trust I'm gonna do the same shit
I'll punch his top so hard, when paramedics lift his skull it'll sound like a rain stick
concept doesn't work that well but execution was smooth
The hood banged ya bitch out, there was no resistin hardly
I saw so many niggas twisted in her sheets, the shit looked like a fuckin toga party
pretty nice
Tryna explain ya weak raps, n we're all like damn dude
U used a Greece line so corny, I thought John Travolta would of come n danced through
haha cool
We know he's a hater, the hood says he ain't gettin no paper
Fact: the closest he'll get to a trap King, is catchin dinner every 22 acres
I get the concept... not great though
This dude is a straight clown, but no worries cuz this tech'll let go
I'll put the metal to this jokers mouth, n give em more exposure than Jared Leto
okay
U act froggy then it's a wrap, u'll be river bound just for actin hard
The way his body'll hit the water, the crime scene'll come w/ olympic judges n scorecards
creative idea, + for that... doesn't actually hit that hard for me though

vs.

lost but i got cred last week. sometimes my ‘lines go over heads’.
if this week goes to the wire… i'm choking you after bringing it down around your neck….
old school feel wit the cliche play... decent
im going for the throat. if you see hawks… better scamper quick…
so fast to give Odd a bull rush with Lynch that I would have won the NFL championship...
I like the idea, coulda been executed better but cool
fraze is hot as sin. shut the fuck up. just nod and grin.
if im at odds with a bitch… ill bust bananas inna face…. now that’s a sloppy cap.a.chin...
ehhh nah
ya bars are kneelin huddled round corners on my old block.
such a crap shoot... so ill keep shooting odds with the 3-4 cause you know i keep the roll hot….
I fuck wit this one
im in the field concealed, sniping bitches with aggressive means…
when i get charged up… i’m prone to ‘pick a low position’ then hit you with the special beam...
solid here
fraze or Bust huh?..... easy win’s what you thought, but *syke*
you’ve been robbed... now you can go Destroyer on the boards like him titty fucking his wife...
wasn't feelin that

This was close as fuck.
Hard to pick a winner to be honest... both had some nice ones
Odd had toga party which was good, greece and olympic judges were solid
Craps was heat from Fraze. Audible rush, special beam, & wire were all creative & decent.
Well..... this one won't help for gettin the battle closed but I gotta go wit Fraze on consistency
By a REAL small margin tho... this was a good one. Wouldn't usually vote on one this close

V/ Fraze

[Ace]

rain stick ehhh.. toga was niiice.. Grease is old as fuck and horrible.. trap king is weird, totally random.. leto was too simple.. closer was corny
wire is old.. lynch was too simple.. bananas was ehh.. 34 was ok.. beam was coo.. closer sucked

odds had lotb with the toga shit.. fraze had one more line i liked, barely.. this was close as fuck

v- frazd