Lotto Smirk vs Ctrl Alt Elite {Ctrl Alt Elite wins}

[Orc]

NBL
Netcees Text Battle League

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Friday,
  May 17th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
• Voting ends Tuesday 11:59 PM PST.
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@Lotto Smirk
@Ctrl Alt Elite

[Undead.]

10?

[Lotto Smirk]

sounds good

[Undead.]

Originally Posted by vinny

@Ctrl Alt Elite (2-0) Vs @Knucklehead (2-1)

-----50/50 They decide who will be the next contender battle so i feel this will be dope. Will Ctrl take Control or will Knuck use the Knucks?

/\
I x-men w/ 1-2's, been a beast since my first match.
Ur just another Wolverine. Who'll never be scene in the First Class.
If he wins he must've had dick riders 'Orbit'. I'll Waste this Perp
& With that Basic verse. It won't take much to wipe this smirk, off the face of the earth.
I'm a messenger of biblical proportions, so stop kid.
Cuz Lotto's a game; that Only Gives & never gets to see the prophet.
U ain't Saiyan much, When u Piccolo ranker to Grab & Brawl.
So if L's up there w/ a flame spitter. He's dangling from a pair of Dragon Balls.
Don't need to be Sharp, to see Ur a Parody Take.
& For clarity's Sake. Even a Knucklehead, Can see that lotto's NBL's Charity Case.

see quote below...lol @sympathy encouragement.

Lotto Smirk vs. CTRL Alt Elite
Sharp Nine: Lotto isn’t the most consistent lately, and CTRL’s a more experienced head. Based off what I’ve seen from both I see CTRL taking this one pretty easily. Lotto might pull off something, but it would take his best verse yet to win.
CTRL: 80/20
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KNuckle Head: Lotto isn't bad, he is really trying to improve. He isn't quite there, but it's just a matter of time, and could be this week that he shows his best. CTRL no showed already, so I hope he doesn't again. He was pretty slick on RB, and has quality experience. But he has to show, and not have rust.
Ctrl: 70/30[/CENTER]

[Lotto Smirk]

Gna need the ext

[Undead.]

LOL @ ext cuz u seen ur demise

[Lotto Smirk]

Peeped you in the 1-2, man your such a disgrace
thought you was flying to the champ match but clearly struggled making it into aero-space
your a lowlife & have no friends, i aint fucking with you dude
cuz u proved you a social outkast in ya last battle when even a knucklehead didn't have time for you
ya gf's a site whore, were you love watching nik n bags demolishing defcon 5
ironically as you was watching the battle she was letting her pink slip open for the rest of the guys
The logic behind how ya picked ya name, is strange I guess ya dad was wild
named himself ctrl, hoping he would gain some & not have flashbacks about how he was abused as a child
Know what makes me laugh more, how that kids think he spits raw
So if read another verse im pressing on alt ......... & then repeatedly bashing f4

[Boredom]

If he wins he must've had dick riders 'Orbit'. I'll Waste this Perp
& With that Basic verse. It won't take much to wipe this smirk, off the face of the earth.
U ain't Saiyan much, When u Piccolo ranker to Grab & Brawl.
So if L's up there w/ a flame spitter. He's dangling from a pair of Dragon Balls.

vs

nothing

lotto was to long winded, poor wording and drawn out punches made for very little impact.

[Maximus]

Ctrl took this match with ease i must say, he had some solid jabs in his verse that were enuff to make him pull the win, smirk had some decent lines but they were too stretched, long winded and had no impact whatsoever, work on ur wording and try to be more creative with ur concepts cos most were basic at best...
V/ctrl

[Sharp]

Crtl had an okay verse, no real misses with nothing huge

Lottos best line was pink slip but that's pretty played and wasn't worded well

Ctrl got it w/ better verse in general

V/ ctrl

[Flow]

Originally Posted by Ctrl Alt Elite

/\
I x-men w/ 1-2's, been a beast since my first match.
Ur just another Wolverine. Who'll never be scene in the First Class.
ok-ish
If he wins he must've had dick riders 'Orbit'. I'll Waste this Perp
& With that Basic verse. It won't take much to wipe this smirk, off the face of the earth.
alright - not a good concept but the in ya face bit and wording made it work
I'm a messenger of biblical proportions, so stop kid.
Cuz Lotto's a game; that Only Gives & never gets to see the prophet.
meh no
U ain't Saiyan much, When u Piccolo ranker to Grab & Brawl.
So if L's up there w/ a flame spitter. He's dangling from a pair of Dragon Balls.
meh ok
Don't need to be Sharp, to see Ur a Parody Take.
& For clarity's Sake. Even a Knucklehead, Can see that lotto's NBL's Charity Case. def your best line

I have been a lot more generous then usual in this battle - this was an ok verse though as I don't think ive peeped you before

see quote below...lol @sympathy encouragement.

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

Peeped you in the 1-2, man your such a disgrace
thought you was flying to the champ match but clearly struggled making it into aero-space
see what you doing, kinda worked I suppose
your a lowlife & have no friends, i aint fucking with you dude
cuz u proved you a social outkast in ya last battle when even a knucklehead didn't have time for you
meh ok
ya gf's a site whore, were you love watching nik n bags demolishing defcon 5
ironically as you was watching the battle she was letting her pink slip open for the rest of the guys
seen this loads recently - suppose your at least looking at what people like, so ill give you an ok-ish
The logic behind how ya picked ya name, is strange I guess ya dad was wild
named himself ctrl, hoping he would gain some & not have flashbacks about how he was abused as a child
lol this is pretty weak but it made me chuckle
Know what makes me laugh more, how that kids think he spits raw
So if read another verse im pressing on alt ......... & then repeatedly bashing f4
I liked the concept to this but you should of done this a lot better... pressing on alt sounds like your a fag, you could of worded this here and given it some more thought and had a really nice close

To some degrees I can see lotto is putting in some effort to get better, first time I peeped ctrl, funny name that, anyways I got cntrl an are overall better verse. to be fair this was a so so battle, there was nothing worth quoting imo but there was some potential for some nice lines...keep going guys

Vote Ctrl Alt [/B]

[Strikta]

Ctrl Alt Elite:

I x-men w/ 1-2's, been a beast since my first match.
Ur just another Wolverine. Who'll never be scene in the First Class.
...Ok
If he wins he must've had dick riders 'Orbit'. I'll Waste this Perp
& With that Basic verse. It won't take much to wipe this smirk, off the face of the earth.
...Cool, coulda done better w/ it tho
I'm a messenger of biblical proportions, so stop kid.
Cuz Lotto's a game; that Only Gives & never gets to see the prophet.
...This was ok
U ain't Saiyan much, When u Piccolo ranker to Grab & Brawl.
So if L's up there w/ a flame spitter. He's dangling from a pair of Dragon Balls.
...Not working for me
Don't need to be Sharp, to see Ur a Parody Take.
& For clarity's Sake. Even a Knucklehead, Can see that lotto's NBL's Charity Case.
...Nice wordplay, decent finish

Vs.

Lotto Smirk:

Peeped you in the 1-2, man your such a disgrace
thought you was flying to the champ match but clearly struggled making it into aero-space
...Nah
your a lowlife & have no friends, i aint fucking with you dude
cuz u proved you a social outkast in ya last battle when even a knucklehead didn't have time for you
...Didn't hit
ya gf's a site whore, were you love watching nik n bags demolishing defcon 5
ironically as you was watching the battle she was letting her pink slip open for the rest of the guys
...Nah
The logic behind how ya picked ya name, is strange I guess ya dad was wild
named himself ctrl, hoping he would gain some & not have flashbacks about how he was abused as a child
...This could've been better, but not much
Know what makes me laugh more, how that kids think he spits raw
So if read another verse im pressing on alt ......... & then repeatedly bashing f4
...Nah, not good

All in all Ctrl got this easy. Lotto had alotta long lines that didn't really hit. He needs to do a better job w/ wording & come off a lil more crisp to be effective... get more creative. Yeah, all in all Ctrl wins... props.

Vote- Ctrl Alt Elite