WK 5: GUDELJ 2-0 vs. Blue Bayou 3-1 - GUDELJ WINS!

[Incredible]

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@GUDELJ @Blue Bayou

[Blue Bayou]

aka Zelph
aka For Battling



Excuse me officer...
.
.


guys a shy pre-cumming virgin that'll NEVER get to hump w/ a rocket..
soon as a bitch says Hey...Zel Nuts in his pants & he ainttt got none in his pocket
not a pro with the flames, you screwed ur partner & ya flow is to blame..
dunno why Aerated u high cuz that 1st round exit ‘Exposed the Holes’ in ur Game
^ tryna hype ya Cavs line boyyy the lines that u say are shit..
the GOAT let down by his teammate.. NOW we’re realllllly talkin J R Smith
wont quote em hes wack, drops shit this battle's over it's FACT..
i don't think this Piglatin but his wordings so bad u'd SWEAR he wrote it in that
aim the haymakers at ur dome while i beast these lines..
& while i'm bombing with Rights all your bitch ass can do is READ me mine
you're bitchmade but i'll have Shotty's loaded in the van incase..
cuz i'll admit, when it pops-off ur the first one Sprayin'….. a can of Mace
his girl dumped his broke ass many times & stays laughing at em now..
not only does she keep giving Forclosure.. the same things happened to his house
got burners in both hands aimed high & low w/ dead precision..
so when i ‘Draw the Line, there's Two-Dots’ guaranteed to give ya head Division
& you wanna be 'Flo Real' now?! i swear i'll put this herb in a hurse..
cuz i already smashed the real 1 & wont lose to an imposter whose wording is worse

[GUDELJ]

Blue a vet? Bro pls.. I got just the thing to expose this old geek
Then he’ll wanna Sudafed only because he’s been on a cold streak
U’ll get fukn wrecked. I bang chopper after chopper like triple X
Then the ratchet’ll have ur guts all over the pole like stripper sex
Pull up to ur crib w/ killaz. U claimed u were rdy but I knw u were bluffin
the whole crew rides deep blue, see? I’ll have my sharks eat u for nothin
My hoes ready to squeeze. All I gta do is relay the text
Then it’s the Nina.. going off in ur face like an angry ex!
I’ll take yo girl, she’s the target. Whips fly, iono where to park it
Street nigga w/o Abu, rdy to sweep ur princess off her feet like a magic carpet
BIG GUNS. I let it go and watch the heat soar
Unique roar.. then the machine turns into an animal like beast wars
You date the nastiest of whores, my bros run trains & lay pipe
Bro, that hoes been gettin tagged so much we started callin her Amens wife
I’m In the whip w/ my gang & we thump. U a lame w/ no game - u a punk..
Blow the brains out this chump. Elephant shooters.. they’ll let it spray frm the trunk!


F U.

[Flow]

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

aka Zelph
aka For Battling



Excuse me officer...
.
.


guys a shy pre-cumming virgin that'll NEVER get to hump w/ a rocket..
soon as a bitch says Hey...Zel Nuts in his pants & he ainttt got none in his pocket
solid
not a pro with the flames, you screwed ur partner & ya flow is to blame..
dunno why Aerated u high cuz that 1st round exit ‘Exposed the Holes’ in ur Game
cool flip. Little predictable but coo
^ tryna hype ya Cavs line boyyy the lines that u say are shit..
the GOAT let down by his teammate.. NOW we’re realllllly talkin J R Smith
had to google this but ok
wont quote em hes wack, drops shit this battle's over it's FACT..
i don't think this Piglatin but his wordings so bad u'd SWEAR he wrote it in that
lmao like this
aim the haymakers at ur dome while i beast these lines..
& while i'm bombing with Rights all your bitch ass can do is READ me mine
bit weak for me here. Maybe id give it a new guy but miss for me at your level
you're bitchmade but i'll have Shotty's loaded in the van incase..
cuz i'll admit, when it pops-off ur the first one Sprayin'….. a can of Mace
light
his girl dumped his broke ass many times & stays laughing at em now..
not only does she keep giving Forclosure.. the same things happened to his house
ok
got burners in both hands aimed high & low w/ dead precision..
so when i ‘Draw the Line, there's Two-Dots’ guaranteed to give ya head Division
ok
& you wanna be 'Flo Real' now?! i swear i'll put this herb in a hurse..
cuz i already smashed the real 1 & wont lose to an imposter whose wording is worse
yup deffo agree. Jeeez zelph what you doin. Lols but nah on realsies nice closer

Vs

Originally Posted by GUDELJ

Blue a vet? Bro pls.. I got just the thing to expose this old geek
Then he’ll wanna Sudafed only because he’s been on a cold streak
nice opener
U’ll get fukn wrecked. I bang chopper after chopper like triple X
Then the ratchet’ll have ur guts all over the pole like stripper sex
mm not sure on this ill have a think
Pull up to ur crib w/ killaz. U claimed u were rdy but I knw u were bluffin
the whole crew rides deep blue, see? I’ll have my sharks eat u for nothin
blue name flops been done to death. Pretty sure him n muff did that on purpose. However i still a light jab
My hoes ready to squeeze. All I gta do is relay the text
Then it’s the Nina.. going off in ur face like an angry ex!
right... if this was nina like sound of a police car its fresh, but delivery was meh to me, if it was nine a its a meh flip but delivery is good. But i could be missing this completely. Maybe its a phone noise from the text but then delivery is still meh. Ill havw to pass on this sorry buddy but pm me where you were going please im interested
Ima take yo girl, she’s the target. Fly whip iono where to park it
Street nigga w/o Abu, rdy to sweep ur princess off her feet like a magic carpet
not very harsh hitting. Wording was lacking
BIG GUNS. I let it go and watch the heat soar
Unique roar.. then the machine turns into an animal like beast wars
solid
You date the nastiest of whores, my bros run trains & lay pipe
Bro, that hoes been gettin tagged so much we started callin her Amens wife
lmao lotb probably or deffo your best without rereading blues
I’m In the whip w/ my gang & we thump. U a lame w/ no game - u a punk..
Blow the brains out this chump. Elephant shooters.. they’ll let it spray frm the trunk!
fire. Wording was slick. Feel its inspired by muffs bar last week even though only the trunk part references it. Yeah i dug this. Nice

F U.

Vote Blue

[bleak]

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

aka Zelph
aka For Battling



Excuse me officer...
.
.


guys a shy pre-cumming virgin that'll NEVER get to hump w/ a rocket..
soon as a bitch says Hey...Zel Nuts in his pants & he ainttt got none in his pocket
^ tryna hype ya Cavs line boyyy the lines that u say are shit..
the GOAT let down by his teammate.. NOW we’re realllllly talkin J R Smith
wont quote em hes wack, drops shit this battle's over it's FACT..
i don't think this Piglatin but his wordings so bad u'd SWEAR he wrote it in that
you're bitchmade but i'll have Shotty's loaded in the van incase..
cuz i'll admit, when it pops-off ur the first one Sprayin'….. a can of Mace
-- I like shit like this

Never saw any connection between Zelph and Jay
Foreclosure doesn't work cause no one would call him For I like this concept tho
Idk man the second half kinda fell off I found myself less invested, which never happens in your verses.

Originally Posted by GUDELJ

Blue a vet? Bro pls.. I got just the thing to expose this old geek
Then he’ll wanna Sudafed only because he’s been on a cold streak
Pull up to ur crib w/ killaz. U claimed u were rdy but I knw u were bluffin
the whole crew rides deep blue, see? I’ll have my sharks eat u for nothin
My hoes ready to squeeze. All I gta do is relay the text
Then it’s the Nina.. going off in ur face like an angry ex!
-- lol this is barely making it but it made me laugh
BIG GUNS. I let it go and watch the heat soar
Unique roar.. then the machine turns into an animal like beast wars
You date the nastiest of whores, my bros run trains & lay pipe
Bro, that hoes been gettin tagged so much we started callin her Amens wife

Sudafed LOTB this verse was solid and Zelph seems motivated. I'm always pretty liberal w/ quotes, I got Z by a good margin

[BodySnatcher]

edit vote here.

[DynamiCz]

guys a shy pre-cumming virgin that'll NEVER get to hump w/ a rocket..
soon as a bitch says Hey...Zel Nuts in his pants & he ainttt got none in his pocket

Coo opener

not a pro with the flames, you screwed ur partner & ya flow is to blame..
dunno why Aerated u high cuz that 1st round exit ‘Exposed the Holes’ in ur Game

Lol Coo here

^ tryna hype ya Cavs line boyyy the lines that u say are shit..
the GOAT let down by his teammate.. NOW we’re realllllly talkin J R Smith

Niceeee

wont quote em hes wack, drops shit this battle's over it's FACT..
i don't think this Piglatin but his wordings so bad u'd SWEAR he wrote it in that

Ok

aim the haymakers at ur dome while i beast these lines..
& while i'm bombing with Rights all your bitch ass can do is READ me mine

Decent here

you're bitchmade but i'll have Shotty's loaded in the van incase..
cuz i'll admit, when it pops-off ur the first one Sprayin'….. a can of Mace

Lol this was coo

his girl dumped his broke ass many times & stays laughing at em now..
not only does she keep giving Forclosure.. the same things happened to his house

Good one here

got burners in both hands aimed high & low w/ dead precision..
so when i ‘Draw the Line, there's Two-Dots’ guaranteed to give ya head Division

Nice

& you wanna be 'Flo Real' now?! i swear i'll put this herb in a hurse..
cuz i already smashed the real 1 & wont lose to an imposter whose wording is worse

Lol nice close out

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Blue a vet? Bro pls.. I got just the thing to expose this old geek
Then he’ll wanna Sudafed only because he’s been on a cold streak

Coo opener here

U’ll get fukn wrecked. I bang chopper after chopper like triple X
Then the ratchet’ll have ur guts all over the pole like stripper sex

Ehh, this was ok

Pull up to ur crib w/ killaz. U claimed u were rdy but I knw u were bluffin
the whole crew rides deep blue, see? I’ll have my sharks eat u for nothin

Might be played, the wording was nice here!

My hoes ready to squeeze. All I gta do is relay the text
Then it’s the Nina.. going off in ur face like an angry ex!

This was decent

I’ll take yo girl, she’s the target. Whips fly, iono where to park it
Street nigga w/o Abu, rdy to sweep ur princess off her feet like a magic carpet

Nice

BIG GUNS. I let it go and watch the heat soar
Unique roar.. then the machine turns into an animal like beast wars

Nastyyyyyy

You date the nastiest of whores, my bros run trains & lay pipe
Bro, that hoes been gettin tagged so much we started callin her Amens wife

Lol Nice here

I’m In the whip w/ my gang & we thump. U a lame w/ no game - u a punk..
Blow the brains out this chump. Elephant shooters.. they’ll let it spray frm the trunk!

This was actually fire!







This was a dope battle here! Both didn't have bad lines at all, just all come down to the stings in my case!

Blue

^ tryna hype ya Cavs line boyyy the lines that u say are shit..
the GOAT let down by his teammate.. NOW we’re realllllly talkin J R Smith

his girl dumped his broke ass many times & stays laughing at em now..
not only does she keep giving Forclosure.. the same things happened to his house
got burners in both hands aimed high & low w/ dead precision..
so when i ‘Draw the Line, there's Two-Dots’ guaranteed to give ya head Division

vs

GJ

Pull up to ur crib w/ killaz. U claimed u were rdy but I knw u were bluffin
the whole crew rides deep blue, see? I’ll have my sharks eat u for nothin

BIG GUNS. I let it go and watch the heat soar
Unique roar.. then the machine turns into an animal like beast wars
You date the nastiest of whores, my bros run trains & lay pipe
Bro, that hoes been gettin tagged so much we started callin her Amens wife
I’m In the whip w/ my gang & we thump. U a lame w/ no game - u a punk..
Blow the brains out this chump. Elephant shooters.. they’ll let it spray frm the trunk!


I got zelph by a bar, after his beast wars bar his verse went up a notch on consistency of back to back jabs. Good shit to both tho!

V-GJ

[Jabari Black]

guys a shy pre-cumming virgin that'll NEVER get to hump w/ a rocket..
soon as a bitch says Hey...Zel Nuts in his pants & he ainttt got none in his pocket

(Didn’t care for this one. Wp wasn’t extremely smooth but it still worked - there just wasn’t enough to tie back into the hazel nuts wp.)

not a pro with the flames, you screwed ur partner & ya flow is to blame..
dunno why Aerated u high cuz that 1st round exit ‘Exposed the Holes’ in ur Game

(Good line. Good wp and that’s a solids personal)

^ tryna hype ya Cavs line boyyy the lines that u say are shit..
the GOAT let down by his teammate.. NOW we’re realllllly talkin J R Smith

(I like the angle but the punch wasn’t there. Think that was too basic of a JR game 1 flip. Okay)

wont quote em hes wack, drops shit this battle's over it's FACT..
i don't think this Piglatin but his wordings so bad u'd SWEAR he wrote it in that

(Decent. Wp itself was smooth. At first I didn’t like this because I didn’t think the phrase ‘I don’t think this pig latin’ had any tie in. Thought you was just randomly saying he wasn’t Latin American which would have made the wp come off as forced. But now I’m guessing Zelph is Latin American so the wp checks out now.)

aim the haymakers at ur dome while i beast these lines..
& while i'm bombing with Rights all your bitch ass can do is READ me mine

(Funny. Decent)

you're bitchmade but i'll have Shotty's loaded in the van incase..
cuz i'll admit, when it pops-off ur the first one Sprayin'….. a can of Mace

(Funny again)

his girl dumped his broke ass many times & stays laughing at em now..
not only does she keep giving Forclosure.. the same things happened to his house

(Pretty good. ‘For’ is really easy to flip but you executed it well with tie ins to both him being dumped and him being broke before you got to the wp. Good writing)

got burners in both hands aimed high & low w/ dead precision..
so when i ‘Draw the Line, there's Two-Dots’ guaranteed to give ya head Division

(I like it. This was pretty creative)

& you wanna be 'Flo Real' now?! i swear i'll put this herb in a hurse..
cuz i already smashed the real 1 & wont lose to an imposter whose wording is worse

(Good personal. Good closer)




Blue a vet? Bro pls.. I got just the thing to expose this old geek
Then he’ll wanna Sudafed only because he’s been on a cold streak

(This is okay. Needed something else to tie in to cus as is ‘sue the fed’ seems a bit forced to make the wp hit)

U’ll get fukn wrecked. I bang chopper after chopper like triple X
Then the ratchet’ll have ur guts all over the pole like stripper sex

(Okay. Props for punching in the in the set up. Ratchet is used a lot so gotta do something outside the box for it to really hit)

Pull up to ur crib w/ killaz. U claimed u were rdy but I knw u were bluffin
the whole crew rides deep blue, see? I’ll have my sharks eat u for nothin

(I like this one! Nice!)

My hoes ready to squeeze. All I gta do is relay the text
Then it’s the Nina.. going off in ur face like an angry ex!

(Lol this was cool. I’ve heard similar lines just using ratchet instead of Nina, and that takes away from this one a bit. Overall simple but effective)

I’ll take yo girl, she’s the target. Whips fly, iono where to park it
Street nigga w/o Abu, rdy to sweep ur princess off her feet like a magic carpet

(The abu/a boo flip has been done before. Sweep off feet was okay. Overall just okay)

BIG GUNS. I let it go and watch the heat soar
Unique roar.. then the machine turns into an animal like beast wars

(This is pretty clever. I liked it)

You date the nastiest of whores, my bros run trains & lay pipe
Bro, that hoes been gettin tagged so much we started callin her Amens wife

(LOL! This is funny! I like it)

I’m In the whip w/ my gang & we thump. U a lame w/ no game - u a punk..
Blow the brains out this chump. Elephant shooters.. they’ll let it spray frm the trunk

(Flowed really well. Good closer. I’ve never heard the phrase used ‘from the trunk’ - I’ve only heard the phrase ‘from out the trunk’ so when I first read this I visualized niggas literally in the trunk doing a drive by lmao. So slight wording issue imo but I liked it)


Really dope battle.

Blues wordplay was on point as always and zelph was able to land some heavy punches. Both had consistent verses - no bad misses from either. The deciding factor imo was Zelph was able to land the heavier punches out of the two. Blue has the better pen out of the two but wasn’t able to land more haymakers than zelph. Zelph also had lotb imo.

Very close but I edge it to zelph.

Mvgt: Zelph

[Lenox]

Blue: opener was good lol, Holes in game. Piglatin. Rest I wasn’t feeling

Vs

Zelph: Sudafed was harddd. Stripper sex. Deep blue sea. Magic carpet. Amens wife lol LOTW.

Overall: really dope battle. Zelph got this tho

[BodySnatcher]

Crunched on time, so this will be quick. Blue's verse was good but not the fire he normally drops. Hazelnut was funny but the verse started to decline after that. Gud come consistant. That sudafed was dope, beast wars and AMen wife were highlights.

v/gud

[Twodrop]

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

guys a shy pre-cumming virgin that'll NEVER get to hump w/ a rocket..
soon as a bitch says Hey...Zel Nuts in his pants & he ainttt got none in his pocket
lol, coo wp dope opener
not a pro with the flames, you screwed ur partner & ya flow is to blame..
dunno why Aerated u high cuz that 1st round exit ‘Exposed the Holes’ in ur Game
coo
^ tryna hype ya Cavs line boyyy the lines that u say are shit..
the GOAT let down by his teammate.. NOW we’re realllllly talkin J R Smith
ok
wont quote em hes wack, drops shit this battle's over it's FACT..
i don't think this Piglatin but his wordings so bad u'd SWEAR he wrote it in that
Yea, this was nice
aim the haymakers at ur dome while i beast these lines..
& while i'm bombing with Rights all your bitch ass can do is READ me mine
decent
you're bitchmade but i'll have Shotty's loaded in the van incase..
cuz i'll admit, when it pops-off ur the first one Sprayin'….. a can of Mace
lol, ok
his girl dumped his broke ass many times & stays laughing at em now..
not only does she keep giving Forclosure.. the same things happened to his house
wasn't feeling this
got burners in both hands aimed high & low w/ dead precision..
so when i ‘Draw the Line, there's Two-Dots’ guaranteed to give ya head Division
coo
& you wanna be 'Flo Real' now?! i swear i'll put this herb in a hurse..
cuz i already smashed the real 1 & wont lose to an imposter whose wording is worse
eh closer to me

Originally Posted by GUDELJ

Blue a vet? Bro pls.. I got just the thing to expose this old geek
Then he’ll wanna Sudafed only because he’s been on a cold streak
ok
U’ll get fukn wrecked. I bang chopper after chopper like triple X
Then the ratchet’ll have ur guts all over the pole like stripper sex
coo
Pull up to ur crib w/ killaz. U claimed u were rdy but I knw u were bluffin
the whole crew rides deep blue, see? I’ll have my sharks eat u for nothin
eh
My hoes ready to squeeze. All I gta do is relay the text
Then it’s the Nina.. going off in ur face like an angry ex!
simple,effective
I’ll take yo girl, she’s the target. Whips fly, iono where to park it
Street nigga w/o Abu, rdy to sweep ur princess off her feet like a magic carpet
this was slick
BIG GUNS. I let it go and watch the heat soar
Unique roar.. then the machine turns into an animal like beast wars
again
You date the nastiest of whores, my bros run trains & lay pipe
Bro, that hoes been gettin tagged so much we started callin her Amens wife
Ha, clownin
I’m In the whip w/ my gang & we thump. U a lame w/ no game - u a punk..
Blow the brains out this chump. Elephant shooters.. they’ll let it spray frm the trunk!
thought this was lotb

Dope battle, both showed up for sure. Wasn’t any clear misses imo but I have zelph w/ the edge here. Thought he was gaining a lot of momentum in the second half of his verse and then had that niiiice closer.

Great showing fellas, props.
v/GUDELJ