Does This Verse Make Sense?

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by God Of War

a punchline is technically a line that hits, the punchline of a joke is the part that hits that causes people to laugh

punchlines were fucking derived from battling way back in the 80's which they got through comedy and jokes cuz battles was all jokes like yo momma disses

THAT IS A PUNCHLINE

battling came from fucking two people standing there dissing each other back and forth, the punch line was the humorous part that hit of the joke/diss

QFE

[Brian Bryan]

Originally Posted by God Of War

u had hardly any punches in your verse at all

LOL this is so wrong, it's actually funny

if the admin here can't even understand a punchline, what chance does the board have, really?

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by Brian Bryan

LOL this is so wrong, it's actually funny

if the admin here can't even understand a punchline, what chance does the board have, really?

try to turn it into a troll but the fact you dont know your history or what a fucking punchline is is sad as shit

guarantee your first album was eminem

[Just C]

Originally Posted by God Of War

a punchline is technically a line that hits, the punchline of a joke is the part that hits that causes people to laugh

punchlines were fucking derived from battling way back in the 80's which they got through comedy and jokes cuz battles was all jokes like yo momma disses

THAT IS A PUNCHLINE

battling came from fucking two people standing there dissing each other back and forth, the punch line was the humorous part that hit of the joke/diss

Whether a punch hit's or not is subjective. everyone is different. You can't make a definition for the end result. it's the intent structure and purpose which define what a punchline is. a universal guideline that no 1 can debate, not a personal preference.

[Brian Bryan]

lmao i'm seriously not even trolling

i love this forum

i just find it funny how out of touch with the real world some of you guys are

of course they're punchlines

life isn't one giant text battle you know

[veritas]

life is one giant text battle for me Baron, so GOW's words hurt me.

[veritas]

Let me show you a glimpse into the Mind Assassin's art:



Bitch get your weight up, I rape your soul until it’s broken so:
bet this nine will fuck your face up and nigga no-Tonio.

first of all we have an internal rhyme and the end rhyme and it flows smooth. second Rape and tonio, third the nine will fuck your face up and tonio presents a hefty entendre.


You’re no threat cuz your bars empty; it’s always sunny in Philadelphia.
My blade crosses your face twice, that’s quality, motherfucking X-celsior

That "set up" line is fucking dope and I know alot of cats are like why didnt i think of that. this is imagery. imagine me slicing an X onto your face, that is quality...excelsior means quality....X-celcsior..easy.


Professor X swag, I can violate your mind without even having to stand up,
My sword sticks him up, cuz when I stab him, he SHRIVELS as he’s RAISIN his hands up

There is the X again just linking the concept in a third way which is xxx which is me fucking this dude up. this is the bar people have a prob with...but sticks him up has a double meaning also....sticks him like stab him and he shrivels like a raisin. Sticks him up like robs him (of his life and a win) so he shrivels (cowers) like a raisin...you know when you sit in a bathtub for too long? as he throws his hands up in defeat.

Peks aint ill with words or a legend, trust that I see through a bitch like a sonogram,
V a Professional assassin, SO u won’t see murder like Master P’s brother was hollow man

I see through a bitch like a sonogram is fucking awesome and ether. you are lying if you say otherwise. I am a pro assassin. Assassins are unseen. here is the word play: C-murder is master P's brother...that has been done. But I said SEE murder (remember you won't see me) like Master P's brother was Hollow man. This means at least three seperate things. Cmon man.

Lui-He-Ba-Fa liquid fists pummel your chest, call me IP man, I collapse this B’s lungs
Pecs lost, Cuz Everyone knows that dope gets flushed whenever the heat comes

Google liquid fists....you ever see IP Man? the way he justs beats dudes with his fists? (no tonio). so me pummeling the chest collapses his lungs....so Pecs (chest) lost. GET IT YOU IDIOT!? then the cu de grax: his avy is dope...and the dope always gets flushed (lost) when the heat (cops, my verse) comes.


all in all....show me another Writer who can be this complex and yet so smooth in their battles. I am the most well rounded ahead of my time persona here. Everyone knows it and treats me as such. GOW you are just arguing to be different. I think also you are mad at me, because I exposed to you how you have been failing lately. Trust that I did that out of love though, and not hate. I just want to see that you become a better person and more like me.

[trap.]

Originally Posted by God Of War

actually you cats dont know your history what so ever, which is fucking sad and you should be ashamed to call yourself a member of this genre and not know where what your doing came from or what

Okay now you're just going crazy.

[Albert Rhymestein]

lmao this guy^
EDIT:that was meant for the guy ontop of trap. b

[Brian Bryan]

Originally Posted by God Of War

actually you cats dont know your history what so ever, which is fucking sad and you should be ashamed to call yourself a member of this genre and not know where what your doing came from or what

lmao plz tell me you're lacing up those trollerskates right now?

me, @trap and @ill nik-A some of the longest serving dudes on this board

been at it like a decade and a half or longer

c'mon son, just admit you were wrong already

can't everybody be wrong except you haha!

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by Brian Bryan

lmao plz tell me you're lacing up those trollerskates right now?

me, @trap and @ill nik-A some of the longest serving dudes on this board

been at it like a decade and a half or longer

c'mon son, just admit you were wrong already

can't everybody be wrong except you haha!

nope i been watching rap since ll cool j battled in the late eighties kiddo, i know where battling originated from i know how it originated i know punchlines are derived from jokes when two people use to sit there n diss each other when it didnt even rhyme, that turned into battling when it evolved

know yur history just cuz a couple of u dudes who been on a forum for 20 years even tho shit hasnt been around that long claim something doesnt mean its true


a statement is not a punch , by your standard and meaning a set up can be considered a punch if its the second bar which is fucking illiterate as shit

you and trap have no idea what you are talking about

[Just C]

Lol

[God Of War]

been up almost 58 hours working on my game

smoking weed and cigs WHOOO this is fun

lets argue bout other shit now

[Brian Bryan]

PLZ DONT BRING THAT SHIT UP ABOUT THE DOZENS OR MOHAMMED ALI OR SCOTLAND FLIGHTING AROUND ME SON

YOU LEARNED WHAT YOU KNOW ABOUT BATTLING FROM A RICHARD COREY ARTICLE

ROFLZZZ

MISS ME WITH THAT SHIZZ PLZ

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by Brian Bryan

PLZ DONT BRING THAT SHIT UP ABOUT THE DOZENS OR MOHAMMED ALI OR SCOTLAND FLIGHTING AROUND ME SON

YOU LEARNED WHAT YOU KNOW ABOUT BATTLING FROM A RICHARD COREY ARTICLE

ROFLZZZ

MISS ME WITH THAT SHIZZ PLZ

lmao i actually never seen richard corey even battle i tried to look up some of his shit cuz i know he is supposed ot be like top ten of all time and i never found nothing

[trap.]

This text shit has been around since 95. I started in, from what the historian says in late 96. I use 97. Either way, I stopped in 03 when real life shit happened, my son, etc. I might not write punchlines according to the netcee standard, but I know one when I see it. If we are basing it off of your hiphop knowledge and listening to LL battle in the 80's, have you even heard him vs Kool Moe Dee? Battle rap was so basic back then. Punchlines were basic. They almost looked / sounded like this "I'll stab you" shit you are negating to recognize. Now it's evolved. Still, the basics are there in almost any battle verse nowadays. I'll stop here.

[Flow]

Originally Posted by trap

Battle rap was so basic back then. Punchlines were basic. They almost looked / sounded like this "I'll stab you" shit you are negating to recognize. Now it's evolved. Still, the basics are there in almost any battle verse nowadays. I'll stop here.

This

[h.t]

sorry but im not gonna break my neck to read a verse...

fuck kinda font was that? lol

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by trap

This text shit has been around since 95. I started in, from what the historian says in late 96. I use 97. Either way, I stopped in 03 when real life shit happened, my son, etc. I might not write punchlines according to the netcee standard, but I know one when I see it. If we are basing it off of your hiphop knowledge and listening to LL battle in the 80's, have you even heard him vs Kool Moe Dee? Battle rap was so basic back then. Punchlines were basic. They almost looked / sounded like this "I'll stab you" shit you are negating to recognize. Now it's evolved. Still, the basics are there in almost any battle verse nowadays. I'll stop here.

Yeahof course I heard it, but it still derives from emcees standing there dissing each other without it even rhyming, corner battling where they just dissed each other and who ever had the best insult won....that shit was like snapping then it formed into rhyme battling and etc but it still derived from that nd ll cool j n moe dee had legit punches in it ie

You can't win, I don't bend, Look what you got yourself in,
just using your name I took those L’s,
hung ‘em on your head and rocked your bells


also


Battlin's for real men, and I doubt if
You can even hang or give a run for the money
You're just a sucker, and it's funny


this


You ain't got a chance in the world
Your records were smokin', but you sound like a girl




as i said know where the shit came from and what created it, from back in the begining the ll-cool-j battle as an example shows u

[God Of War]

another one


finally figured it out/Magic's mouth is used for suckin'/Roxanne Shante is only good for steady fuckin'/MC Shan and Marley Marl is really only bluffin'/Like Doug E. Fresh said, 'I tell you now, you ain't nothing.


thats fromt he fucking history books man and thats boogie down productions in case you didnt know