Does This Verse Make Sense?

[veritas]

Dude gow....peks avy said "dope" so he got flushed when the heat came.....

How you aint see that?

I used a statement then made a punch out of it...showing clever wit and quality...aka excelcsior.....or X celcisor....because I cut a x thru his face.


Cmon man

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by VERITAS

Dude gow....peks avy said "dope" so he got flushed when the heat came.....

How you aint see that?

I used a statement then made a punch out of it...showing clever wit and quality...aka excelcsior.....or X celcisor....because I cut a x thru his face.


Cmon man

but i dont care what baron says like me saying im going ot cut ur face isnt a punchline

[veritas]

But criss crossing your face and that is quality....X-celscior is....excelsior means quality.

And plus I am known for my sword.....I would literally do that do him in real life.

This shit is real life.

[Brian Bryan]

LOL GoW you're so caught up in your little text bubble terminology you'll never understand

poor little boy

you're the type to never just enjoy hiphop music without thinking "he could have easily made that line into a multi syllable by using _______ there instead of what he did" and other textcee terminology noone outside of this forum cares about

pathetic

[veritas]

And evem if that is a statement....the resr of the verse is fulla punches.

It is smart. Witty. Simply complicated and sexy.

[Brian Bryan]

i know i'm right

you'll never tell me any different

been doing this as long if not longer than you

i was at rapboard with you LOL

[veritas]

I been in the game for 14 years my self....dude coming at me like i am a noob....gtf.

[SpookyDeep]

Shut the fuck up, lil nigga

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by Brian Bryan

i know i'm right

you'll never tell me any different

been doing this as long if not longer than you

i was at rapboard with you LOL

you're wrong, a punchline and meta4 is different

a unchline is something that hits, famous rappers even said this

anything you look up on punchlines say this


stop trying with the text disses, i know just as many battlers,rappers, etc as u prolly been to as many concerts etc as you


ur not superior bro in the least

[trap.]

V just uses a multi punch style in his lines. Looks like he doubles up, one at the end of the first and one at the end of the second. Sometimes he even triples up. It's not a style a lot of people use and as you can tell he's still trying to master it but this is mostly punchline material. Good stuff, but that raisin line was cringe-worthy.

[SpookyDeep]

"My blade crosses your face twice, that’s quality, motherfucking X-celsior"
-VERITAS

You unoriginal ass motherfucka ...

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by VERITAS

I been in the game for 14 years my self....dude coming at me like i am a noob....gtf.

u had hardly any punches in your verse at all

let brian gas you up and claim u do all u want but u dont



what you had was poor wording,and sloppy statements

with a punch in there

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by trap

V just uses a multi punch style in his lines. Looks like he doubles up, one at the end of the first and one at the end of the second. Sometimes he even triples up. It's not a style a lot of people use and as you can tell he's still trying to master it but this is mostly punchline material. Good stuff, but that raisin line was cringe-worthy.

show me any where in the world saying im going to stab u or cut u is a punchline, or anyother rapper saying it for that matter and claiming it is a punchline

it is not

a statement is not a punchline

u cats need to know wtf a word means obviously

[veritas]

Gow....you have had a hard month.....put the keys down amd take a vaca....

Or go to a debate school.

You a hater cuz. And you are slandering my good name.


My verse had at least 4 punches...at least by your subjectice standards.

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by VERITAS

Gow....you have had a hard month.....put the keys down amd take a vaca....

Or go to a debate school.

You a hater cuz. And you are slandering my good name.


My verse had at least 4 punches...at least by your subjectice standards.

your verse had no punches cept maybe one

a punchline is the hit the impact of it , the shit stems from dissing/comedy

[trap.]

You're quoting one line as an end-all to an entire verse. No-one said this entire verse, every phrase and statement was a punchline. There's more than half of them in here though, not one line like you're stating.

[veritas]

And btw...all this thread is gonna do is help me and hurt you in the long run...so thanks.

[God Of War]

just like all you cats claimed a fucking swag and flow battle was still supposed to diss ur opponent

[veritas]

Thank you trap for having am open mind.

Sheesh

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by trap

You're quoting one line as an end-all to an entire verse. No-one said this entire verse, every phrase and statement was a punchline. There's more than half of them in here though, not one line like you're stating.

the first three bars, the second line of each bar is a statement, it is not a punch at all its a definate statement man

if i said

ima cut your face up with a knife

that shit isnt a punch and if it was ment to be its reallllyyyyy bad wording