my track is posted and i feel awful

[Bodey]

Originally Posted by Aero the Apex

Lmao she's a woman. She believes in second chances.

Badi, you're dismissed. Let the men do what you don't do best.

I bet my pen game is better than yours. I don't see you rappin or postin shit so why are you tryna cut me down?

[StarFaggot]

Originally Posted by Badi Alii

I bet my pen game is better than yours. I don't see you rappin or postin shit so why are you tryna cut me down?

I do text battles.

I'm not trying to cut you down I just don't understand why you're rapping when you could be in a kitchen posting pics for us to see the meals. Diode does it and so does Nika.

[big baby]

Originally Posted by Badi Alii

I bet my pen game is better than yours. I don't see you rappin or postin shit so why are you tryna cut me down?

lmao bodi bout to war machine my girl aero mack

[StarFaggot]

Badi Alli I'm only joking with you. Your verse wasn't bad it's just the whole production and delivery felt rushed. You have a unique voice.

[Diode]

Originally Posted by big baby

lmao bodi bout to war machine my girl aero mack

kinda leaned at the image of that tbh

[uh-oh]

buy a mic.

get a 100 dollar condensor or whatever (not dynamic) microphone, its all you need.

you can get any recording program free.

whether you are serious, or rapping is just a hobby, you should still have some type of home setup.

the more you record the better you will get. your not gonna make any significant strides if your just rapping into your phone with a beat playing in the background

humans have brains that learn things. thats why i hate text so much. you are conditioning your brain to write text raps. not real raps. not you bodey, you are conditioning your brain to one take verses, which is fine, but you havent conditioned it in the area of writing a real solid verse

without even listening to the track you mention, i guarantee there are lines that are too long where you gotta pick up the speed to fit it, or shit where you slow down, instead of having consistent flow

if you could record for real when you keep tripping over a line you could tweak it from the get go, instead of just fixing your delivery to put the line in

the key to real rap is dont force it.

99 percent of amateur rappers try and get too deep. oh i can't cut this line its DOPE. no its not. its fucking trash. i dont care if you figure out the cure for cancer in a bar, if it dont sound natural when you spit it, cut that shit. it ruined any sense of dopeness. your better off having a wack line that flows, then a dope line that doesnt.

quit conditioning and repeating things the wrong way. the more you do something the wrong way the harder it is to do it the right way.

[big baby]

Originally Posted by uh-oh

oh i can't cut this line its DOPE. no its not. its fucking trash. i dont care if you figure out the cure for cancer in a bar, if it dont sound natural when you spit it, cut that shit. it ruined any sense of dopeness. your better off having a wack line that flows, then a dope line that doesnt.

quit conditioning and repeating things the wrong way. the more you do something the wrong way the harder it is to do it the right way.

repped

[Bodey]

Originally Posted by Aero the Apex

I do text battles.

I'm not trying to cut you down I just don't understand why you're rapping when you could be in a kitchen posting pics for us to see the meals. Diode does it and so does Nika.

Lol ill use this as motivation to do better. And I know you're jokin around, I've just seriously never rapped anything so horrible as far as delivery.

And @uh-oh, good looks thank you. Appreciated that.

[big baby]

bod will u mry bb da bb