Stepping Outside of Yourself: Does it require cloning? - Page 2

PancakeBrah · 12-24-2013, 12:55 AM

Is this verse a Key & Peele skit?

I had a whole breakdown written up but I'm drunk so I deleted it. I'll do a sober one tomorrow. What are you talking about?

Vulgar · 12-24-2013, 12:59 AM

Life, as I see it.

big baby · 12-24-2013, 01:07 AM

Funny. I said entombed twice today, and almost wrote it in something I was writing. I usually pass of a satirical comment that you may or may not notice. Though, you probably do.

You are one of the few that typically writes a longer verse and longer lines. Which is exceptional as well. The third 'paragraph' was my favorite. Such simple imagery, but you spoke through metaphors and unrefined thought. aware/guard duty was such a off kilter thing, that it actually helped the simplicity of the imagery and amplified other areas, such as the realization of the readers possible thought in the identifying following lines. No problem with rhyming indeed. I kinda wish you had a generalized quotable set of artillery. You'd just be too good, then.

12-24-2013, 12:55 AM	#21
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	Is this verse a Key & Peele skit? I had a whole breakdown written up but I'm drunk so I deleted it. I'll do a sober one tomorrow. What are you talking about? __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

12-24-2013, 12:59 AM	#22
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	Life, as I see it.

12-24-2013, 01:07 AM	#23
big baby obsessed Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: fucka idiyote Posts: 5,709 Battle Record: Faggot-1 Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2 Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2 - was candidate for gerber baby 3x - smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote" - smush beer on head and didn't cry - parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once - when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan - won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a - neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper - set neighbor house on fire lmao - fuck neighbor husband and wife - first fish caught resembled david ortiz - colin kaepernick - related to genghis khan - elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club - never lost game of hide and seek Rep Power: 8599682	Funny. I said entombed twice today, and almost wrote it in something I was writing. I usually pass of a satirical comment that you may or may not notice. Though, you probably do. You are one of the few that typically writes a longer verse and longer lines. Which is exceptional as well. The third 'paragraph' was my favorite. Such simple imagery, but you spoke through metaphors and unrefined thought. aware/guard duty was such a off kilter thing, that it actually helped the simplicity of the imagery and amplified other areas, such as the realization of the readers possible thought in the identifying following lines. No problem with rhyming indeed. I kinda wish you had a generalized quotable set of artillery. You'd just be too good, then.