Japanese Whiskey - Page 2

Orc · 05-20-2018, 12:17 PM

Read it a couple of times and feel it deserves a comment. Content was slick and fun. Phrasing was on point. Was enjoyable to say the least. You've been consistently dropping good stuff, it's refreshing.

Pharaohs Army · 06-09-2018, 12:38 AM

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Originally Posted by ACTIVATE SELF

In the middle of the trap with a mattress that's on flat
Gettin action from an actress that so happens to be fat!

I felt like this closer was kinda forced and lame.

But props; as a whole I enjoyed this and the rest of it was a well-executed braggadocio-type verse.

05-20-2018, 12:17 PM	#21
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