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This was lmfao. Awesome

I kid I kid lol

Dope. I always catch your flow cos I've heard you spit before.
I would of maybe switched the "future a text" to future self a text"
The gas line had s type though I'm assuming it's " I could use it on the gas" or "I could use one for the gas"
But like I said I enjoyed it, butter flow, cool references.

Yooooooooo, I dig that suggestion. I would legit add it but it wouldn't feel right given I didn't think of it myself. Good lookin out on that typo too. Glad you dug it, fam.

"I'm not suitable in suits unless I'm suiting up for death"

jjeeaaahh!

Your a funny nigga...

shit fiyah

people sleeping

i'm all about hibiki when i can afford it. shit is extortion though.

this was dope.

rhythmic, self-effacing, self-important humour. nice blend.

Thank you kindly, gents. Appreciate the read/feed.

Best of the pieces I've read from you. Funny, witty. Enjoyable read. Smooth.

Cause a corner office view is less beautiful when stressed..
I'm not suitable for suits unless I'm suiting up for death...REAL dope.

In the backseat of an uber with a floozie and a flask...LOL

The flow of this is nasty. Love me a sick flow..and the content was good to match it. Lots of LOL in there. Good stuff

Thank you

Dope

Man that shits hard

Bro you the best I have seen here hands down.


Consistent fire

haaaa, i think this is the first piece I read of yours that wasn’t a topical or imagery piece and just flowing... sick flow, i think the transitional structure was off on the gas line but flawless overall.. had me lol’in

It was alright it wasnt dope it was a piece it was a fucking piece and it coulda been better it was alright it was decent good for you for dropping or some shit...but dont lie to yourself and say that was dope....

Word.

Note to self: don't lie to self.

- SELF

2 Crip da turn up GAWD has spoken

Lol rap is weird man i mean its like life whats the point nobody really knows.... i mean i write shit and i guess follow the format er whatever rhyme a bar come up with a story or a theme er whatever but i dont really get what im actually trying to achieve.... i guess its just a piece of writing er sumn sumn to read at some point when you get a chance dont know.... what do i know.... it just feels like its some sort of challenge is all thats all it is your just challenging yourself to write something good i guess...