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Old 07-27-2015, 07:04 AM   #21
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I got Odd winning here, a couple maybe went over my head like the NFL shit? But that yoga party hit was LOTB for me, closer was fresh too I havent seen that done before. Pretty sure someone used a metal in the mouth/Joker line in the URL Cypher thread recently so I almost had to leave my love for that out, but it was nice enough to hit.

Fraze had the piccolo bar that was a nice wordplay, the shooting craps concept was nice too. The lines over head ish felt stale to me though, rest was either okay or didn't standout for me.

I've got Odd winning this, just better execution of his concepts so even the ones I wasn't feeling as much felt at least original or creative enough to warrant quoting. Close match up!
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Old 07-27-2015, 12:52 PM   #22
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Originally Posted by Odd Ways View Post
-Pray for the Departed

Cred flatlined u harsh, so trust I'm gonna do the same shit
I'll punch his top so hard, when paramedics lift his skull it'll sound like a rain stick
This is decent.
The hood banged ya bitch out, there was no resistin hardly
I saw so many niggas twisted in her sheets, the shit looked like a fuckin toga party
Meh, ok.
Tryna explain ya weak raps, n we're all like damn dude
U used a Greece line so corny, I thought John Travolta would of come n danced through
Lol niceee.
We know he's a hater, the hood says he ain't gettin no paper
Fact: the closest he'll get to a trap King, is catchin dinner every 22 acres
Kinda cool.
This dude is a straight clown, but no worries cuz this tech'll let go
I'll put the metal to this jokers mouth, n give em more exposure than Jared Leto
Ok, not bad.
U act froggy then it's a wrap, u'll be river bound just for actin hard
The way his body'll hit the water, the crime scene'll come w/ olympic judges n scorecards
Ehh, bit of a reach for me.


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edit: meant to post this last night

lost but i got cred last week. sometimes my ‘lines go over heads’.
if this week goes to the wire… i'm choking you after bringing it down around your neck….
Nah, seen this a few times recently and you didn't flip it well enough.
im going for the throat. if you see hawks… better scamper quick…
so fast to give Odd a bull rush with Lynch that I would have won the NFL championship...
Audible? That's a stretch for me.
fraze is hot as sin. shut the fuck up. just nod and grin.
if im at odds with a bitch… ill bust bananas inna face…. now that’s a sloppy cap.a.chin...
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ya bars are kneelin huddled round corners on my old block.
such a crap shoot... so ill keep shooting odds with the 3-4 cause you know i keep the roll hot….
Okkk. 3 is not a number on the board of Craps, only the Field wins on a 3. I won't take any points off for that though. Not bad. I think you could've executed it better though.
im in the field concealed, sniping bitches with aggressive means…
when i get charged up… i’m prone to ‘pick a low position’ then hit you with the special beam...
Idk, not really feeling this one.
fraze or Bust huh?..... easy win’s what you thought, but *syke*
you’ve been robbed... now you can go Destroyer on the boards like him titty fucking his wife...
Ouch...lol. Cool.
Odd, you had a pretty consistent verse and honestly, one of the better ones I've seen from you. Fraze, you had some misses in here that I wasn't feeling. Your closer was nice and harsh, but some of your other lines didn't have the execution IMO. LOTB is a toss up between the Greece line and Destroyer on the boards....but I got Odd here for consistency. Could go either way though.
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