Let's finish each other sentences. Featuring Zombie.

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Honestly felt this was just all over the place... Didn't like the diction and felt ya'll just inserting words really TBh... In better terms the content is overzealous and at times was just a little too much in one section. Also at times the wording could have been chosen better to make it more fluid. The intuitive state of it all was great an I felt this was strong as just a ramble really or flex... The assertation in this was good. The metaphors as well was nice. I loved the bridge line for some reason. The use of diminutive I think down played itself on the cutting part but it was a cool image. Zombie was great with his flow.. A little more clean and fluid than darth but the metaphors was bonkers. The facial expression line was clean... I honestly like both styles and darth I'd prefer to request you to change formatting to make it more easy on the eyes to read fam. The piece as a whole wasn't impressive but you guys shined in the end as individuals no real fluid transitioning from one context to the next from one another