GRRRRRR!

Lars · 07-17-2013, 11:39 AM

It’s lonely at the top, but I’m holding on my spot since nobody’s as polished or as focused on their drops. Show me that I’m not. Prove me wrong by posting what you’ve got or move along, since most of you forgot… I’ve been a beast with it, need a leash fitted, keep the peace but you can see from these teeth I mean business!

Quick key.

Flow · 07-17-2013, 11:42 AM

Quick feed for a quick key

Enjoyed

PancakeBrah · 07-17-2013, 12:13 PM

Expected more complexity from you. Better rhymes.

Geno · 07-17-2013, 08:12 PM

Cool shit. Bring more length next time

Stylish for a quick piece though

CopyPat · 07-18-2013, 01:30 AM

outrageously smooth as shit. like the runny kind with no chunks when u drink too much or eat too much asian food. that kinda smooth shit bruh

love how u used ur own feedback as inspiration for ur next drop lol thats true vet realness right there haha

actually wished u kept the first scheme as the teeth business shit was a little clunky at the end compared to the beginning. so this gets a 5/10, 5/5 for first sentence, 0/5 for last = you not keepin this one hunnit so now ur a damn liar.

p.s. all ur cypher verses were hella tight

Split · 07-18-2013, 01:37 AM

Tight schemes but a really bare bones flex

Idk. Not denying youve got bars, but having read a couple of your other drops, you're not gonna catch me orgasming over this....

Not quite up to the standard thats well out of my arms reach, ironically

You were killin it in Cypher 2013

/ I read this and thought it was good but wasn't satisfied

Darth Yoda · 07-18-2013, 02:30 AM

lmao genocide said 'bring length' next time lol

like you're a prostitute

a male one lol!!!

oh brother! I like

07-17-2013, 11:39 AM	#1
Lars PROVEN BITER Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Wolverhampton Posts: 1,588 Battle Record: 5-0 Champed - The Winter Topical Rep Power: 1809298	GRRRRRR! It’s lonely at the top, but I’m holding on my spot since nobody’s as polished or as focused on their drops. Show me that I’m not. Prove me wrong by posting what you’ve got or move along, since most of you forgot… I’ve been a beast with it, need a leash fitted, keep the peace but you can see from these teeth I mean business! Quick key. __________________ PROVEN BITER

07-17-2013, 08:12 PM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Cool shit. Bring more length next time Stylish for a quick piece though __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

07-18-2013, 01:30 AM	#5
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	outrageously smooth as shit. like the runny kind with no chunks when u drink too much or eat too much asian food. that kinda smooth shit bruh love how u used ur own feedback as inspiration for ur next drop lol thats true vet realness right there haha actually wished u kept the first scheme as the teeth business shit was a little clunky at the end compared to the beginning. so this gets a 5/10, 5/5 for first sentence, 0/5 for last = you not keepin this one hunnit so now ur a damn liar. p.s. all ur cypher verses were hella tight __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

07-18-2013, 01:37 AM	#6
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	Tight schemes but a really bare bones flex Idk. Not denying youve got bars, but having read a couple of your other drops, you're not gonna catch me orgasming over this.... Not quite up to the standard thats well out of my arms reach, ironically You were killin it in Cypher 2013 / I read this and thought it was good but wasn't satisfied __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com Last edited by Split; 07-18-2013 at 01:47 AM.

07-17-2013, 12:13 PM	#3
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	Expected more complexity from you. Better rhymes.

07-18-2013, 02:30 AM	#7
Darth Yoda Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 408 Battle Record: 6-2 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF Rep Power: 20182439	lmao genocide said 'bring length' next time lol like you're a prostitute a male one lol!!! oh brother! I like