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Old 07-17-2013, 09:43 AM   #9
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I wholly agree. Been treading over the same themes and even wording for a while. Duly noted.
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i can never force myself to use the same rhyme twice back to back like you do though

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Knows he's exhausted. Knows he should off him.
shizz like that, i'd never use the 'knows' masculine rhyme twice back-to-back like that, ever

just a personal assholeish limit i put in place for myself

not knocking you for it, just putting it out there since i didnt actually comment about anything in the piece with my last post and wanted you to know i did read it

enjoy or endure!
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