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07-16-2013, 07:43 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2013
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Jockaz (lol) structure was weird as fuck to me. The setup/punchline shit was not normal. Concept wise he had some okay ideas but the wording got in the way or he didn't flip it to it's best use.
Story had some really clunky wording. I wasn't too impressed with the concepts and none of them were flipped cleverly. v/ Jockaz (lol)
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