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07-16-2013, 04:02 PM
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The Playground Bully
Join Date: Jun 2013
Posts: 292
Battle Record: 3-5
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Basic rhyme scheme.
No flavor to it really, you need to work on your flow control. Pronunciation is a must work on. Next time send it to be mixed & mastered. Or at least do it yourself.
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