Write Night I: Storyteller Vs. Pohfig - [POHFIG WINS]

CymbiCort · 07-14-2013, 06:49 PM

V;Pohfig

Felt his flow a little bit more, both were on point with imagery, but being it was a freestyle done real quick, i'ma have to give it to pohfig because his wording felt more polished. Story teller had some nice shit too, but pohfig had some better rhyme schemes which stood out to me for him to take the win.

From the age of kids hiding in digital matrixes
What happened to pick up games of hoops in sun rays
Going out with a girl and sharing a scoop of sundays
Hearing a new song and getting foot loose in one way
Socialisms wont invigor the youth to come play

^^that portion stood out the most to me.

Nice job to both.

07-14-2013, 06:49 PM	#1
CymbiCort Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 184 Battle Record: 4-13 Rep Power: 37	V;Pohfig Felt his flow a little bit more, both were on point with imagery, but being it was a freestyle done real quick, i'ma have to give it to pohfig because his wording felt more polished. Story teller had some nice shit too, but pohfig had some better rhyme schemes which stood out to me for him to take the win. From the age of kids hiding in digital matrixes What happened to pick up games of hoops in sun rays Going out with a girl and sharing a scoop of sundays Hearing a new song and getting foot loose in one way Socialisms wont invigor the youth to come play ^^that portion stood out the most to me. Nice job to both.