cataclysm; massive victims

CopyPat · 07-12-2013, 03:06 PM

well flow and rhyming wise this was obviously really good. you both also meshed together nicely with the same style of verse. brought in some emotion to it aswell so that parts cool. its the topic itself that i really think is pointless tho. i mean writing about killing dudes i just honestly don't get. cause unless u 2 are actually real serial killers moonlighting as text mc's than you're just lying and the whole thing is just way too fake for me. i guess to me there's a difference between writing about actually killing a dude and then writing about killing him with ur rhymes, or with ur words, u know?? Not hating on u guys because i generally enjoy reading both of your work but this one did not do it for me at all

hit me back with some feed if u guys can thanks

07-12-2013, 03:06 PM	#3
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	well flow and rhyming wise this was obviously really good. you both also meshed together nicely with the same style of verse. brought in some emotion to it aswell so that parts cool. its the topic itself that i really think is pointless tho. i mean writing about killing dudes i just honestly don't get. cause unless u 2 are actually real serial killers moonlighting as text mc's than you're just lying and the whole thing is just way too fake for me. i guess to me there's a difference between writing about actually killing a dude and then writing about killing him with ur rhymes, or with ur words, u know?? Not hating on u guys because i generally enjoy reading both of your work but this one did not do it for me at all hit me back with some feed if u guys can thanks